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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sorry, erro in post...😛
Edited by the_rain - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey everyone, here goes the last part of Comedy:Kya? Kab Se!...No, we are not in short of ideas but certainly we are in short of time.......all three of us are so busy this days that it has become impossible to run this FF...😆..you know what I mean nah....😆..so enjoy reading the last one and let me know how did you like it....😉



Part Six

BW: Henna, if u start the car now... I will.. I will.. I will talk to Tony Don about your rishta

H: Rishta! all excited!



JW: yes i will pay for it too.. but please get my mother away from the screen.. she is pullin funny faces at me..

Ma is seen shouting and screamin as the window was slowly rolled up..

Henna started the car.. but Ma's pallu was stuck in the window..


Ma falls in the car...Henna stops the car....JW is worried for Ma....he comes down, "Mummy! Are you ok?"


Ma faints hearing mummy from Jai.....




Meanwhile insided Bhoot Bangla......Raashi is taking care of AD.......




R: Adbhootji uthiye, uthiye na....




AD opens one of his eyes, "I am not going to open my eyes unless you leave my bhoot bangla right now."




Rashi starts to cry again....


Outside....




Bani: Kya kiya? Now no Tony Don for you....




Henna: Hey, what's my fault? I started the car...


Bani & Henna argues...In the meanwhile Tanu comes with a car, grabs Jai and leaves....




Bani is ...


Tanu(as she is superstrong) drags Jai to her room, where we see Tony waiting for her!


Tony: Tony khush hua, tumne bahut accha kiya!


Tanu grins and leaves


Tony: (speaking loudly and meancingly) itne saalon ke kaam kiya hai yahan, magar ab aur nahin. Thode din main Tony hoga is makaan aur WGI ka maalik! Aur mujhe koi nahi rokega!


Another two cats are seen to be entering along with Tanu 😆


Tony: Bristy, Humera, bahut khush hoon main aaj! Bahut jaldi hum sab honge malik aur yeh sab naukar, aur phir main apni mehboba Henna ke saath ek ho jaonga!😉


The cats start to purr and leave..


Tony turns to his side and gives out a evil laff.. muhahahahha!! he sits on a huge chair and stares at Jai from a distance..


Bani is left crying over her fate and she gets out her magnifying glass from her bag and starts to search for clues around the car..


BW: Henna.. you look that side ill look this side,


she said poitnin in the directions.. after several minutes Henna finds a clue (better then Bani bond!😆 )


BW: Good goin! lets follow this trail... After several minutes.. they end up at a house with loads of cats outside........




Henna sighed, "Bani, Bani, Bani...I guess we're searching for Jai Walia..but we reached in Thakral's house.."




A loud meaow is heard from inside.....




Bani & Henna sat on the steps thinking what to do.




Inside, Bristy is all HMPH with all and isn't talking to anyone else......she's only meaowing....


Tony: Hey you stop! It hurts my head.....




(Outside, Henna cluthes her head, "Bani! my head hurts! someone very close to me is in pain.... 😛)


But Bristy continues to meaow....




"MEAOW! MEAOW! MEAOW!"




Tony: STOP!



(outside Henna: Nehi!)




Tanu & Humi are trying to pacify Bristy....




Humi: what do you want hun...?




Tanu: Ok, I'll give you that robot....




Humi: Ok, you don't have to update for a month...rest!




Tanu: Ok, I'll update my FF thrice a day!




Bristy: 😈




Tanu: You 🤢🤬




JW suddenly stands up and screams, "Enough! I won't allow this to happen....let me go...or my superman son will come to save me....




(Outside Bani clutches her head, "Nehi, Henna my head hurts..someone close to me is in pain!)




Humi to Bristy & Tanu: Wha? We don't have any close ones?

Tanu: (with a big sigh): sab kismat ka khel hai...

Bristy and Humi look at Tanu confused..

Meanwhile outside, Henna and Bani have located a hidden door at the back of the house and are trying to break in.

Henna: I have an idea! Bani, why don't you run, at full force towards the door and break it open!

BW: why don't you?? why do i have to hurt myslef?

Henna: Uh.. aggar muhje kuch ho gaya to Tony Don aur meri shaadi kaise hogi??


Bw: And if i injure myself then the money for your so called wedding will be used for my treatment.. achi bachi ke thara maan ja.. please....

Henna sighed and muttered a few negative wrds under her breath.. she took a few steps bk and attacked the door with force..

after several times of tryin the door finally opened..

JW: My super bacha!!!!

All the baddies were alerted and the cats contiued purring..

BW: Bacha?! and she started to walk back the way she came..

JW: Bani? Bani im here!! he shouted with all his might..

Tony not likin the scene got out a cheese roll and stuffed it in Jai's mouth.. 'Be quiet or else ill stuff another roll in your mouth' he threatened..


Bani runs and grabs another cheese roll and bite and makes a face, "Chee Tony! It doesn't half as good as before...you've lost your touch!"




Tony is shocked, hurt and disappointed. He runs and runs straight to WM and enters the kithcen and stats making cheeze rolls, "Huh, I'll show that Bani M'aam that I've not lost my touch....I still make the world's best cheese roll.."




Bani laughs loud and hugs Jai, "Finally I rescued my hero!"


Jai is like.."wish not"




Tanu, Humi, Bristy are sad, all plans to be the maliks went down drain, Henna is sad but in her case its becasue Tony left........




Jai and Bani left hand in hand.....




Henna follows them to WM to find Tony.....


But she gets lost in the middle and Bristy, Tanu & Humi finds her back and they forgot about the crazy FF thing and continued with their regular busy life.


The End!






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Posted: 18 years ago
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It was yesterday only that I was thinking of this wonderful FF of yours.........lucky we had an update but then you decide to end it................. 😭 WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!I know you all must be very busy but pls continue if you can 😛 and yes do introduce Daksh...How can he miss on this one 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta76

It was yesterday only that I was thinking of this wonderful FF of yours.........lucky we had an update but then you decide to end it................. 😭 WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!I know you all must be very busy but pls continue if you can 😛 and yes do introduce Daksh...How can he miss on this one 😆




Thank you dear for the sweet comment....😊


Well, this is a partner's FF and you know we wrote it in a funny way...I used to write 5 lines and PM it to Tanu and she wrote the next 5 lines and PMed it to Henna who did the same and PMed it to me, this way it went in circles....but now, we are hardly online at the same time and can't find common time to even do a little chit chat, that's why...😛...hope you do understand and thanks for being with it and supporting...😊


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Read the last two parts together… They were hilarious… Loved the discussion about JW divorcing Bani….

***Divorce? But divorce file karna to mera kaam hai, you shut up now.....***

That was the ultimate… Divorcing is the patent right of Bani… How can JW do that??? Really how many times Bani said divorce in real KS but never got divorced in real sense….


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandita1209

Read the last two parts together… They were hilarious… Loved the discussion about JW divorcing Bani….

***Divorce? But divorce file karna to mera kaam hai, you shut up now.....***

That was the ultimate… Divorcing is the patent right of Bani… How can JW do that??? Really how many times Bani said divorce in real KS but never got divorced in real sense….






Thank you dear....I'm glad that you liked it...😆😆...yep, giving false alarm for Divorce has become BAni's ultimate right by now...😃


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Posted: 18 years ago
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😭 ill miss it..

was great writin i have to day.. i loved the whole jokey idea 😆 😆 ahh! great times!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yaar how come u know me so well ??? 😆
fisrt when i saw last part i was like how could they 😲 , but then when i read what u wrote, i was like yeah i know they must have no time to handle this , still thhis ff was a fabulous one 👏 👏
It was a different one and really funny one, it really used to entertain me a lot 🤣 🤣
I was in it 🤣 billi meaooowww 😈 😆
Right Bristy rest, u really know me na 😆
Henna and bani arguing 🤣
Jai said Mummy to moti mil 🤣
And Rashi kept annoying adbhoot 🤣

Fantastic ending 👏 👏 👏

Yaar i cant even say continue ASAP how i like to write it
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i will miss this ff for sure 🤣

Lots of love and hugs for the three or you 🤗 🤗 🤗
Humera 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Henna


Yaar, I'll miss it as well....we had so much fun writing it....*sigh**sigh*...but we can't manage anymore nah.....😔....so thought why not just end it....😕


Humi


How could i not know you jaan...after all we are the infamous CPU....😆😆


Thanks jaan....we also enjoyed writing it very much....


Hugs to you as well....😃


Thanks for being with it.....😆😆


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey you Three Musketeers.......

Excellent job....Pulling leg was never so better... 😆 you people didn't leave any chance to pick the infamous, famous, annoying, ridiculous, etc. etc. things from KS to create this wonderful FF. 👏 It was so much fun to read.......sab ulta pulta and rib-tickling! 😆 😆 Please if you people get time, bring on another one...revised edition or new edition 😃

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