MaNan FF ||Our Chance To Love:COMPLETED|| - Page 75

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: OhMeriJaan

Ok this is not how I should start my reply but you don't love me😭 You refused to tell me what you want for your birthday aur toh aur you are eating a lot of bhaav. Humpphh. Phir bhi here goes my comment for your this chapter! Coz I am not like you and coz I LOVED this chapter! ❤️
I AM NOT EATING BHAAV KAY...I AM SACHI NOT EXCITED FOR MY BURDAY ANY MORE🤢

Dude you are making me miss Cabir even more. How I wish he was there in the show too! ManBir were my FAVs after MaNan and shall always be! Cabir's taunts and Manik getting pissed off! Gosh! iMiss! I so loved the ManBir scene! And then! MaNan scene be so effing awesome! Gosh Manik would have just landed up with another punch if he had taken that jealousy game a bit more far!😆 Waise bhi she was planning to punch nah!😆 And then Nandu, our sherni be kicking asses man!😆 That scene was brilliant kay! Haha! And the scene that followed be FAB! You penned it all down so so beautifully! And you had to stop it there You stopped it just like in the promo! Now update it SOON will you! :P

Oh btw dont staap fulfilling your yours and all our wishes in this! Coz you are acing it like a boss! 😎 I am so so loving it! ❤️ And yes Ansh is such a cutie pie! Do we have more of his scenes with Manik and MaNan!? It would be LOVE!

I MISS CABIR TOO..😭

Now tell me you love me if you want isse bhi accha comments! 😛😆 I love you kay! Coz you give such amazing updates! Also coz you are a sweetheart! 🤗 Ab isse zyaada I can't butter you!😆

yEAH MAYBE i LOVE YOU ALSO🤔



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Posted: 10 years ago

PROMO😛


"Shh" Manik told me as he wiped the tears which were coming out of my eyes as I spoke in broken voice.

"And you know what I missed all these years of separation. I missed my mouth on yours, missed my hands around your body...missed being deep inside you."

He was making love to me with his words even though he was barely touching me, and my body came alive. Every inch of mine burned for his touch and my lower body hot and pulsing, my breathing was shallow and rapid. His hand was tangled in my hair, gently tugging my face closer to his and he kissed my forehead.

"Sleep Nandini. You are tired probably."

He said and turned towards the other side so I get distracted and sleep but then his tattoo caught my attention. I caressed his bare back and observed his tattoo closely. It was a devil and there was a star. I had a sudden urge in me to know about it so I clinged to Manik which made him turn towards me. He looked at me with curious eyes and I continued "Manik what is your tattoo about?"

He smiled and told me "It's a devil with in a star, lost in a city. And you know who the devil is and who the star is."

I looked at him confused and nodded my head when he came close to me and told "You are the star and I am the devil."

Edited by Loqi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice promo
Watng fr update
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
hayeee...inna cute promo...tatoo wala...aw...
waiting...
iss baar jaldi update chahiye plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ab promo de diya hai toh update bhi de do...
awesome...
cant wait for nxt update...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hawt promo.
Manik tattoo explanation.
I love it.
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey dear...first of all a biiiggg warm hug from my side for the prologue...i read it countless number of times...to cherish ky2 season 1...i wish U should be the cv of ky2 s2...if U R the cv then this season would be much more better...i liked each and every scene U penned in every update...u penned nandinis feelings during these 5 years very beautifully ...read all parts in one go...im really obsessed with ur writing...im sending U the buddy request plz accept it and send me pm for future updates plz plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome promo...
Waiting for d next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting promo plz continue soon
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice jealous Nandini looking beautiful

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