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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
Sanyu is going to fight
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: howardscarlett

superb

Sanyu is really great, she has guts to fight the mighty

all friends are gone to food counter to celebrate Vidarth's love
Priyali is so vulnerable
Sanyu dealt with that Chetan single handedly,
but he had with him many goons
how will she fight them
excited for the next

as we all commented please give us next update

love u


Ya will for sure😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: don girls

Awesome
Sanyu is going to fight
Update soon

Ya will fr sure😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
CHAPTER 16








Sanyu looked around to find goons armed with hockey sticks, chains, rods, all around her.

"Mujhe paise nhi degi tu ha?" THAP THAP the voice was roaring in the house.

"Main apko paise dungi magar apke ghatiya harkato k liye nhi" n again THAP.

"Plz don't do like this... aisa mat kijye plz"

But she was pushed away as a result falling on floor.

Sanyu closed her eyes as a tear drop escaped her eyes. She took a long breathe inside n opened her eyes.

Goon1-"u want to fight still now?"

Goon2-"its better u go back n give us that girl (pointing towards priyali) n we will not harm u or ur friends"

S-"I'm not gonna give u priyali back neither m I gonna backout. N about keeping myself safe then think about ur safety first."

Goon3-"aye foolish girl u think u can win over us?"

S-"not always you boys can suppress us. Today I will show u something different." She said with some aggression.

The goon marched towards her with a hockey stick. Sanyu kept stamding in the way n in the last moment she backed out as a result of which the goon lost his balance n fell on other goon.

Till now a crowd was standing there looking at them but nobody dared to intervene them,whereas her friends were tied with her vow.

S-"haha h will beat me. Sirf sandh jaisi body banane se nhi hota. Mr. Bull" she laughed at them.

Now 2-3 goons together marched at her. They just raused there weopens to beat Sanyu but Sanyu taking advantage of the situation bent down n slided away. Thus escaping there second attempt.

"SANYU" shouted Rd.

She looked back only to find a goon behind her. She just escaped his attempt.

Yo-"oji how will Sanyu manage all alone"

Sanyu was looking here n there n found few rods on the other side of road.

S(whistled)-"what happened?? Darr gye" she drew their attention towards her.

Goon1-"YOU !!!!" He gritted his teath angrily n ran towards her.
Sanyu just bent down n rolled easily n passed towards other side of the road.

Sahil-"wah Sanyu good going."

Sanyu soon grabbed one of those rods.

She was smiling victoriously as if she got a golden medal.

She turned around only to find Piya,Arushi n Vidushi standing there n smiling at her.

Parth-"arre when did these girls got there"

Arush-"but Sanyu ne toh mana kiya tha"

Arav-"bhool gya ye ladkiyan shuru se ek taraff hai."

Piya-"what ha? Will u hv fun all alone" she winked.

Arushi-"lets show them the power of soul-sisters"

Vidushi-"Go Girl!" She forwarded her hand.

"Go Girl" the girls shouted.

Sanyu looked at the goons n shouted n smirked-"cum now."

The goons came all together towards them.

The girls took one side each.

S-"ready babes?"

Piya-"all ready"

Arushi-"Sanyu aaj poori bhadash nikal de"

The goons attacked at them n the girls started escaping.

The goon attacked Piya, she bent down twirled around n hit the goon on the back of his neck.

Arush-"baap re" he held his own neck.

Sahil-"she has beat that goon n not u so leave ur neck idiot"

Arushi-"bhaiya aap mujhe maroge?"

Goon4-"tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai main tumhe chod dunga?"

Arushi-"kyuki maine aapko bhaiya bola hai. Ek bhai hokar behen ko maroge?"

Goon4-"we don't have any relation"

Arushi-"par phir bhi..." she was moving around while talkin to him. She suddenly took the goons head n smashed it into a cars front mirror.

Arushi-"I also don't need a bhai. We sisters are enough." She said in a different attitude.

Arav-"oh shit." He held his head

They heard a voice.

Goon5-"oye ye kya kar rhi ho? Pagla gyi h kya?"

They saw Vidushi standing,jumping n dancing there infront of that Goon.

Vidushi-"marr diya marr diya"

Parth-"ye vidushi kya kar rhi hai?"

Goon6-"oye u have not beat any of us till now. U idiot!"

Vidushi-"aisa kya??" She pouted, "toh ye lo" n she simply gave a tight blow on goons head.

Vidushi-"ab toh nach lu main? Marr diya marr diya"

Yoyo-"o teri!!"

Sahil-"bhai soch le vidushi se jhagda toh kya hoga?"

Parth gulped his saliva-"I will have to be alert n calm with her"

There our Sanyu was surrounded by 4-5 goons. One of them hit Sanyu straight on her head.

Rd-"shit Sanyukta" he was about to go n help her when Arus caught his hand.

Arus-"stop bro. Do u still think she needs ur help?" He smiled n signalled at her.

They turned to find Sanyu beating the shit out of the goons. Soon the police arrived in white.

Police-"shobai shoro... shoro... ki hoche ekhane?" (Move everyone move... what is happening here?)

Police-"apni thik ache boudi?"(are u fine sister) He asked Sanyu,Piya,Vidushi n Arushi.

S-"hain. Sir enake dhorun. Eyi chele ta ae meye ke manhandle ebom harass kor chito (yes sir. Plz arrest them. This man was harassing n manhandling this girl)"

The Police inspector looked at Chetan

Police-"ma'am are u sure u want to file a case against him as he is..."

"A MLA's son. I know. But that does not give him a right to dis-respect women. I am gonna file the case" Sanyu said confidently.

Police-"fine plz come with me to the poloce station"

Yoyo & Sahil-"we will come with u"

The Inspector took the goons n Chetan along with him.

Chetan-"now forget ur house" he said to priyali while sitting in the jeep.

Priyali-"thank you for helping me so much but now I have lost my shelter. Now I am responsible for bringing my family at footpath. How will I face my mother n sisters now" she was crying.

S-"u don't have to worry. Come with me"

Rd-"but Sanyu lets go to hospital first u r head is bleeding"

S-"I'm fine Rd(she showed him her palm). Lets go" with this the DT sat in car.

P-"but jana kaha h?"

S-"drive as I say"

After ride of half an hour the car halted infront of a bunglow, the board read, BUDDING RELATIONS.

Sanyu got down the car n opened the gates while the others followed her.

They had just took a few steps when a girl of 5 came running, "Sanyu di Sanyu di"

Sanyu bent down n hugged the girl. She took her in her arms n twirled around.

Girl-"didi abhi toh 5 nhi baje h. Toh aap abhi kaise aaye?"

S-"kyu meri gudiya ko acha nhi laga main aayi. Thik hai main jati hu" she pouted n pretended to get upset.

Girl-"nhi didi. Aap na mat jao. Apko pata hai aaj chotu ne mujhe mara. Haww didi apke bhi head se blood nikal rha h apko bhi chotu ne mara?"

Sahil-"arre isse kaun marega. Ye toh khud gundo ko marr ke aayi h"

Girl-"ha meri Sanyu di strong hai. Bad uncles ko marti bhi h ye(clapping). But aap kaun ho?" Scratching her head.

"Avni kisse baat kar rhi h? Oh Sanyu tum ho"

"Hi" n she hugged a boy of her age.

"How come here at this time?"

S-"ek new member layi hu hmari family mei"
She turned around

S-"guys this is Sanam n Sanam these r my friends" n she introduced everyone n narrated him about priyali n her mother n sisters.

Sanam-"Wah my Fighter wah. Wait pehle lemme bring first aid kit for u" saying so he went from there along with avni

Rd-"ye Sanam?"

S-"oh ye... ye yaha pe volunteer hai. Actually ye jagah orphans n helpless girls k liye h. We educate them. If they are homeless thwy get home here. Yaha pe zyada volunteers nhi h. Bus me n Sanam. Main daily shaam ko inn bacho ko padhane aati hu"

Piya-"oh toh madam daily yaha aati h. Ye h tera secret mission ha?"

Arushi-"this is not fair yaar tu akele sab acha kaam kaise kar skti h?"

Vids-"ha yaar"

Rd-"koi na but aaj se hum bhi hai."

Till then Sanam returned along with kids n few girls.

S-"so guys this is my family"

The Dream team chatted n got along well with each other. Priyali too got settled n her family was also called.

"Didi aaj yahi ruko na plz" chipped one of the child.

S-"ohk"

DT-"tab toh we will also stay back with our new friend"

"Yeee" the kids shouted

PRECAP:- SOME MASTII WITH KIDS N SANDHIR CONVERSATION






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Edited by vrinda65 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unress

superb update
Sanyu the super girl

Girls rocked and boys shocked

Sanyu's secret mission is very good
she is helping orphans and helpless girls
best social cause

all the DT wants to help

the story is progressing well
it had all the right elements

thanks for the PM

Love u
Edited by howardscarlett - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update vrinds😃
loved the bonding between them😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsme update
Lover it

Wow sanyu us awsme
Girls ne kya band bjaya goons k
Boys were so shocked


I don't think that jerk will keep quite

Awww sanyu is superb
So this was her secret

She's is really an amzng person

Excited for next
Update soon


Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow..just read chappy 16...amazing😃
kya maza chakhya ladkiyon ne😆😆😆
maze aa gaye😊
mast update tha vrinda😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow sanyu was awsome woh toh ladybheem nikli but she was such a sweet heart running orphnage for girls..
Amazing update yaar...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: howardscarlett

res

unress

superb update
Sanyu the super girl

Girls rocked and boys shocked

Sanyu's secret mission is very good
she is helping orphans and helpless girls
best social cause

all the DT wants to help

the story is progressing well
it had all the right elements

thanks for the PM

Love u


Awww thnx for such a sweet comment😳😳😳

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