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Originally posted by: enhance

It's amazing that you can write a FF with so many assignments to do.😲

Thanks for another spoiler. I enjoy reading them, makes me excited even more for the next chapters!

I know there's a warning for the next chapter, but I am still going to try and read it. I want to understand what Zoya went through.

Glad AsYa's marriage wala chapter will be a happy one.😃

Take care Mani Bhai.

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Hmm... I feel dead sad if I don't write FF.. 😆 Assignments to hote rehte hain.. 😉

Haha, but sis woh wala spoiler Chapter 11 ka tha..😃

Hmm... As you wish.. Punch me if you cry and get sad reading.. Lol! I don't want my sweetest sis to get sad.. Because I will feel bad about it.. As a bro I must keep you happy.. Right? 😛

AsYa marriage will be good one.. Still emotions attached as a girl she will be leaving her family but new family is awaiting to hug her as a daughter. And Asad Ahmed Khan is there to keep amuse her..

🤗you too Little Behna, take care...

Take care Mani Bhai

Originally posted by: enhance

😆

o acha, 11 chapter.. usko toh kaafi time hai.. so how many chapters did you plan for this FF or it's undecided for now...

Lol... woh toh parne ke baad decide karoongi.. nah, i can't punch my bro.. 😆

yes, you must keep me happy! just joking.. 😆

Dulhe ka sehra suhana lagta hai, dulhan ka dil toh dewana lagta hai #AsYaMarriage

Take care Mani Bhai

Originally posted by: -simmi-

First of all u got a very lovely name Emen 😳

I'll call u Emy hows it?? 😉
First chappy awesome yar
Hehe good move asad 🤣
She herself said chhod do toh kya krta bechara 😆
Oh zoya has two brothers faaz and maaz well faaz is like my dad he keep calling me till i reach him 😆
And wow yar ur urdu 👏
Oye hoyye maaz is in love and zoe hate the word "love"


Zoya is a typical sis ransoming her brother 🤣
Lovely update emy 😳

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

😆 Yup bohot time hai.. 😆 Hmm, planned 15 hain + (epilogue and extrashots additional), I have energy only for 7-8, but want to write more than 15 because of the readers support! 😆 my most successful FF so far.. 😳

All the best in completing this FF. It really has all the flavors needed to make a story fulfilling. Way to go Mani Bhai! 👏

hahaha, arre story hain samajh ke smile karlena even if you cry, nothing serious about it... ok, but please agar punch karne ka mann kiya to nose pe mat karna, its my mummy's favorite, cute little monster ki nose hai na isiliye! 🤣

aap apne naak ki ache se hifazat karna... ... we will build a strong shield to cover your nose before releasing chapter 5🤣

Haha, of course meri Little Behna ko happy rakhna to mera farz hai.. after all your comments are so cute! 😳

Thank you Mani Bhai!!!⭐️

wow, exactly !

DITTO! 😆😃

Take care little behna god bless you! 🤗

Take care Bhai, God bless you!

Originally posted by: enhance

Wow Mani Bhai,

So much grief is written in the poetry.

Written with great fluency!👏

Bheetein lamhoon ki hifazaat karna,

Hum tumme yaad ayegein, magar lauteinge nahin

😃