YEH JAWAANI HAIN DEEWAANI-SwaSan FF-Final Update Pg 110 - Page 45

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Naina what an update 👏
Truly enjoyed the SwaSan moments ❤️ They are adorable 😳 Ragya were also cute.
Now Chirag's entry. Kuch to hone wala hai i guess. Everything is going smoothly right now, so he might create some troubles in their lives 😒
Update soon 😳

you guessed it right😃
bahut kuch hone waala hain😉
i am glad that u loved the romance😳
thank u sooo much preet🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update naina
SwaSan scenes were so good...as usual
Ragya moments were also nice
Who is this chirag😕i know she is mrs nanda's grandson but dont let him come between swasan
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Nice update naina

SwaSan scenes were so good...as usual
Ragya moments were also nice
Who is this chirag😕i know she is mrs nanda's grandson but dont let him come between swasan
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon


Thank you soo much sonu🤗
Chirag was the villain in serial Meri aashiqui tumse hi..😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 12

Ra:Par kahan hain woh ladka..?Handsome hain kya..?
Sa:Huh..??...Lakshya ko bataa doon kya..?
Sw:Haan..Bolo na Sanskaar..Handsome ladka hain..?
Sa:(shocked)Swara..Tum bhi..?!!
Ra:(giggles)Sanskaar...There is no need to make a shocked face like that..Tum aur Lakshya bhi kuch kam nahin ho..We have seen both of you ogling at hot and beautiful girls..
Sw:(giggles and gives a high five to Ragini)
Sa:(didn't know what to say)Tum donon bhi na..!!
Swara and Ragini laughed even more when they saw his embarrased expression...
It was 12.50 p.m and Sanskaar,Swara and Ragini came downstairs for having lunch. Sanskaar saw Chirag, who was sitting at the table alone. They went and sat at the table; Sanskaar sat beside Chirag.

Sa:Hello Chirag...Aunty kahan hain..?
Ch:Dadi abhi aayengi..Yeh sab kaun hain Sanskaar..?
He gazed at the girls and smiled.
Sa:Yeh Swara hain..Aur yeh Ragini...
Sw&Ra:(smiles)Hii Chirag..
Ch:Hii girls..(smiles)
He suddenly nudged Sanskaar and whispered in his ear...
Ch:(whispers)Hey man..Tum toh bade lucky ho..! 2 hot babes staying here..( and then laughs audibly)
Sa:(didn't know what to say)Err..Haaan..(nods and laughs)
Sw:(frowning)Kya khusar phusar chal rahi hain wahan pe...?
Ra:(frowns)Haan..Sanskaar..Bolo..
Sa:Woh...
Just then Mrs.Nanda came and everyone except Chirag kept quiet...
Ch:Arre..Tum log aise chup kyun ho gaye..?Baatein karo na..
Am:(seriously)Beta..Khana khate waqt baatein nahin karte..
Ch:Dadi..Aap kya in sabko darraake rakhi hain..?Dekho na sabke sab kaise serious ho gaye..(laughs)
Am:(seriously)Chirag...
Ch:Ok...(keeps his finger on his lips)Shhh...(shakes his head laughing)
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It was evening and Swara lazily strolled into the back yard. She was wearing a white lucknowi embroidered kurta and jeans.
She was humming her favourite song and was in a very good mood. Suddenly she thought about Sanskaar and decided that she will call him too, for an evening walk along the apple orchard.
Just as she turned to go, suddenly it began to rain. She was so delighted and she began to dance in the heavy rain. She twirled around and began to dance happily in the rain. Her clothes were fully wet and she was unaware of the fact that her kurta was clinging to her body. Her innerwear was clearly visible through her white coloured kurta.
Meanwhile, Sanskaar was in his room. He felt bored after working on his laptop all afternoon. So he decided to go to Chirag's room (which was downstairs, just near to Sanskaar's room) to chat with him. When he reached in front of his room, the door was open and so he walked inside. He saw Chirag standing near the window and looking outside, watching the rain.
Sanskaar decided to scare and shock him and so he slowly walked towards him without making any noise. When he neared Chirag he could see out of the window and he was shocked to see what Chirag was looking at.
Chirag was hungrily staring at Swara, who was all wet and dancing around madly in the rain. Sanskaar wanted to yell at Swara for being so unaware of herself. But he controlled his anger and swiftly walked out of the room. Chirag, who was fully immersed in enjoying Swara's rain dance didn't even realize Sanskaar's coming and going.
Sanskaar went to his room, took out a towel from his wardrobe and ran outside, through the back door. He didn't even look at Chirag's window and ran directly towards Swara, through the falling rain.
Sa:Swaraaa..
Sw:(turns around laughing) Sanskaar..Aao na..Dance karte hain..
Chirag was startled by Sanskaar's sudden entry and he was watching them rather intently. Sanskaar could see him staring at them, through the corner of his eyes and he was fuming with anger. He held out the towel to Swara.
Sa:(shaking with anger, but controls himself and makes his voice calm, but serious)Swaraa..Yeh towel lo aur jaldi se andar aajaao...
Sw:(pouts)Kya Sanskaar..?Itna acha mausam hain..Bheegne do na..(swirls around)
Sa:(voice raised)Swaraaa..Zidd mat karo...You will catch cold..
Sw:(whines)Sanskaaar..
Sa:(shouts loudly)TUMNE SUNAAA MAINE KYA KAHAA..?
Swara was shocked and stopped dancing abruptly. Sanskaar put the towel around her shoulders and wrapped herself, so that he could protect her body from the prying eyes of Chirag.
Swara was surprised to see him wrapping the towel around her shoulder and not around her head. After all, he had told her that she will catch cold. Sanskaar caught hold of her hand and started walking, towards the house.
As he led her towards the back door, she was wondering what was wrong with him. They reached inside and Sanskaar took her towards his room. He could see Chirag looking at them from his open room, through the corner of his eyes
Sanskaar didn't look towards Chirag's room since he didn't want Chirag to know that he had seen him watching Swara's rain dance. He led her inside his own room and closed the door. He left her and went to his wardrobe. Swara didn't understand why Sanskaar was so angry with her and why he wasn't even talking to her. As she watched him, he took yet another towel from his wardrobe and handed it to her.
Sa: Yeh lo..aur apne baal ponchlo..
Swara took the towel and dried her hair silently, while Sanskaar watched her, fuming with anger.
Sa:Tumhe baarish mein bheegne ki kya zaroorat thi..?
Sw:(innocent tone)Bahut mazaa aa raha tha...Is liye..(then frowns)Par tumhe kya hua..?Kyun mujhpe aise chillaa raha tha..?
Sanskaar simply looked at her. He realized that there was no need to be so angry with her. So he took a deep breath tried to soften his tone.
Sa:Tum jaan na chahti ho, Swara..ki maine aisa kyun kiya..?
Sw:(nods her head innocently)Haan..
He pulled her hand and moved her to the front of the mirror..He took off the towel around her shoulder..
Sa: Look at yourself Swara..Look at your wet Kurta...
Swara was shocked to see her own reflection in the mirror, and her inner wear was clearly visible.
Sa:Aur pata hain Swara, woh Chirag tumhe kis nazron se tumhe ghoor raha tha..?(in an annoyed tone)Tumhara toh pata nahin Swara..Par mujhe bahut sharam aa raha tha..
Swara looked down, unable to face Sanskaar, and tears began to fill her eyes thinking about her own foolishness.
Sa:(holding her shoulders and shaking her, )Issi liye maine aisa kiya..!..Do you understand..?
Swara started to weep.
Sw:Sanskaar..I am sorry..I didn't know...
Sanskaar felt really bad seeing her crying and so he held her shoulders with both hands.
Sa:(soft tone)Its ok Swara..Don't cry...
Then he cupped her face with both hands and made her face him..Then he kissed away her tears from both cheeks..She looked into his eyes, possesively.
Sa: Tum meri ho, Swaraa..Sirf meri..Kisi bhi ladka tumhe aise dekhe main kaise bardaaasht kar sakta hoon..?
Swara hugged him tightly...
Sw: I know..I am sorry, Sanskaar..
Sanskaar also hugged her with all his love. Then,
Sa:Ab jaao..Jaake dress change karo...
Sw:O.k...I will come now..
Swara went out of the room, covering her body with Sanskaar's towel and walked up the stairs. Sanskaar remained in his room because he didn't want to meet Chirag after that.
When Swara came out of her room after changing her dress she saw Chirag coming upstairs. He smiled at her and Swara felt embarrassed and awkward. She walked downstairs, trying to avoid him.
Ch:(smiles)Arre Arre..where are you going Swara..? I was coming up to see you only..
Sw:(surprised)Err...why...?
Ch:Aao..(climbs upstairs)
Swara hesitantly followed him and they reached in front of her room.
Ch: Toh yeh tumhari room hain..(looks at her)
Sw: (gently) Haan..
Ch:Apni room nahin dikhaaogi mujhe..?(smiles)
Swara was feeling it awkward to be with Chirag, since she remembered what Sanskaar had seen. But she couldn't behave unfriendly with Chirag, since he was Mrs. Nanda's grandson.
Sw: Sure...Come in..
And she opened the door and led him inside. He looked around the room.
Ch:Nice room..!!(smiles at her)
Sw:Thank you...
He walked towards the bed and sat there. Swara didn't like his carefree manner.
Sw:Err...Ab baahar chale..?
Ch:Kya Swara...?Tum bhi baithon na..Baatein karte hain..
Sw:Err...Phir kabhi...Woh kya hain na Chirag..Mujhe neeche jaana hain...
Ch:Oh..Come on Swara..(gets up and pulls her hand and makes her sit down)
Swara was astonished by his behaviour. Still she didn't say anything and just sat there. She began to feel nervous now. Chirag was eyeing her with interest.
Ch:(looking into her eyes)Swara...Waise ek baat bataaoon..Tum dance bahut acha kar leti ho..
Sw:Dance..?(but she knew what he was talking about)
Ch:(looking into her eyes passionately)Haan..Tum baarish mein dance kar rahi thi na..I liked it..(winks)
Sw: Oh!!
Ch:..And I must say.. ki tum bahut sexy lag rahi thi...in those wet clothes..you know..(smiles wickedly)
Swara couldn't stand him any longer. She stood up.
Sw:Err...I think humein neeche chalna chahiye...(and turns to go)
Ch:(stands up)Ok...Chalo..
Swara walked down the stairs and he followed her. Just as she reached at the bottom of the stairs she opened Sanskaar's room and walked inside.
Sa:Swaraa..(smiles)
Chirag followed her and came inside too. Sanskaar's face turned red as he saw him.
Ch:Hii Sanskaar...Wassup dude..?(smiling)
Sa: Chirag...
Sanskaar looked at Swara. He noticed the nervousness in her face. He guessed the reason too.
Sa: Waise Swaraa...Tumhe Ragini ke saath kahin baahar jaana tha na..She was searching for you..
Sw:Haan..Main usse jaake milti hoon..Bye boys..
Ch:(watching her go)Bye Swaraaa..
Swara was relieved that Sanskaar understood her condition and helped her escape from Chirag. She went out of the room and went upstairs to meet Ragini.
Chirag went and sat down on Sanskaar's bed. Sanskaar was not all interested in talking with him.
Ch:So what were you doing, Sanskaar..?
Sa: I was doing some office work...
After thinking for a moment, he asked.
Ch:Tum aur Swara kaafi close friends hain kya..?
Sa:(looks into his eyes sharply)Haan..We are really close..
Ch:Aur woh doosri ladki...Ragini..
Sa: (sternly smiles)We are also really close friends..
Ch:Wow man..!!You are really lucky..(claps Sanskaar's shoulder playfully)Both are really hot..Especially Swara...(winks and smiles wickedly)
Sanskaar's blood was boiling now..
Sa: (serious tone)Chiraaag...Swara and Ragini are really good girls, from nice families...So please don't talk about them like this..
Ch:(surprised)Arre Sanskaar..(laughs)Don't misunderstand me, dude..I was just saying..well...leave it..Let's talk about something else..
Sa: (stern smile)O.k..
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Meanwhile in Ragini's room, Swara had told everything to Ragini...
Ra:Chee..Chirag kitna ganda ladka nikla..
Sw:Ragini..I am not liking him at all..
Ra:Did you tell Sanskaar about what that Chirag told you..?
Sw:No..Chirag also came with me to Sanskaar's room na..
Ra:Oh..Anyways Swara..Lets go somewhere now..Nahin toh uss Chirag ko shakk hojayega..
Sw:Haan..Chalo..
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Swara and Ragini came back by 7.30 p.m as they didn't want to be late for dinner. They went towards Sanskaar's room and he was standing at the window looking outside.
Ra:Sanskaar...
Sa:(turns)Arre..Ragini..(smiles)
Sw:Sanskaar..We just went for an evening walk..It was really nice..(smiles)
Sa: Hmm..Tum log baitho..(sits on the bed)Chirag and Mrs.Nanda went out for some dinner party..So they won't be here till 10 o clock..(smiles)
Ra:Thank God!! We will have a jolly good dinner today without them..
Sw:Haan..(smiles)
Ra:Aur pata hain Sanskaar, ki woh Chirag Swara se kya kaha tha..?
Swara told him about the incident. Sanskaar was really angry after hearing the full story.
Sa:(angrily)Usne aise kaha tumse..How dare he..?!I will teach him a lesson..
Sw:(pleads)No Sanskaar..Please don't get into problems..
Ra:Swara teek keh rahi hain Sanskaar..We are staying here are paying guests..Please don't forget that.. And he is Mrs. Nanda's grandson..
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During the dinner Swara noticed that Sanskaar was really upset. Eventhough he joined in their cheerful talks, something was wrong with him and Swara knew the reason. After their dinner, Swara, Sanskaar and Ragini went to watch the t.v. After watching t.v for sometime, Sanskaar got up from the couch.
Sa:I am going to sleep..Goodnight...
Swara looked at him..He didn't look at her...
Ra:Kya Sanskaar..Thode der aur baitho na..Its a nice film...
Sa:Tum log dekho na..I am going..(and he went off)
Swara looked at Ragini..
Sw:Ragini...
Ra:I know Swara...Tum uske paas jaao..
Sw:Ok..Goodnight Ragini...
Ra:Goodnight...
Swara reached his room and walked inside, after closing the door. He was standing at the window again, looking out in deep thought. Swara closed the door slowly and walked towards him. She hugged him from behind. Sanskaar didn't respond.
Sw:Sanskaar..
Sa: Hmm...
Sw:(in a soft tone)Idhar dekho..
Sanskaar turned to look at her.
Sw:(softly)Kya hua Sanskaar..?
Sa: (bad mood) Kuch nahin Swara..Main bas woh Chirag ke baare mein soch raha tha..
Swara hugged him gently and rested her head on his chest. Sanskaar felt relaxed and he hugged her back. She kissed his chest and he kissed on top of her head.
Sw:Don't worry Sanskaar...Everything will be alright...He will be here only for some days..
Sa: Par Swara...Agar woh tumhare saath kuch galat...
Sanskaar couldn't complete his sentence. Swara raised her head and looked into his concerned face.
Sw: Kuch nahin hoga mujhe..Tum ho na mere saath..
Swara's eyes shone with admiration. As Sanskaar gazed into her eyes, he felt a strange posessiveness. He hugged her again, this time more tightly and possesively. The embrace was turning on the flames of passion inside their bodies. Swara gasped and looked up at him. She was amazed at the transformation in Sanskaar's expression. His face was burning with desire and his eyes looked at her as if intoxicated. Bending his face closer, he kissed her cheeks one by one. Swara's grip tightened around him and she closed her eyes feeling blissful. He withdrew his lips and surveyed her gorgeous face. He kissed her closed eyelids one by one and then his gaze fell on her lips which were parted slightly. His lips found her lips and began to kiss her passionately.
Swara could feel high voltage current coursing through their bodies and her hands roamed behind his neck and his head, clutching his hair. Sanskaar cupped her tiny face with his huge palms and kept rubbing his thumbs along her cheeks. His mouth ravished her soft lips and his stubble grazed her chin. But she didn't mind. All that mattered to her was that he loved her as much as she loved him.
The kiss lasted for a few minutes and they stopped it when they realized that they couldn't breathe any more. Sanskaar withdrew his lips from hers and he bent his forehead and touched it on to her forehead as they took deep breaths with eyes closed.
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End of PART 12
Hope you enjoyed the update..
I am waiting for your comments
Love,
Naina

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Posted: 10 years ago
Mujhe laga hi ke yeh Chirag aisa hi niklega...! Chippad
He is such a creep I hope he stays away from both the girls warna Sanskaar aur Lakshya dono milke usse theek karenge... nice one Naina...
Edited by manasie23 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I knew this guy was a creep. Shakal se hi niyat kharab lagti hai.:(
Anyway..Swara's masti..and its side effects. actually re..we girls want to wear what we want and do what we want...but people see it in so many rubbish ways..that its difficult to protect ourselves.:((

I loved Sanskaar's protectiveness..and his way of explaining to swara.

and i loved the intimacy at the end. Chalo isko haq hain.; P

Love--
medha.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh no I really don't like Chirag 😡
Kindly take him out of this story. 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
So I was ryt...about jealousy track but chirag wud be that kind of a guy Iddidn't expect... Nice understanding btwn swasan cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I knew it ki Chirag kuch na kuch gadbad karega 😕
But jab tak Sanskar hai Swara ko koi darr nahi hai 😳
SwaSan moments were adorable
Continue soon Naina 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Story me villan ka entry.. 😡
no problem our Sanskar is their to take care of swara
Intresting story ..

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