Ishra ss-mann bawraa pt 7 on pg 126 updt on Dec 20 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN

VN r u updating dis one?





Very soon nidu
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Will update soon nidu
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Author's note- hi guys finally I am starting this story,sorry for being so late in updating this.but der aaye durust aaye.here is the part 1,hope u like it.

PART 1

When Raman entered the railway station train was annouced that its standing on the platform ready to leave the station.without thinking for a second he ran and board into the train as he know well if he wait for another train someone may recognise him and he don't want the same.he want to be free as bird for this short span of time.

He get into the ac boggie and start searching for a vacant seat but every seat was occupied and moreover he wasn't interested in sitting with any old couple or any stupid fellow. He was searching for some awesome company when his eyes fell on a girl in pink salwar suit.her face was hidden behind the magazine she was reading.only he can see her milky hands .

Raman- wow kya bandi hai. Agar safar mein uska saath mil jaaye toh maza aa jaaye.and moreover she is sitting alone.try karne mein kya jaata hai.

He went to the girl and said making a stern face- what the hell is this.don't u have any manners. How can u sit on someone else seat.its my berth madam.hato yahan se.he said waiting for her to remove the magazine so that he can see his companion for the rest of the journey.

Ishita- (st)who is this man,shouting like anything.asur kahin jaa.let me show him who am I.he can't treat me like this.thinking so she removed her magazine showing her face to him.

He was go on saying something to her when she removed her magazine and sit properly on the berth folding her legs and was glaring at him while he was mesmerized seeing her face.she was a beautiful girl with sharp features,she has applied kohl to her big brown eyes with a light shade of lipstick with a black bindi.but the thing which attracted him most was her nosering,which was making her more cute and adorable.

Ishita- aapki problem kya hai Mr.why u r screaming on top of ur voice standing over my head.what u want.

Raman who was still lost in her didn't answer her back,but was just looking at her beautiful face.

Ishita- I am asking something Mr.asur.

Raman who was lost in her got back his senses hearing Mr asur from her.he make a stern face and said- this seat belongs to me u nakchaddi chuhiya.

Ishita- how dare u call me that.she said standing and poking her finger in his chest .

Raman- and how dare u call me devil.

Ishita- not devil,I called u asur.that's what u r .shouting at me for no reason.and as much I knew this seat belongs to some raj malhotra.r u raj.lagte toh nahi.

Raman thought for a minute and said- of course I am raj malhotra and what do u mean by lagta toh nahi hoon.

Ishita- tumhe pata hai raj malhotra kaun hai.

Raman thought she personally know him but asked- who.

Ishita- srk of ddlj.tum kahin se bhi srk nahi lagte.

Raman smiled at her cuteness and said- of course main srk lagta hoon.see my cute dimples.he said flaunting his every charming dimples.

Ishita saw this but still not convinced.

Ishita- achcha show me ur id.

Raman- tumhe kyun dikhaun.tum t.t ho.badi aayi id dikhao wali.chalo khisko.I too wanna sit.

They were fighting when an old woman get up from her seat and said- please stop it beta.is tarah apni biwi se padhna achchi.

Ishra- biwi??they said in unison.

Raman- oh please aunty,aapko lagta jai ki mujh jaisa handsome banda uska pati hoga.

Ishita- please aunty,aisa pati ho toh main pray karungi ki koi raavan mujhe utha ke le jaaye.kam se kam iss asur se toh bachungi.

Raman- I am 100% sure ki raavan bhi tumhe apology letter ke saath chod jayega.now shift.he was saying when he saw the t.t was coming to check ticket.

Raman- (st)oh shit,iss jkr ko pata chal gaya ki mere pass ticket nahi toh chennai express mein jaise unn gundon ne t.t ko pheka tha ,yeh mujhe phek degi.hey matarani meri laaj rakhna.thinking so he rushed to t.t.

Raman- t.t sahab.

T.t look at him and said- ticket nahi hai.

Raman nodded in no.

T.t- kahan tak jaana hai.

Raman- kahan tak yeh train jaati hai.

T.t- yeh yard tak jaati hai.wahan jaana hai.

Raman- no.

T.t- then don't try to be over smart.tell me where u want to go.

Raman- till last stoppage.

T.t- OK give ten thousand.

Raman- yeh toh bahut jyada hai.

T.t- u want ticket or not.

Raman- OK but I want seat near that girl in pink and when u check my ticket call me raj.OK.

T.t- iske 12 hazar lagenge.

Raman said giving him money- bhrastachar ne India ka kabada kar rakha hai.

T.t- jyada narendra modi mat ban.t.t hoon actor nahi phir bhi acting karunga naa.chal nikal 12 hazaar.

Raman- daiketti daal lo tum log.

T.t- aisa hai isse rakhi aur next station pe utar jaana.

Raman- arey aap toh dil par le rahe hai.I was just kidding.keep it and give me the ticket aur yaad hai naa ,u have to call me raj.OK.

T.t- OK,saying so he started checking ticket again.

Raman signed in relief and went to the seat and said- let me sit.

Ishita took her belongings to her side and make some space for him.he sat like a king sit on his throne.

Ishita- what u r talking with t.t.

Raman- tumse matlab.badi aayi puchne wali.he said and keep his leg on the berth near her legs.

Ishita- remove ur legs,its stinking.

Raman- stinking and my legs,never.aur agar kar bhi raha hai toh its ur problem not mine.

Ishita hit his leg with her .he glared at her and said- pagal ladki.and hit her leg with his.then she hit ,then he.then both of then start hitting each other with their leg fighting .at last ishita stopped and said- asur kahin ka.mera nakhun tod diya.

Raman smirked and said- who told u to mess with the king.senorita.

Ishita- senorita??

Raman- arey main raj malhotra hoon toh senorita bhi toh honi chahiye. Bade bade deshon mein aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai senorita.he said smirking.

Ishita glared at him and start reading her magazine again saying him asur.

Raman chuckled seeing her irritated face and start thinking -this is the real Raman which I want to be.not the fake Raman I was playing since last two years.the one who got the budding entrepreneur of the year award wasn't me.it was the obidient son of multimillionaire Mr Om prakash bhalla.who want to establish his son in this business world.from last two years I am living a life instructed as per papa.getting up at 5,then gyming,then reading newspaper like a true businessman. Then go to office at 8 managing a staff of thousands. Attending meetings and cracking deals and at the end of the day sleep like a lifeless body till the next dawn.thank god after two years finally I got this one month leave.all thanks to my dearest mom who gave me idea to elope to some unknown destination to spend some time aloof before getting into a marriage which is more then a business deal.love u mom for dealing with papa in my absence. I promise I will be back after this unexpected holiday to fulfill all my obligations. Till then I will be the original Raman,who will fight for petty issues and behave like a common man.not wasting money like a multimillionaire.so bye papa atleast for a month.

On the other hand ,ishita was lost in her thoughts- what I got after being a doting daughter for years.I became a doctor to fulfill my appa's dream .and live up to their every expectations. And what I got in return.getting married in two weeks with a complete stranger that too not a tamilian but a Punjabi.coz he is appa's childhood friend's son.come on appa,u should have asked me once.I am not ready for this marriage.I too wanna live before getting into any serious relationship.so I am very sorry appa I am not coming to Chandigarh to get engage to any stranger.I will get down in any in between station and will enjoy my life at least for a month.I know u will be angry but aap bhi toh samjhana nahi chahte that I want to live my life like a free bird before getting into a cage called marriage. So bye appa atleast for a month.

That's all for now.enjoy and do comment and hit like.will wait for it.

Ps- 150+ likes with long comments required for next update .

Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohh...I read that OS...

Very good start...It was OS...but now we wil have...full version of Ithis story...
Please continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like this os... Thanks for making it as ss... Continue dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Nice prologue...update first part soonish...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue. Di!
update soon. . 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Is there any thread to d story or you have let writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Di oct 28😲...dont u think its too long...
i want this tommorrow...
plzzz
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interesting one...
update soon plzzz..
can't wait

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