Hi jigs, am very, very sorry for my late response dear... though my comments r way pending from last 3 updates, plz dont mind if i start my views from chapter 30...đ.
chapter 30, i must say one of d best chapter again... it just felt like till chap 29 we were in search of puzzle pieces n trying to fix d puzzle with that pieces... but but chap 30 has it all... its not just we could find all d puzzle pieces but also could fix it... n now could see a beautiful picture out of d puzzle... it mesmerized me d way you have portrayed d adoption process... it is no less than a baby coming out of d womb. though there r few stories of arshi on baby adoption but ur story excel all other story jigs... it just lightens that for a couple/sole who r possessed with so much of love and affections are capable to pour there love to every one n every thing... irrespective of blood, group, cast, identity... it is so motivating/ inspiring for d couple who r planning to go for adoption. it hardly matters d amount of time, legal process, influences, parent desperation, patience, frustration ...have nothing to do in front of baby which brings infinite happiness to its loved ones... nothing comes for free to our life, every thing has to be earned r gained...
jigs u have proved arnav n khushi r not infertile couples, but they r BRAVE HEARTS.đ
coming to chap 31 part A... all d way it is guptas... n there changed attitude towards there sun (in-law) n daughter n future grand child... omg... finally a movement to cherish for parents - daughter, father/mother inlaw - sun inlaw, mother - daughter...
i dont know jigs... but loved avni in this chap for d first time... not because she confessed her mistake/ love to khushi its because no drama, mercy seeking, r guilt show off from avni... d way she take charge as a loving/caring mother n supported her daughter to use d influence b4 khushi could ask, d way she over took her past mistake by succeeding her motherhood... in all natural way...
loved arnav n his way of accepting every help n references to make d adoption process as easy as possible... (unlike any other fantasy/ fancy fiction where arnav singh raizada can get any thin n every thing within d blink of his eyes). it is human tendency to get help/ references from d friends, relatives r influential people in d official/ legal matters.
and chap 31 part B... what can i say dear... a husband who is missing his wife on his special day n recalling d past 10 years events... his ups n downs, twist n turns, his changed roles in relationship... and @ last but not least his one n only epitome of love his khushi... his wife... jigs u have magic in ur words... it mesmerizes me d way u pull out every minute to major feel of husband n wife... so beautiful dear... n perfect... n khushi is no less even though in blind fold state she could sense d 10 years back proposal place... along with arshi even i cherished there 10th year marriage anniversary
finally jigs non of d hurt, ego, pain, heartbreak, selfishness could succeed in front of love, care, affection, unconditional, selfless love... every single thread of relationship is important to our life... no matter how much ever big r small we portray in our life at d end of d day/life we have to get back to our home, to our selves, but all it matters is a loved ones by ur side... with whom u could rely on in every sense...
n finally i wish a pari sister accomplish arshi life n reflect our pari in her... bring all sweet memory to her lovely n sweet parents...
thx for pm jigs plz continue soon...
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