||**Sue's poetry pocket**|| link to thread 2 added at index @post 1 - Page 24

Originally posted by: heartbroken1

beautiful !

thanku viny😃😃

Hello sue

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Fabulous Poem.😊

Every Line was so beautifully explained.😊

If you don't mind,will you translate in English also,Please...😊

Please write like this and Pm to me.

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

thanku so much priya😃😃😃
in english
ok sure but it will loose the magic

Originally posted by: azsumay

Hello sue

Kya bat kya bat

hi sum😃
mithun ka dialouge chipka ri he😆

Originally posted by: -simmi-

oye main bhi boy banuga pls btw yar ye siggie kya hoti h i know silly ques pr ni pta meko 😕

yahan khud papa nei family nei chahate simms🤣

Originally posted by: shailu123

haan🤣

lo sue ki shaadi bhi ho gyi aur yaha mera bf ni ban rhi seriously bhagwan ab mujhe utha lo

Ps: party chahiye bas!!

Lovely peom

Originally posted by: -simmi-

Srry main padhai kr rhi thi tab 😲
Okkie poem is lovely
Especially its meaning 👏
I really liked it
But I think if u'd have used "juda ye sansaar par khush hun main beshumaar" instead of "juda ye sansaar h aur khush hun main beshumaar" it sounds more better.. 😊
Just an observation from reader's pov 😉

padhaku simmo😆
padhna acche se
and thanks
yes now i think it sounds better what u told me😃
will edit when i come from lappy😉

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

hi sum😃
mithun ka dialouge chipka ri he😆

Originally posted by: azsumay

Lovely peom

Why sad

Missing someone ha

I know you missing whom

love🤗
sum❤️

thanks sum😃
and no...this wasn't sad yar😆
meri shaadi ho gai ab agar kisi aur ko miss kiya to biwi ghr ke bahar nikaal degi🤣
jst joking.yeah u knw well abt me
love u tooo😃🤗