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Posted: 10 years ago
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MANIK'S POV::

When today first time I saw her she was looking breathtaking in her red choli of course my favourite colour and specially I choose this choli for her and she was looking like a doll my princess when I filled her maang that time I felt that I am luckiest man in this world. ..but when I saw her lone tear that broke my heart in million pieces I know she is angry but I also know that she still loves me a lot...when I entered in my room she was resting her eyes were close and she was sitting on my bed now our bed that time I felt my decision was absolutely right I can't live without her for a nanosecond and now she is mine all mine for forever...then I walked towards her and she opened her eyes and I sat in front of her I can clearly see that on her face that she is hell nervous...I want clam her down so I take her hands in my hands and kissed her palm which is full of covered with henna...oh god!!!what a feeling when I touch her I can't describe in words..I made her lay down and I came on top of her and kissed her forehead than her eyes then cheeks then her cute sa nose and I came down on her neck and started kissing and sucking her neck like when I raised my head to claimed her lips at that time what I saw its broke my heart and shook me from the core that her silent tears. ...

Nandini's pov
When he laid me down I want to stop him but no I can't deny my chachi's words whatever happened in past willingly or unwillingly now he is my husband he has full right on me.

And that thought stop me...I clutched the bedsheet very tightly in my hand and tightly shut my eyes but my tears continuously flowing from eyes and his next move left me so stunned...

Manik got up from nandini and made her sit straight and take her hands in his hands..

"Doll..I know you still angry on me for you trust is the most important in every relationship and fir bhi I broke your trust nandu...I am sorry plz forgive me...yes I want you make you mine..I want to claim you but aise nhi jaan jab tum chahogi tab I will claim you mine..princess plz wapas mujse pyar kro plz baby...I said to her and she looking at me without blink eyes for a second...
Manik kyun aapne mera trust toda I trusted you blindly in this world aap jante the mere bare mein sab k mere liye trust is most important in relationship fir bhi..and tears again brimmed in eyes
manik again take my hands and caressed my knuckles jaan tum samaj kyun nhi rhi ho meri majboori thi woh nandu sirf tumhare saath rahne k liye jaan and he cupped my face and I look away bcoz I don't want to see in his eyes..babu plz don't do this to me plz. .I said to her very frustratedly bcoz of my anger I can't help in this...
I knw him.in and out and I can see on his face that he is now hell angry so I don't want to fight with him right now...we both share an eyelock which broke by a loud THUD on our door. ..manik open the door and gang of evils came into their room like a storm which irritates manik more...

All of them sat on our bed and manik asked them what you want guys now woh bhi is waqt...
Everyone laughed on that statement and manik and nandini both are hell embarrassed and then all of them start demanding fir money to leave us alone...
And manik gave them money and shut the door and turned to me...

"Go doll change your clothes its very heavy your night suit is in cupboard take it"I said to her and she nodded and went to bathroom with her night suit..and I changed my shervani and wear tracks only and laid on my bed and she came in her cute sa pink sa night suit she without saying anything sleep beside me at that time oh god I can't control anymore and I hugged her so tightly and then we both slept...
NANDINI'S POV..
I woke up when sun rays directly fell on our room...I want to get up but I can't bcoz manik hugged me so tightly as if I will vanish if he loosened his grip..muje aaj bhi uske wo words yaad hai he told me k chahe tumhari marji se ya bagair tumhari marji k you have to marry me bcoz you are only mine. .tab muje laga tha ki woh sirf bolne ki lye bol rahe hai per today I realized k woh sab sach tha...I tried to get up and struggling to come out from his grip after lot of hard work I got up from the bed and went to the bathroom...and came out wearing a saree and drying my hair when suddenly I felt someone's intense gaze on me..
MANIK'S POV..
I woke up when my doll is struggling to get out from my arms I just want to kiss her cute pouty lips my doll then I loosen my grip and she immediately rushed to the bathroom I sat on my bed and smiling like a fool..then my doll came wearing a pink saree and drying her hair she was looking damn cute I staring at her without even blinking my eyes...my trance broken by her words "kya aap aise kya dekh rahe hai??"
I just smiled and went to the bathroom. .
Nandini combed har hair in a bun and fixing their messy bed.manik came out from the bathroom and choose blue blazer for him and went to bathroom to get ready when he came out he saw nandini was about to go out of the room...

"Nandu"manik called her..and went towards her and held her hand and make her stand infront of mirror and fill her maang and he opened her hair put her all hair on one shoulder

Turned towards him.and kissed her forehead then her eyes then her cheek and cute sa nose and nuzzled his face in her hair and kissed her neck crazily. .

Nandini's pov
I was melting in his all kisees I want to stop him but don't know what happened to me..my one hand unintentionally ruffled his thick hair and one hand was on his back..

MANIK'S POV..
I kissed her madly I know I have to stop myself..but no I was kissing her madly but for my surprise she was ruffling my hair..I raised my head and I was about to kiss her lips and suddenly my phone rang and we both came out from our trance and she literally ran out from our room to avoid the embarrassment. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
I hope u liked it...
plz comment...
I will update tonight another update...
in next update I will give you flashback
I will update regularly...
shindesweety thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Hey
nice story
continue
give us regular updates
takecare
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Nice story dear
Interesting
Loved it
Cont soon
Pooi thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Hey nice story really looking forward to this
i hope aap apne baat par kayam rahenge aur roj update karenge
waiting fr next update eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
awesome update
what, is reason in their drift????
reveal soon will be waiting.!!!
Mawara_Ejaz thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Aray when both love eachother tou phr ya dori kesi?
hmmm eager to know...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
awesome story n pls update next part ASAP😊😊
Maramkhan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Oh god I just loved manik pov .
You have expressed his point of view very brilliantly. .
It's amazing
Looking forward to read flash back
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Hey I like ur story.
sounds interesting.

Waiting for next update.

Keep it up.


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