ArShi FF: Sex between Hearts #13 - Thread 14 Link on Pg 149 - Page 96

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Posted: 10 years ago
fantastic
khushis finally warming up to Arnavs parents
letting herself experience their warmth n love
shes still determined though to get a job n be independent which aint a bad thing just hope when she does she keeps in touch with Arnav n doesn't drift away
loved how excited Anjali n Arjun were when Arnav told them about khushi
khushi slowly letting Arnav show her n heal her what his unsaid love can be like
n positive she wasn't happy when he said he had to leave n wouldn't be back that night
Arnav n his parents replacing khushis old horrible memories with new happy ones
looking forward to seeing whats gonna happen next
thanks for pm n plz keep em comin
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Deeps,
Not just liked, loved it. Hai hai .. Wish I could see this Arnav, who is so loving and caring in real life.
Amazing update. Each part was so aptly written ... Loved the easy banter between parents n kushi, Anji n Arjun teasing Arni :)! Truly hilarious.
Next, Felt bad that Kushi didn't know how to use water n not familiar with operating new bath fixtures.
One question is, what happened to the money that Abhay gave? She could have given it to Arnav to buy internals?😭😭
Loved the love n care of Arnav taking care of Kushi wounds.
Thanks a ton, wonderful update. Keep rocking.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update.
The name of this chapter should be "the brown bucket and mug"😆
No seriously I was laughing hard imagining arnav with the brown bucket and the mug in his hand. Uff really a man in love can do anything for his lady love. But khushi's logic to hide the stain behind the brown color is really unhygienic. The doctor should try to change her neither to adapt him in her habit.😆

What I loved about this chapter is khushi's dependence on arnav. she is already feeling protective with him. Though with hesitation, but how cutely she asked him about her minimal demand. But how she will solve the problem of her lingerie? Will she ask for it? Maybe not. Maybe arnav will buy it while shopping clothes for her. After all he is a gynecologist, he is used to in handling women's personal stuff. 😛
Khushi became sad When arnav told her that he will be back next morning. Aww!!! I think it's not because she is insecure but she feels comfortable when he is around.

Gayatri and abhay again amused me, they not only adore khushi, but respect her a lot. Their bonding is also growing so nicely. It was so thoughtful of them to give her shagun as they thought her auspicious. What A difference between Raizada and the background from where khushi came from. In one society people think daughters are auspicious and in another society they kill Daughters. No wonder why khushi became emotional at their gesture. And I am really happy that she didn't refuse their token of love.

Poor khushi is making herself sick to find a job. Why she is not asking arnav? I know she doesn't want to take any more favor from him. But still as he is her guardian now, she can ask his help.

Khushi's life is filled with bitter memories which is indelible. I felt so bad to see her lying on the floor, because the bed gives her bad memory. But it was so beautiful how arnav picked her up in his arm and gently lay her down on the bed like a fragile doll and soothed her wound. And the best part was finally khushi felt her dhak dhak for the very first time. I loved it even more when she expressed her feelings to him, what sure made arnav love her even more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
SUPER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The bucket and mug story was hilarious!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow wat a fantastic update... was so heart touching... oh khushi khushi...
love how you portray her emotions so beautifully... her thinking and reasoning... her reactions and astonishment at the differences in the relationships/family that she sees

Oh Arnav... u r doing so good... but i now deep down u long for her acceptance to ur love
absolutely loved how the senior raizada's made her feel at home and genuine love and care they shower on her

finally khushi's heart skipped a beat 😃

eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Loving Arnav's character.
Khushi's finally feeling something for Arnav
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Posted: 10 years ago
A wonderful update. Loved how both are basking in the First experiences and events of love.
Edited by Armela - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I just love Arnav's parents

They are what parents supposed to be, loving and supportive

Oh so hilarious, brown bucket and mug

Crap he is going to go crazy when he finds out she I'd looking for a job
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Posted: 10 years ago
Incredible, beautiful and wonderful chapter once again Deepthi...Loved the way Arnav's parents interacted with Khushi. For the first time in her life she felt the affection from the outsiders who are just giving her unconditional love and care. How beautifully she got the gift from Arnav's parents...they made her realize for the first time that daughters are not a curse but a beautiful gift given by the God.
Seriously Deepthi... you made me forget ARSHI for the first time...whenever Gayatri and Abhay are there...I just love them. You wrote their character so beautifully...that's remind me my father and my husband with my daughter.
Pheli shopping for Khushi and that to bucket and mug with a particular color...😆. What all she will ask him to buy...I am just curious.
Love you lady for this beautiful and meaningful story.










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Posted: 10 years ago
wow! brilliant updates, read it in a go, loved the storyline... really, it made me glued to the FF... can't wait to read more of it... loved bucket and mug part 🤣❤️ Arnav's parents are so sweet, caring and understanding... loved the parents - son bond and trust... They are such a beautiful family... Khushi's past is very horrible, hope she listens to her heart... wow, her first dhak dhak... excited for the next update 😉
Edited by christi002 - 10 years ago

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