SidNi FF : Mil Gaya Mera pyaar!!! - updated final part in page 87) - Page 53

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NiaDiva

loved it do continue fast


thank u so much😃
sure dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

after a long time dear... but fully enjoyed both updates...
frst happy to read Sid reached at time of engagment ...
frst love Sid 's ignorance toward but its tooo hurting tooo read poor Rosh' s condition...
hospital part of Raj n Rosh was awsm...
love changed DD...
at home love Sid 's blabbering on chhotu Sid part...
love morning part of SidNi ...
our Ropsh is really pure soul...
love her way of confesn...
love YasNi part tooo n jealous Sid is always treat to read...
egrly waiting for nxt update n also Rosh 's nxt step toward Sid...
thnx alot for regular pm...
keep rocking...



thank u so much Googlu😃😃 I am very very happy to read ur comments😊😃
It's SidNi fans' long term wish to see jealousy Sid😃
I'll try to update soon dear, take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 17:

It was nearly 8:30 AM...

Roshni holding the kid Sid in her hands coming out of her room and shouted, "Siddharth, Yash it's time for breakfast... aaooo na"

Sid opened his room door annoyingly & said, "oh hello... I know to take my breakfast. Tum chintha math karo"

Yash came towards them controlling his laughter, "I am here Roshni... chalo yaar" and stood silently enjoying their fight.

"Ek second Yash... My name is not hello', I am Roshni patel. By The Way, I am not calling u. For ur kind information, my kid's name is also Siddharth and I was calling him" she gave him back.

"oh... U think I don't know ur tricks of trade?" he shouted without giving up.

"Sid baby, u say who I called now?" she asked to the kid.

"Roshni called me only... My name is Siddharth" the kid replied seriously to him.

"Hey chota bomb, I am not talking to u OK" he started to fight.

"Don't fight with my kid now" she replied controlling her laughter and went to the dining hall.

"May be she would have called that chota bomb only. Laktha hai mein ne kuch zyada sochtha..." he thought himself and went to the dining table.

Chota Sid and Yash were sitting in their seats and Roshni went to bring the special badam halwa she prepared for her hubby as that was his most favourite dish.

He came and sat on the chair next to chota Sid and Roshni was bringing the halwa bowl towards them. Immediately chota Sid turned to Sid, "Ok now get up and sit on the next chair. Ur time up, Roshni came to her seat"

Mean while everyone came to dining hall for breakfast.

"what? Why should I get up? This s my place" Siddharth shouted back.

"No I kept this seat for Roshni only and u came and seated here urself. I thought to allow you to sit here till Roshni comes. Now get up, she came na" chota Sid pushing Sid to get up.

She was watching her poor Siddharth's condition & enjoying herself. Without anymore option, he got up to sit on the next seat of Roshni's. Immediately Yash got up frm his place where he seated and ran to that seat. He held Sid's hand before he sat on the chair, "Sorry Siddharth... actually this is my seat. I use to sit only here whenever I use to visit this house. Hai na aunty?" asked Yash seeing DD. DD nodded to yash, "haan that's his place and he never give up that for anyone, even for me" replied DD with a smile.

He glowered a deadly glare to both Yash and chota Sid and took another seat near Raj Khurana.

All laughing silently seeing angry Siddharth and started eating. Roshni took her seat and served halwa for the kid and Yash and passed the bowl to everyone looking eagerly whether Sid would taste the halwa after all she made it for him. "Halwa is so yummy Roshni" shouted the kid in excitement. Sid looked at him temptingly for Halwa while DD, nani, Raj, Bablu, Pratima everyone tasted and praised her for the sweet. Still she is expecting him to taste it atleast. But he is thinking so much to touch the sweet bowl. "If I eat this, then their plan would get succeed... not now" he thought. Seeing Roshni's upset look, Yash took a spoon of Halwa and quickly feed it to Siddharth while Siddharth hooked up to the spoon and ate the halwa unknowingly. Yash then patted his back, "yummy halwa na Siddharth" and gave a wide grin to annoy him again. "Roshni prepared it for u but u are not even touching it? Very gud job Yash" said Raj khurana happily.

"Haan very gud job" replied Siddharth to his dad's comment looking at Roshni who is smilingly looking at him.

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In Roshni's room...

Yash: Roshni I'll be going back to Bangkok next week yaar. Before that I wanted to meet all our frnds. It'll be even better if I arrange for a small party. What saying?

Roshni: Not a bad idea

Yash: what u r simply saying Not a bad idea'? Won't you feel happy to meet all our friends. It's been so long we had a get together.

Roshni: AAAhhh... Ok yaar it's a GREAT IDEA. Ab Khush?

Yash: haan bahut khush

Roshni: But in a short span of time, how you'll book for party hall and make arrangements?

Yash: yeah right... I forgot that yaar.

Roshni: I have one idea but I am not sure he'll help for u

Yash: wow!!! Kaun?

Roshni: Mr.Siddharth Khurana

Yash: yeah I forgotten that too... he is a hotelier na!!!

Roshni: (smiled and nodded )

Yash: But I am sure he'll not help me after this dining table matter. I and the kid teased him more.

Roshni: YES... who asked u to annoy my husband? Now you are going to face the result.

Yash: arrey u are taking his side? I just helped u and made u happy but U questioning myself. Great yaar... a great lesson for me not to interfere b/w lovers.

Roshni: aww... I was just kidding Yash. You ask him and he'll help u in booking party hall. Initially hell not agree and u have to tolerate his dramas but at the end he'll agree, I am sure.

Yash: waahhh!!! What a great understanding b/w u both (banging his head in a wall) Ok I am going to him then...

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In Sid's room, he was in some business talks in mobile... he saw Yash coming to his room, "Ok... get it done soon and inform me" said this he cut the call.

Sid: Kya hua? U r spying for ur friend?

Yash: who said like that? I came here to ask u one help

Sid: Achha... How can I help u Mr.Yash Mehra?

Yash: Actually I planned for a small get together with our friends but I can't get a party hall in this short schedule. If there is any non-booked hall in ur hotel, I thought we can...

Sid: Oh... So u gonna have Parttyyy!!! If u asked for urself, maybe I could have made arrangements, but u will also take ur so called best friend to the party then how can I help u?

Yash: ofcourse she is also coming with me yaar

Sid: How many dramas u and that chota bomb created in dining hall? U danced for ur BEST FRIEND's tunes na, then go and ask help from herself (he said sarcastically)

Yash: now u don't try to act too much Okay? What all this around ur room uh? (pointing Roshni's pics)

Sid: yeah yes they are... It was my past. My hand is cracked na, I'll remove these pics soon. (He blabbered )

Yash: Aahaan... Ok fine. I'll manage myself for one party hall (he was about to leave expecting him to stop)

Sid: Ok ok... No problem, I'll make arrangements Yash. But I am doing only for u Okay?

Yash: Oh u r ready to help me and that too for my sake? How great!!! Ok I believe the statement that u are helping for ME... Only for MYSELF and not for my friend's sake right?

Sid: yes yes only for U Yash (he showed a thumbs up)

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In the evening...

"Roshni beta... kya kar rahi hoon? Yash kahan hai?" asked DD.

"No work mom, gonna get ready for party and Yash may be doing arrangements" she replied lazily.

"That's great news. U r going to meet ur friends then y not so cheered uh?" asked DD caressing her cheeks.

"Nahi mom... Rita and Layla asked me to introduce my husband to our gang as they didn't meet him yet" she made a worried face.

"So what beta? Ask him to come with you na?" asked DD.

"Mom are u joking? He is already angry on me, how he'll come" she said.

"You didn't even asked him to come, then how he will come" said DD

"MOM?? He won't... I know" she said.

"Call him once atleast and see whether he come or not..." said this DD left the place.

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Roshni went to his room and knocked the door...

He opened, "What?"

"Siddharth... can u please come with me for party today?" she requested.

"I am busy today" he said with a high attitude.

"Just one hour please... My friends wants to meet u and they asked me to come with u" she said looking at his eyes for his positive reply.

He controlled himself not to look at her face else he'll nod her positively. He turned his face to other side, " I am sorry... You can take ur baby Sid with u and introduce him to them and have fun" he said sarcastically and closed the door.

"You won't come? Let me see how won't come" she said and banged the door with her palm angrily and left the place.

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By night 7 PM...

She got ready to party in a black sleeveless embellished gown that covers upto her knees with a short laced neck. Her long silky hair that was left open astounding her beauty while her glossy pink lips and thin kohl lined eyes gave her a stunning look already.

"Mom, nani... I am leaving to party. How I am looking?" she shouted near Siddharth's room expecting him to come out and went towards the living hall walking with her black pointed shoes like a sexy divine, never failed to attract one.

Her voice reached him and he came out of his room in the excitedly to see her once.

All her family members sitting in the living room got happy and excited to see her beauty and surrounded her to compliment her. "Roshni beta... no evil eye should touch u" said Nani.

"OMG!!! How can I see her if everyone get pooled around!!!" he thought and came forward to hide behind the wall.

"My daughter is the most gorgeous girl in this world" hugged DD.

"sasu mom... give ur gorgeous daughter some space to breathe. I can see her atleast in that break na" he said restlessly.

"Roshni puttar... have fun in party with ur friends" said Raj patting her cheeks softly. "Sure papa" she replied.

"Sid baby? U r not coming with me?" she asked the kid.

"Roshni mein Prathima aunty ke sath shopping jana hai aaj" he said cutely.

"aww... u got so attached with Prathima aunty now-a-days" she kissed his cheeks.

"Hmm... this chota bomb getting kisses frm her, but poor me can't even look at her once. Everyone said bye na, then leave the place I wanna see my wife" he said annoyingly to himself.

She caught the person who was hiding behind the wall and trying frm long time to look at her. So moved herself outside her family crowd to make her clearly visible to him, "Someone is so poor" shouted this she left the place within a second.

He bit his tongue as she caught him finally and stood stunned with her sexy look... "I never seen her properly atleast for 2 seconds and she left the place." he said worriedly. "Now how can I see her? Roshni u getting too bad and naughty yaar. I know how to catch u" he mumbled and left the place.

She reached the party venue and everyone greeted her happily including Yash who was already present there. "Hi Ricky, Tanu, Rita, Laila, Neha, Ajay, Shaurab, Haris... We guys meeting after 2 years now. yayyy..." she excited.

"Roshni u r still the same yaar... so hot and sexy!!!" said Ajay.

"U too still the same yaar. Never forgetting to drool over her right" replied Yash for his comment and the whole gang laughed and continued their fun pulling each other's legs.

"Waise tumhari hero kahan Roshni? We asked u to introduce him with our gang right?" said Laila.

"Wo... he got an important meeting in his office. May be will join us later" she said with a fake smile looking towards the entrance every now & then impatiently and sadly.

Yash took her to one corner, "wht? He is also coming? Party gonna rock I think" he teased.

"No Yash... I asked him to come but he ignored. I don't think he will join us here" she said worriedly.

"Don't under estimate ur power baby... U don't understand how hot and gorgeous u r today. I am sure he'll come to give a special love to his wife today" he said confidently.

But she faked a smile as reply and mingled with her crowd again.

All her friends introduced their girl friends, husbands, wives to their gang but the person whom she is expecting alone is absent there. "Dekho Roshni... this time u didn't listen us. See we all introduced our spouses but only u ignored our words" said Neha and she gave a worried look, "Becoz I am so unlucky as my hubby is angry on me" she thought to herself.

"oh sorry yaar... I am quite late to party and u guys teasing my wife" came a voice behind her and she turned to see her hot dashing husband came to the party Black tuxedo matching to her black gown. "WOW!!! U are so dashing Mr..." said Neha while he forwarded his hands introducing, "Siddharth Khurana".

For a second, she is not ready to trust her eyes that he is actually present there and looking at him surprised and stunned. Neha didn't left his hands still and that brought her senses back. She pulled his hand frm Neha's clutch, "Yeah he is..." with a stern smile and he is already enjoying her possessiveness.

She introduced her whole gang of friends to him while Haris, "Roshni Didi... u both looking the best together" he complimented. "Didi??" asked Sid confusedly. "Oh that's actually a big story yaar... Haris is our college senior actually. During freshers day party, he teased Roshni hey sexy... How can I propose u so that u agree for our marriage?' Immediately she went to sherni mode, slapped him, kicked and chased him till he called her didi... chodo mujhe' Frm that day, Haris calls her Didi Didi" said yash remembering their funny FB and whole crew laughed. Sid looked at her frm the corner of his eyes, "I too have to keep some distance now I think" and teased her. "As u wish" she said with a stern smile. He is drinking her beauty restlessly from top to bottom and was not ready to take off his eyes frm her.

"Hey music ON... let's rock the floor" announced a man and few went to dance floor while others took their seats to enjoy dance. Ajay went to Roshni and took her to dance floor holding her hands for dance. She can't say no to his friend and went with him looking at Siddharth awkwardly. "Sorry dude... this Ajay was the same frm college. Always roaming & flirting around with Roshni" said yash funnily patting his shoulders. He started fuming to see her dancing with Ajay and got up frm the place to leave. Suddenly the music changed and his hands were held tightly not allowing him to leave the place.

She pulled his hands softly and took him to the dance floor. She clutched his shoulders with one hands, took his another hand and encircled it around her waist and started moving slowly singing the song for him...


(song - pink , Eng translation - purple)


main jaan ye vaar doon
har jeet bhi haar doon
keemat ho koi tujhe
beintehaa pyaar doon


I'll give this life,
lose every victory,
whatever be the price,
I'll give you limitless love..


His lips curved with smile... He took her fingers and twirled her around the air and pulled her waist sticking them together without space.


saari hadein meri, ab maine tod di
dekar mujhe pataa awaargi ban gaye..


I've broken all my barriers now,
having given me the address, you became wandering..

She cupped his face and nuzzled his nose closing her eyes feeling his every touch. She is also enjoying the way his fingers dancing and roaming on her body uncontollable.

haan hansi ban gaye
haan nami ban gaye
tum mere aasmaan
meri zameen ban gaye


you have become (my) laughter,
you have become the wetness (of my eyes),
you have become my sky
and my earth..

He took her in his arms and they twirling together, floating and merging in the deepest ocean of love.


kya khoob rab ne kiya

bin maange itna diya

warna hai milta kahaan

hum kaafiron ko khuda


what a wonder god has done,
has given me so much without even asking,
otherwise where do unbelievers like us
get god..

He bent towards her neck holding her from waist as she stretched back herself to give him proper access to kiss. He kissed her cheeks, neck, collar bones and nuzzled her neck in between their moves according to the music and it turned to be the hottest sensual dance in the party.

hasratein ab meri tumse hain jaa mileen
tum duaa ab meri aakhiri ban gaye


my wishes have now gone to meet you,
you have now become my last prayer..

She encircled her arms around her neck and sealed the least distance between their lips forgetting their dance as they both engrossed in such a passionate love when their feelings and body collides exactly at the same moment.

haan hasi ban gaye
haan nami ban gaye
tum mere aasmaan
meri zameen ban gaye

They got back to their senses hearing a huge applause frm the crowd and looking into each other's eyes as the moments paused.

"U came here for me na Siddharth?" she asked cupping his face.

"Who said? I came here for Yash" he replied with a smirk holding her waist.

"I know well that u came for me only and very happy too. But I'll be EVEN MORE happy if u confessed that u came here for me" she said looking at his eyes holding his shoulders.

"Achha... then be happy EVEN MORE" he winked and left the place leaving a happily stunned blushing Roshni behind.



Enough of my Bakwas frnds?? I am really sorry if u find it bored and plz do share ur comments and suggestions below. This is the first time I am writing a dance sequence with song. Donno whether it came out well😕

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Posted: 10 years ago
Yayyy..I m firstt😛😉 coming to f update...mind blowing update...I mean ...it had all...fight romance love cuteness everything...starting frm d dining table scne to d last one...all was perfect😛 dining table scene nd sidni first scene was damn hilarious...I loved rosh yash nd chota sid team..how well they trapped sid...lol...😛😆 sidni know each other very well...lol..rosh was confident he wil help yash...aww.sidni... Nd rosh antics to get sid attraction was damn hilarious... D entry to d party...was rocking..😃 I lovedrosh possessiveness...damn cute...their dance reminded me of hot dance coming up..nd d last convo..so..romantic...aww.sid na...who doesn't wants guy like sid...so cute...man😳 he s 😳 sidni...so cute😳
I loved this...nd it was long...superb wriitmh abi...keep it up👏 continue soon😳
Edited by Abinaya12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dear
You wrote so well
Continue soon the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Such a fabulous update
Sidni 😳
Continue soon waiting to read more and more
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super update enjoyed
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
"Achha... then be happy EVEN MORE" he winked and left the place leaving a happily stunned blushing Roshni behind. wow abhi the end line frm sid was awesome i loved it❤️
sid finally he came after all he is sid chipku😳

abhi part abhi baaki hai hai kya hope rosh crush dsnt do anything😉
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow fabulous loved it
Continue fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved Roshni and Yash plan
.the pArty was nice and you wrote the entire story perfectly...

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