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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#291

Superb update
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#292

Nice update... Loved it... Hope Anjali will help khushi to overcome from her past... Eagerly waiting 4 the next part..

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._Jyoti_.

@._Jyoti_.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#293

Amazing update! Why is Arnav afraid of society!?

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-SOBTIAN-

@.LadyHitler.

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#294

I didn't get a spot on first page so my comment will be late!

*Edited*
Sorry Sorry! 😒 I was busy yesterday!

Coming to the update, i don't have words! I think i've said everything!

I love how you've described Arnav's character in the first two paragraphs! A sweet, loving and caring guy who can do anything for his closed ones! Someone who's okay with sacrificing his love for her happiness! I'm in awe of this guy!

Glad to see that Khushi is accepting him in her life! She is atleast acknowledging the fact that they are growing close! Bcoz its not easy for someone who has gone through so much to accept such things!

Time will definitely heal her wounds! Bas Arnav uska saath rahe!

I loved this 'training Mish' by black mailing her of cancelling her teddy bears! 🤣

Par iss sab ka kya fayida when Anjali is too smart? 😉

When Mish blurted farmhouse, i was like, 'Yeah!! How can we forget whose niece she is!' 😆

Anjali knows Arnav well! A bit too much! I won't be surprised if she will ask him about his feelings for Khushi after a week!

Now i want to know who suffered actually! Anjali didn't! Kahi Arnav aur Anjali ki maa toh nahi?

And i won't care if you don't accept, but i did guess this part before! Bas! 😆

And i don't care if you are not satisfied bcoz i'm more than satisfied with this update! 😊

*Edited again* 😆

Forgot to mention, now that Anjali knows about Khushi, i don't think she will stop Arnav! Anjali can understand what Khushi went through!
I never thought about that part until i read comments!
But anyway, now that you have put Anjali's reaction in suspense, update SOON!

Edited by .LadyHitler. - 10 years ago

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hotchic.

@hotchic

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#295

res😊

unres..

Khushi is so unaware of the fact that she has made a special place in Arnav's heart for herself...a permanent one😳

Interesting thing : He loves her, adores her, cares for her, does everything for her...all silently. This makes me love him so much more.
And No.1, he respects her.

I hope Khushi comes to know of this soon. Just waiting for that moment, for her reaction. Her hesitation and then the acceptation will be worth reading⭐️ And even if she refuses due to her insecurities, i know my Arnav will handle her and make her his😃

Haayye, I love Mish <3...such a smart kid but...still a kid, was about to blurt the truth but anyhow...Anjali knows everything.

Better for Arnav, hiding the truth will lead him nowhere. Glad everything is out in front of Anjali, this girl may play a key role in bringing these two torn up souls closer.

I wish...

ILY <3

Edited by .MissStubborn. - 10 years ago

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lionacharming

@lionacharming

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#296

Its awsom story com across it today
nice story line

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Sanjana

@-SanjanaSobti-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: .LadyHitler.
I didn't get a spot on first page so my comment will be late!

😒

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#298

was Arnav try helping himself too while helping out Khushi..? Why did he skip confessing his love for her to his sister ?

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-SOBTIAN-

@.LadyHitler.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: -SanjanaSobti-

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No worries! I'll probably comment tomorrow!

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Sanjana

@-SanjanaSobti-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: RajiSobtian
loved the update 👍🏼 dear
Beautifully written
Now di too know about khushi's hope she will be happy soon with d help of di nd misha
Thanks for d name meaning dear i love it :)
Waiting for Khushi nd di meet update when u have time :)

Anjali is a mystery, so just grab your popcorn and wait for the story to open up :) Thank you for commenting!

Originally posted by: Dhrenu
Short update but nice.. So now anjali also know about khushi.. I hope she will give a positive response as its only arnav who can releive her from her haunting past !!

Sorry about the length Let's see whether Anjali is positive about Arnav-Khushi or not 😳 Thank you for commenting!