*October Fest - Contest 1 HQ, Read Pg 6/8 - Page 5

oooo it was like "whoosh" nice job! i guess we should add
as the "common end line"

"bas yahi toh hai paglon ki zubani"

aka : only this is us mad people saying.... hahah bad translation... hope it works .. i ono ...u guys decide

i edited .... pls pls guys, edit ...we want to be #1!! 😛

Magical chemistry, undescribable .... one of a kind,
The intensity of saagar and Vidya rules our mind...
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se...
Ab yeh pyaar kahin toh hai khoya khoya
Har din hum sirf unkeliye intezaar karte hain
Yeh intezaar kaise pal pal bitaayenge?
bas yahi hai hum paglon ki zubani...

Iss Dulhann parivaar mein hum log baat karte hain
Kya hoga kal kya jaane...
Akal hoga kahan par, thikane?

Subah se raat hui
Lekin neendiya hai gayab hui
Kiska hai yeh kusoor
Hum sab jaane, eh huzur!
haazir ho , jaadoo mantar,,,
Saagar ki adayein...
Vidya ki muskarahat
bas aisi hai hum paglon kii zubani

Jai Mata di!
hum sab kiBuaji...
Aur Saaga ka kya kahein...
Vidya ki hasi se hum sab ko hasayein,
Aur unki prem kahani mein hum phase
bas yun-hi hai hum paglon ki zubani

Jaane kal kya layega
Kya dil yeh humara intezar kar payega?
Yehi sochke hum sab
Saath mein haste - rote hain
chachi ke jhatak matak...
chacha ke chuchuandar adayiein...
phir bhi romance ke liye hum nazre bichayein... ( LOVE this line Shalili di 😳 )
bas yahi hai hum paglon kii zubani


Hum sab hain is serial ke Shaan
kabhi na ho koi bhi aan-baan,
Sab hai sache dost
And we love each other the most
We are the Dulhan Parivaar,
Never-ending friendships and loads of pyaar 😆
Masti and hungama,
Suspense and drama..

never forget...
kheer puri for khana...

Hum ne hain aaj kiya
Dil ka yeh haal bayan
Subah se raat hui
Phir bhi neendiyan hai gayab hui
bas yeh hai hum paglon kii pyaari zubani

peace out 😉

ritkia i think we got it...i like this..a lot...and i like the common line...its sooooo for "us" hehheheh....

Originally posted by: ritzy2ritz

i edited .... pls pls guys, edit ...we want to be #1!! 😛

Magical chemistry, undescribable .... one of a kind,
The intensity of saagar and Vidya rules our mind...
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se...
Ab yeh pyaar kahin toh hai khoya khoya
Har din hum sirf unkeliye intezaar karte hain
Yeh intezaar kaise pal pal bitaayenge?
bas yahi hai hum paglon ki zubani...

Iss Dulhann parivaar mein hum log baat karte hain
Kya hoga kal kya jaane...
Akal hoga kahan par, thikane?

Subah se raat hui
Lekin neendiya hai gayab hui
Kiska hai yeh kusoor
Hum sab jaane, eh huzur!
haazir ho , jaadoo mantar,,,
Saagar ki adayein...
Vidya ki muskarahat
bas aisi hai hum paglon kii zubani

Jai Mata di!
hum sab kiBuaji...
Aur Saaga ka kya kahein...
Vidya ki hasi se hum sab ko hasayein,
Aur unki prem kahani mein hum phase
bas yun-hi hai hum paglon ki zubani

Jaane kal kya layega
Kya dil yeh humara intezar kar payega?
Yehi sochke hum sab
Saath mein haste - rote hain
chachi ke jhatak matak...
chacha ke chuchuandar adayiein... (ritika...luvvv these two lines...too funny...hehhe)
phir bhi romance ke liye hum nazre bichayein... ( LOVE this line Shalili di 😳 )
bas yahi hai hum paglon kii zubani


Hum sab hain is serial ke Shaan
kabhi na ho koi bhi aan-baan,
Sab hai sache dost
And we love each other the most
We are the Dulhan Parivaar,
Never-ending friendships and loads of pyaar 😆
Masti and hungama,
Suspense and drama..

never forget...
kheer puri for khana...

Hum ne hain aaj kiya
Dil ka yeh haal bayan
Subah se raat hui
Phir bhi neendiyan hai gayab hui
bas yeh hai hum paglon kii pyaari zubani

peace out 😉

veryyy well..i think we are almostt ready...now everyone..pls give ur tru opinions...and if need be edit...cause like ritu said...we gotta be #1

hey great job till now ! we can talk about BMTD section also or only about SV show ? great work !

Hey guys I just saw other sections on I-f and most of them didn't even start with song ! we are the only ones that got really far in the song ! great work guys !!! I hope we get 1st place in the song !

P.s. I checked in Kyunki saas bi .... and that section didn't even start their song ! that show is the most liked show ,and it doesn't have a song ! If I wrote anything thaat I am not supposed to please tell me ........

Wow great sonf guys.. really u all have put so much hard work and talent into it which really stands out. I love how ritu and shaili worked together..that was some awsome work guys.. Really u guys have out done yourself. And no dobuts for shaili..you have just goood imagination and talent..You could be so much in the future..Well guys keep up the good work..and just love the song its actully sounds really good after all the editing and everything.

P.S.-Loverocks..is true many IF sections haven't even started the song yet!so guys we r like really ahead and thats wat we want..To be ahead of everybody!and make BMTD section the best one there is!!~~~

Okay I have edited just a couple of things to make it have more of a pattern...If you dont like it let me know...

Magical chemistry, Indescribable…One of a kind,
The intensity of Saagar and Vidya, rules our mind.
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se,
Ab yeh pyaar humko hai sirf unse.
Har din karte hai hum sirf unka intezaar,
Yeh pal pal kaise bitaaye, hum yuhi hain beqaraar
Bas aisi hai yeh Dulhann ki kahaani

Sunlijiye, yahi hai hum paaglon ki zubaani.

Iss Dulhann parivaar mein hum karte hain baatein,
Kya hoga kal kya jaane...
Akal hogi kahan par, kis thikaane?

Subaah se abhi he raat hui
Lekin neendiya hai gaayab si hui
Liya hai bechaini ka jog,

Kiska hai yeh kasoor

Hum sab yeh jaane, eh huzur!

Saagar aur Vidya ki chaahat ka hai rog
Bas aisi hai in dono ki, iss dil pe manmani

Sunlijiye, yahi hai hum paaglon ki zubaani

Jaane kal phirse yeh mohabbat chayega,

Sung apne haseen mulakaatein layega

Kya dil yeh humara intezar kar payega?

Just these thoughts keep us beguiled
In their wake we have cried, we have smiled.

Chachi ka bin wajah jhatakna matakna
Chacha ke chachundar adaaon ka jhalakna,

Sindoora ki chaale, humein gussa dilaye,

Phir bhi romance ke liye hum nazre bichayein.

Bas aisi hai yeh pyaar aur nafrat ki khichataani

Sunlijiye, yahi hai hum paaglon ki zubaani

Kaun jeetega kal, kiski hogi baazi

Jai mata di, hum sabki buaji

Vidya ke saath pud jaaye Sindoora ko bhaari

Vidya ki hasee hum sab ko hasaaye,

Saagar ki aakhein humein dewaana banaye.

Together in their emotions they blow us away
Aur unki prem kahani mein hum hai phase

Pal hi pal main chaa jaata hai jaadoo

Unke saath hum bhi hai beqaboo

Bas aisi hi chod jaaye humpe yeh nishaani

Sunlijiye, yahi hai hum paaglon ki zubaani.

Hum sab hain is serial ki Shaan
Har muqable mein hum khade hain seena taan,
Hum saare hai sache dost
And we love each other the most
We are the Dulhan Parivaar,
Never-ending friendships and loads of pyaar
Masti and hungama,
Suspense and drama..

And of course, not to forget
Kheer puri for khaana.

Humne hain aaj kiya
Dil ka yeh haal bayaan
Subaah se abhi he raat hui
Lekin neendiya hai gaayab si hui

Bas aisi hai yeh Dulhann ki kahaani

Sunlijiye, yahi hai hum paaglon ki zubani.

Originally posted by: Wafah

Okay I have edited just a couple of things to make it have more of a pattern...If you dont like it let me know...

Magical chemistry, Indescribable…One of a kind,
The intensity of Saagar and Vidya, rules our mind.(Love these lines..so good)
Kasam ki kasam hai kasam se,
Ab yeh pyaar humko hai sirf unse.
Har din karte hai hum sirf unka intezaar, (true)
Yeh pal pal kaise bitaaye, hum yuhi hain beqaraar
Bas aisi hai yeh Dulhann ki kahaani

Sunlijiye, yahi hai hum paaglon ki zubaani.

Iss Dulhann parivaar mein hum karte hain baatein,
Kya hoga kal kya jaane...
Akal hogi kahan par, kis thikaane?

Subaah se abhi he raat hui
Lekin neendiya hai gaayab si hui
Liya hai bechaini ka jog,

Kiska hai yeh kasoor

Hum sab yeh jaane, eh huzur!

Saagar aur Vidya ki chaahat ka hai rog
Bas aisi hai in dono ki, iss dil pe manmani

Sunlijiye, yahi hai hum paaglon ki zubaani (thats how i feel..i mean i don't get enough sleep because i am usually on IF for BMTD..lolz..so true)

Jaane kal phirse yeh mohabbat chayega,

Sung apne haseen mulakaatein layega

Kya dil yeh humara intezar kar payega?

Just these thoughts keep us beguiled
In their wake we have cried, we have smiled.

Chachi ka bin wajah jhatakna matakna
Chacha ke chachundar adaaon ka jhalakna,(funny and yea she does tend to do that a lot.)

Sindoora ki chaale, humein gussa dilaye,(i get so pissed

Phir bhi romance ke liye hum nazre bichayein.

Bas aisi hai yeh pyaar aur nafrat ki khichataani

Sunlijiye, yahi hai hum paaglon ki zubaani

Kaun jeetega kal, kiski hogi baazi

Jai mata di, hum sabki buaji

Vidya ke saath pud jaaye Sindoora ko bhaari

Vidya ki hasee hum sab ko hasaaye,

Saagar ki aakhein humein dewaana banaye. (sigh)

Together in their emotions they blow us away
Aur unki prem kahani mein hum hai phase

Pal hi pal hain main chaa jaata hai jaadoo

Unke saath hum bhi hai beqaboo

Bas aisi hi chod jaaye humpe yeh nishaani

Sunlijiye, yahi hai hum paaglon ki zubaani.

Hum sab hain is serial ke Shaan
Har muqable mein hum khade hain seena taan,
Hum saare hai sache dost
And we love each other the most
We are the Dulhan Parivaar,
Never-ending friendships and loads of pyaar
Masti and hungama,
Suspense and drama..

And of course, not to forget
Kheer puri for khaana. (Yummy)

Humne hain aaj kiya
Dil ka yeh haal bayaan
Subaah se abhi he raat hui
Lekin neendiya hai gaayab si hui

Bas aisi hai yeh Dulhann ki kahaani

Sunlijiye, yahi hai hum paaglon ki zubani.

This is really good update wafah..i mean i love the intimacy betwwn the verses and its just so flows and i know that we are gonna win cuz i;d like to see who cn beat this..so i mean really good..

wafiiii jiiii , OMG!! ritika like 😳

Originally posted by: Wafah

Ok so no complaints....???

not at all. I love it. It's perfect. good job Wafah ji👏👏👏