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Posted: 10 years ago
hey Deepthi..
i m sorry for being late & i m still to read it..
once i read it, will get back to you soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super awesome update
Love the bond tha Arnav shares with his parents
And how they understand him
Can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
I missed this thread somehow..😔
Finally caught up with it. Congrats on the new thread!!
Enjoyed reading both the chapters. And eagerly waiting to see what the future holds for Khushi, and most definitely our couple..
What a judgemental person Shashi is!! The moment he heard Khushi was with Arnav he decided Payal was his only daughter!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Absolutely fabulous

I love Dr R's parents and their deep thinking into matters along with light moods.His mother is sweet.😊 I so want to see Khushi as a strong independent and a person with open mindedness who can embrace her love by herself without others interference.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Another brilliant update! You brilliantly showed the stark contrast between two different families who are living in the same world with different priorities, ideologies, & thinking. Here I am not judging Shashi's love for both of his daughters. Parents love for their children are same, but letting Khushi leave the house showed that he didn't trust his own values and upbringing which he and Garima had given to their daughters.

Actually, Shashi also didn't know when he becomes a puppet in the hand of society. I am not angry with Shashi, but his judgment on Arnav, had left a bad taste in my mouth. When La told Shashi about Khushi's whereabouts, once again, his anger overpowers his love for Khushi. Hats off to Abhay and Gayatri, despite of knowing that the path Arnav has chosen for himself, is not easy and he'll hurt in the process, they supported him.

I really felt relieved when Abhay spoke those encouraging words to his son; their words set Arnav at peace. Their every attempt to make Khushi feel comfortable in their house overwhelmed me. And Arnav's reassuring kiss on Khushi's forehead makes my heart skip a beat. The moment was so pure, endearing and it is indescribably beautiful.

I am so glad Khushi is staying in Arnav's house. And it's going to be very interesting to see their relationship growing by leaps and bounds and I'm equally curious to know how Khushi will fall in love with Arnav. Because I'm desperately waiting to see the trailer part which you'd posted in the beginning of this story. Outstanding update!

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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful story .. just finished reading previous chapters. and waiting to see next eagerly ..
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Another fantastic update. One which clearly depicts that two families who are living in the same society yet are so far apart in there values, love and trust. I can say it's there financial status that is the reason for the difference but that won't be all. The major reason is Shashi had two daughter and the society never let the father of two daughters live in peace. Unless he takes the stand of running his house on his term than society.
And here Shashi had become a puppet in the hand of society so much so they he stopped receiving his daughter's open affection and love for him as to what society said. He distanced himself from his daughters, house and family to not earn any taunts from society yet was not left alone. What he didn't realize was that this so call society never leaves the week one. And so I'm not angry at him now, no more coz it's what he chose long back and he ain't going to change now.

But his so called opinion of Arnav and his reaction to learning Khushi whereabouts left a bad after taste. Lavanya's is right Khushi is at a better place far from the bad mouth and eyes of society, well for now.

On the other hand, there is Abhay and Gayatri, they know what Arnav has chosen will hurt him and may leave him broken, yet they allowed him to go for what his heart believes in and supported him with there heart. Abhay is right what Arnav does or say is the reflection of the values they instill in him.

I loved the way Dr. Raizadas were treating Khushi as one of there own. With no formality. Loved how Gaytri jumped in to give Khushi recipe, and the clothes.

I loved the little talk Arnav and Khushi had. The little sense he put her for living in his house and that reassurance kiss at the forehead. Most of all I loved how Abhay and Gaytri didn't say or reacted when Arnav took Khushi to her room, something Khushi expected given what she has faced so far but was happily surprised at there non-interfering behavior.

I hope this different atmosphere and there ideology help Khushi move on. And fall in love with Dr. R ji.
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wonderful as always

I can only pity Shashi Gupta...he born in conservative society...he let those social norms rule himself...well, can't help it there r plenty such ppl in our surrounding who give utmost preference to society in their life...i m sure his daughter will show him this different world

I cn already c MIL n DIL in 1 team...but truly loving the way both the ladies getting along

Transforming Khushi hs started...still long way to go...cnt wait fr this beautiful journey to start...cont soon n tc


@Bold I totally agree with you there are many people in our society who think about what others will think if they do something out of the box
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful updates from chapters 32,33 and35 like always. The bonding and understanding between Arvav and Khushi is amazing.
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