Arshi FF(Complete): LikeNeverBefore(1)#5 - Last ch+Note Pg52(30.06.15)

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

Beautifully written...Amazing chapter...thanks for the PM

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angelshah

@angelshah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#272

awsome awsome awsome... update loved it you never fail to surprise me the wedding and the emotional concept was so nice i am not Christian but i just love the way they married wedding was so nice akhilesh was there as kushi father & nafisa as arnav mother first couple who snek away for their own marriage reseption finally they become one

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#273

And the awaited has finally arrived...

I had actually failed to decipher the reason behind his 2 weeks wait but now that I know why, I cannot be more happier or ecstatic. They have been through so much and there will probably be times even in the future when they will have to face their demons and hence this present is for them to cherish and enjoy. Every intricate detail of their wedding was well planned and beautifully executed. Her dream white wedding was made to come true and how! It's hard to point out a favourite thing but I really loved the way Akhilesh and Nafisa came forward to fulfill a void in their lives.

The wedding vows were already being fulfilled by them and now that they have repeated them, I am sure these vows will bind them truly, eternally abd thoroughly.

It was their room that was a witness to their first step as a husband and wife, their first embrace as a husband and wife, the secrets they shared as a husband and wife, their first kiss as a husband and wife and it is only fair if it witnesses their union as a husband and wife.

She's always been very beautiful to him but I loved the way he made her feel beautiful. I am glad to see neither of them holding back and truly cherishing the union from 'him' and 'her' to a 'them'.

For me, this chapter was equally emotional as it was loving and romantic because after having been a witness to their journey so far, I totally understand how important this is for them.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

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CRAZY4CARTOON

@CRAZY4CARTOON

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#274

awesome
superb update
the
emotional concept was so nice
beauiflly writen love the way they married wedding
wa awesome

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mcmelina

@mcmelina

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#275

read part a n i must say what a sweet lovely display of emotions...will catchup with rest of the chapters soon..

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#276

O M G!!!!! FINAAALLLY!!!! MIND BLOWING UPDATE!!!!

Part D!!! Speechless!!! Finally they become one!!!! HOT HOT HOT!!! I am hoping to read more of these😳😉😆

Sorry for late reply and thanks for the pm xx

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256748

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#277

Awesome update

Wow Can't wait for next update.

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#278

Beautiful beyond comprehension...alluring, sensuous , beautiful , passionate , mind blowing update... Such is the beauty of your works, even a sensuous exciting first time looked so very serene n mesmerising that it truly took our breaths away...loved this most memorable day , the start of their beautiful journey as a whole tooo much... You truly deserve an applaud for such breath taking update ... Thanks a ton

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#279

bl**dy awesome

lovely written

loved how he surprised her with the proposal n the dress

how romantic is he

loved all the pictures

n the toasts were too funny

the way u wrote their excitement n their nervousness had me engrossed

even though I loved it all don't ask me why but my fav bit was when he took her to akaashs photo to introduce her as his it just made me feel warm n overwhelmed

finally them becoming one boy that was... hot

again awesome chapter

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin