IshRa TS - Aye Humnawa..PT3/PG13 26.09.15 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Boo2014

Anu and Nidoo, take a bow. Really lovely. It had every emotion from passion to pain. ๐Ÿ‘

I would love to read about their car journey ๐Ÿ˜‰


Thank you Amber ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
So would I ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Wohoo.. That was another brilliant peace of writing from you Nidoo.. Amazing.. Beautiful update ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Awww i loved ishra talk... the reasons why they love each other so much... they deserve and made for each other... awww Raman wants there symbol of love.. Chotu jhansi ki Rani.. to give lectures... so cute ๐Ÿ˜† lovely update both updates from you and Anu made me fall in love with ishra all over again.. โค๏ธ

Thanks for this beautiful ishra treat... Thanks for the PM Nidoo ๐Ÿค—


Thank you so much Kavya ๐Ÿค—

No matter what he said in the show, he wants junior JKR only ๐Ÿ˜† making even Adi-Ruhi dance to her tunes ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: kaa1202

First part - Anu has both sensual & emotional parts equally. You beautifully handled that. Nice. It is tough to match this part purely coz of the blend of the above mentioned feelings.


Second part - Nidoo, u done justice to the first part. The Way he questioned her & the manner in which replied was nice. Wild & naughty side of a person eventually comes outta any relationship sooner or later. Purple lines are my favorite too.



Both of you did their work good & most importantly it seems connected which is a good sign for any story. Congrats girls๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you Kaartik ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
@bold - Glad it seemed like so, because if there was any discontinuity, it'd not have flown seamlessly ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

My God !!! This TS was a complete package.. An entire assembly of emotions. Love and being loved is the most precious treasure for anyone. And both of them have found their treasure in each other..


The expression of emotions was very well portrayed so that i went into the flew of the words i was reading and i mean it.. Passion , Love, Trust, Care, Respect and Acceptance, all of the things were displayed so beautifully.. I loved the conversation...

Anu and Nidhi You people owe a standing ovation for writing it..

Anu- I loved the way you portrayed Ishita and Raman both having an equal flare of passion for each other.. Though our Puttar is more vocal but Ishita is shown to find her solace with him only.. I am glad their human nature was portrayed here instead of showing them some saints or something who are not at all shy and conserve in loving each other though thank God they were not caught making out in car.. But the peace they find in each others arms is something a blessing to their bond. This part was fill of passion.. Kudos to you.. ๐Ÿ‘


Nidhi- I was left speechless with the way you made Ishita express her love for him and at the end calling it as a selfish one coz he was an integral part of her life. I loved the way she tried to sooth the pain of self guilt he was going through.. And i loved the mention of 'we' and 'us' in her words coz their life is one, in fact they are one in all true sense.. And man the give and take logic of Raman was so adorable.. the way he mentions his checklist and the way he said she has completed his one and he is yet to complete hers.. I truly loved it..

This is the IshRa I connect to.. Who are honest,, with themselves and with each other.. Be it love, be it trust, be it doubt or be it the fear of losing each other and eventually losing the happiness they finally found in each other and with each other..

I am really sorry for such a boring and long comment but when it comes to ishRa i lose myself completely..

Once again Thank you for such a lovely TS... I hope to read more from you guys and you two make a lovely team


Wow! Such a long comment ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I love long comments ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

@bold - I feel Ishita and her feelings haven't been explored much in the show. Though we know all that she has been through in the past, but it hasn't been portrayed to that extent. Whenever I start writing, the Ishita that I have conjured in my mind as per the storyline and early character sketch, I try bring that element out ๐Ÿ˜ณ

@red - Sailing in the same boat ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

@blue - It was fun writing with Anu, will definitely try again ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thank you Sakshi ๐Ÿค— Glad you liked it so much ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ..ishra..

Nice update ๐Ÿ˜Š


Originally posted by: sush_rddt

super update dear!!!

lovely!



Originally posted by: amenaquadri1

so cute & loved the making love at night & plz continue this


Thank you everyone ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ We'll continue soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: anisha960

anu n nidoo
this was perfect piece from emotional to too much passion
u both nailed it
loved ur work !!!


Thanks Anisha! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Superb Update

Continue Soon
Can You Please Add Me To Your PM List
Thank You


Thank you ๐Ÿ˜ณ Added you for PM ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Wow to both parts


Both are entirely different yet together.
Loved their love making in first part n
Their talk in second

Hehe she is real silk smitha...


Thank you ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Glad you liked it ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

Superb TS yr...
u both did a fabulous job...
loved the way u showed their emotions after their break down...
good job


Thank you so much Nikki ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: rutu83

both parts are wonderful - see cvs missed opportunities are our gains ๐Ÿ‘

so...we get the car journey no?๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰


Haha.. truly! CVs had such a golden chance of showing something like this
Yes, definitely! Anu's on it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Thank you Rutu ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by -Nidoo- - 10 years ago

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