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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ArSha_ManNan

Amazing update...
I loved the flashbacks...
MaNan scenes were beautifully penned...
Oh wow...
Navya n nandu in traditional wear...
Manik n cabir are also dere heina?

Thnkz 4 the pm


Aww thank you!! Yup ladies in anarkali and men in sherwani!! Manik and Cabir are also there!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
kaan pakad ke shoory dear!!!
i promised i ll comment long par main thodi busy with exams
forgive me please
ab main sab pad kar comment karungi woh bhi xtra lambba reading n again m sorry naw m redin!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aresha_uchiha

kaan pakad ke shoory dear!!!

i promised i ll comment long par main thodi busy with exams
forgive me please
ab main sab pad kar comment karungi woh bhi xtra lambba reading n again m sorry naw m redin!!



It's okay!!! Relax *Manik Malhotra style ;)*
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice story...read all the parts in one go...continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
read all parts in one go
Loved it
Cont soon
Plz pm me about your updates...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update fast
When u r going to update pls tell us
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 9:

"Hello ladies! How come you guys here? Are you like following the two popular and insanely hot men of our college huh?" Cabir stuttered with a playful smirk.

"Oh please! You and hot?! C'mon Brad Pitt would die out of a disease called ' effects after seeing a joker ' if he glances at you even for a second!!" Navya quickly gave a sarcastic reply, and Cabir couldn't do anything but roll his eyes. Throughout the convo of CaVya or rather bickerings, Manik and Nandini were quite,unable to say anything they kept staring at each other, getting flashbacks of the moment spent together, the fights,the teasing and the manofying sessions came as a film infront of each other.

Manik had something planned in his mind; tad bit sure about Nandini actually being his Nandu got a hint of assurance by this cute little eyelock.Nandini couldn't resist.No matter how many times her inner soul knocked her to look away but she just couldn't or didn't want to,it was becoming a need now; to just go and take him in her embrace and tell him countless lame jokes just to notice his stupid faces and the giggles he used to break or tease her for tangling up with the words.

Manik's p.o.v.

Nandini! Tell me something Goddammit! Is it you? Please? Why do I feel like its you?I can't pretend being happy. I need you best friend! I need you! My eyes welled up, I can't take it anymore. I kept staring at her but she didn't voice up! It's killing me now; those big big eyes, those plump cheeks, the pouty lips this is so much of Nandini I am hundred and a million percent sure it is her but why couldn't I recognize her! Wait I need to check something..

(With a smirk on his face he left from there )

~~~

"In a corner of this huge world,stood an ordinary little boy; loving the stars and drinking in the reality of life at such an young age!"

(Echoed a voice from the stage making all the heads turn up towards him along with Nandini recognizing the known vocals)

"Having no place to go He sat with his guitar playing tunes which had no meaning yet a soft melody."

(Stood Manik thinking and speaking the words;What he meant? Do you know? Does she know? Well, yeah she does.)

"One day, actually at the middle of the night, sparks lit up in his dull life in the form of a girl! A doll whose smile could even melt ice: warm as coffee and bright as sunlight. His BEST FRIEND the only empty space in his life instantly filled up!

Little secrets were shared, tears were shed, laughter was heard.

Two hurt souls,found solace in each other, but one day SHE LEFT!

Left him;All alone to face the wrath of this cruel world, promising she would keep in touch but didn't. He was hurt, he lost hope but whenever he tried to let go of her, her smiling face flashed infront of his eyes; no longer could he resist, he cried and called, searched and screamed for her, but she never came..."

(Every one was teary by then wanting to know more about the two bestfriends! Nandini's eyes reddened tears not stopping ,she very well knew who it was for. Navya was shocked to see her as Nandini wouldn't cry in these emotional stuff until it's dearly close to her heart. Nandini couldn't hold anymore, it was enough for her now, it was too much to bear. But..

Did he recognize her? Aahh the question still remained...

"He needs her now. He has had enough of the brutality. He wants her now! ComeBack is the only words he wants her to know and He knows She is here! No matter what happens, even if the world comes to an end, they will still be Best Friends Forever.

~Meilleurs amis pour toujours~

(A spot boy handed him the guitar along with a chair, he tuned his guitar and...)

Aaj dil dukha hai

Tum yaad aaye

Anjane log hain

Apne kahan dhoond paayen

(Manik started the song making all the lassies captivated by his dead drop gorgeous slash husky deep voice and the strikingly hot figure; Nandini was well aware to what the consequences were going to land upto, either by hugging him with all the force or walking away again)

Jaagey hain soye nahi

Aisi hai meri ye bechaini

Din bhi wohi raatein wohi

Sanson mein sansein hain nahi

(Manik sang looking straight in her eyes but she chose to avoid which didn't go unnoticed by Manik)

(Hm hmm, hm hmm, hm hmm hm hmm hm hm hmm)

Shaamein ab dhalti nahi

Anchal jo tera simat jaaye

Aap yahan hamesha rahein

Duuri rahe na ho fasle

(Manik and Nandini both started remembering the days and nights spent together doing homeworking errm not really and playing pillow fight;good days those were)

(Hm hmm, hm hmm, hm hmm hm hmm hmm hmm hmm)

Jaagey hein soye nahi

Aisi hai meri ye bechaini

Din bhi wohi raatein wohi

Sanson mein sansein hain nahi

(Manik sang with so much sadness that Nandini herself felt guilty for leaving)

(Hm hmm, hm hmm, hm hmm hm hmm hm hm hmm) [x2]

(Ho hoo, ho hoo, ho hoo ho hoo ho ho hoo) [x2]

~~ Ab agar tum mile to~~

Itna yakeen hai

Hass denge hum to

~~ Rona nahi hai...~~

Manik couldn't get off the stage when a heavy force pulled him back, Nandini couldn't hold back anymore and crashed in his chest letting soft sobs out and making Manik smile and he hugged her back.

Hi guys! I know I know I am late as hell but what to do I had tons of guests in my house, floorings are done in my room and Mom always keeps me busy in works..couldn't get much time but anyways Here You Go with the update!!

Throw rotten bananas,eggs,juices anything but don't forget to like and comment.

You guys motivate me a lot and help me keep moving and writing I am blessed to have readers like you..

Well i was thinking of writing another story so if you want me to do let me know in the comments!!

THANK YOU 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally an update! I almost had forgotten about the story! Thanks for the PM. Going to read the old chappies again! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update...
Too emotional...
But finally together...
Cont soon..

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Waiting for the next part
Update soon

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