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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Fabulous update jigs👏.

With simple words you bring this confrontation out so beautifully that got tears in my eyes. I have no words to say. You got everything covered brilliantly.

For kabir it might be a joke but he wants this thing with Khushi and for good part it helped arnav and Khushi to clear their mind. Arnav might not be fully responsible for their broken marriage but mostly he did make things worse. And Khushi is right if not of her divorce paper he might keep on going like this and he should accept this if he wants to mend things.

For her parents things will change slowly. I think even if her father knew what his wife is doing with Khushi and Payal he didn't take necessary measure to prevent this situation. He could have taken hard decision towards Payal and avni to make them realise their mistakes. And now he is standing head down infront of his younger daughter.

Avni might wants to correct her doing but habits are hard to let go in few days which you done for years. Even if she don't want still she end up hurting Khushi in one or the other way. Don't know when will she learn.

Dadi is ever so sweet hurt seeing her loved ones fight like this. This chapter turns out awesome.

Waiting for Wednesday to come soon. Thanks for early update and pm.

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Emotional one.. U made me cry...
Loved it <3

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deblina

@maitydeblina

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Ausu m update:)
Finally khushi left the pretence:)
Now let see how they work together,hope they get a proper path:)

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

A sterling episode, meri jaan. You take the cake on all these family confrontations, the one that began with Arnav and Khushi confronting their past, and the second involving Avni, Payal and Khushi. As is often the case with family friction, years of pent-up resentments and frustrations that needed to be addressed, and probably got buried under the veneer of protocol and political correctness. Life does not give one too many opportunities to fix these issues, so it was a good thing indeed that Khushi seized the moment and said all that needed to be said. Glad she had Arnav and Dadi around as her support system. This was in many ways a cathartic and necessary chapter, and funny you should mention you are giving us an interlude, Jigs. I would say for me this is the interlude...or prelude to their new life ahead.

Waiting!

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

This was THE update Jigs! Oh you had me so emotional with this update and I am so in awe of this Khushi. She is strong, weak, vulnerable, career oriented, yet she fights both in court and in her life! She has really made an impact in my heart.. Kudos to you for bringing that feeling in me :)

She had her way today and she made sure her voice was heard at loud and clear. I loved how she held Arnav in her hands and made him listen to the truth however bitter and harsh.. I wish she had done this earlier and not waited for their marriage to reach this stage and then rectify things.

Gosh the slight corner in my heart that had a little space for Avni has vanished and gone. Never to come back. Once bitten, twice shy. This is Khushi's state now. This is why she isn't able to accept their parents, even though they repent now. I still doubt Avni. My heart is not accepting her. Well, I am still waiting for the aftermath of Arnav and Khushi in the confines of their house where I hope peace would yet again reside back in that. I can clearly see that she is emotionally drained and unstable. I am glad Arnav is there for her.

Hoping to see how things will move forward in fervent anticipation,

$adh!

Edited by Sadh123 - 10 years ago

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momai14

@momai14

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

i liked dis stronger khushi...waiting for next...

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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Res

Unres

Brilliant update jigs.. You took this story to a different level..:) i was expecting that arshi's confrontation will lead to solve their problem rather than worsen it..! And i am happy that khushi stand up this time very strongly.. Communication always helps a person to resolve the problem, that whats they needed..!! They needed calm conversation, nit an argument..!! They start with argument but at end they agreed with situation that happened in their past!! I love it that khushi talk all about her miseries.. Specially that alisha chapter coz i want arnav to know that what kind of woman she was..?? And how she is responsible for creating rift between them..!!

If that was all not enough, avni n payal both dig their own grave by taunting n scolding khushi...:) i cant believe avni was still concerned for her family's reputation rather than her daughter's life..!! I so so so love you jigs for giving us that part where khushi confronts her mother and payal.. Exceptional work :) i was teary by the end of the update but i k ow that was the need of the story n i cant tell you how happy i am after reading this update :) loved it alot.. Thanks for pm!

Edited by Dhrenu - 10 years ago

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Archana

@Archu61

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Khushie has finally stopped walking away from confrontations where her husband and family is concerned ,I think she has had enough of always being taken for granted and she beautifully let her mom and sister realized how they hurt her all these years never supported her emotionally ,I hope her mom wakes up to the fact that she let khushie go ,I loved the way you crafted this confrontation ,and opened Arnav eyes to how he avoided facing some home truths ,I hope in future her mom and payal redeem themselves in front of khushie .

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Loved the early update Jigs. I am so happy with khushi. She stood up for herself and arnav at the right moment. Eventhough it all happened just before leaving, I felt - it was now or never.

Khushi was so right when she told payal to become independent and look after her kids. Loved her words to Avni.

In the beginning, I could feel the tension between arnav and khushi when they stood staring at each other after Kabir left. Here, khushi accused arnav of so many mistakes, but is he only one at fault? He might have drifted apart because of Khushi's continuous obsession to have a baby or over the top pretentious behevior that everything is fine even after the miscarriage. I feel both are at fault.

Whatever it was, that can not be the reason why khushi was laughing Kabir's pathetic joke.

Superbly written. Waiting for next one

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sweety421

@sweety421

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#130

Great update dear...
Khushi was the hero today...
Her confrontation with Arnav was much needed...
But I think only positive came out of it...They both know that they were wrong in the past...but inspite of all they both need each other...
Here m angry with Avni now...how could she say all that..? I mean before the party she was guilty fo her behaviour with Khushi... And now she exactly did the same mistake again...
She lost khushi once again... I Loved the fact that khushi stood fo herself and Arnav in front of her family today... Avni got an eye opener... I hope now she will learn...
Payal is rili a gone case... today khushi tackled her brilliantly...It was much needed... payal rilli needs to be on her own...And also stop being jealous...
They both r leaving now...to their home...Which I hope will bring peace to them..and strengthen their love more...
I Loved the update dear... u give such justice to each and every charcter... their emotions were so perfectly reflected...Brilliant u were as always...
Waiting to read more soon...tc