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nroy195

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

its awesome story n 😊😊 pls update soon

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manan_0711

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Ty for d pm...

wow dat was a nyc start...

dats a diff concept...

loved it...

plz continue soon...

'll b waiting for d update...

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nroy195

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

pls update nex part soon😊😊

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

great start

please add me in the PM list.

please do continue

bye sumi

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Nandini_goyal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Interesting... Great start

Update soon

A request: please add an index post

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Calina7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Awesome!!! God this is great to see Manik carving for Nandani.

Loved it!!!

Update soon and please pm meh!!!

It is simply awsome!!! And please make Manik word harder!!!!

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audity.sm

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

hey guys im back...thanks for the response...this part is going to be all about flashback of how it all started..hope u like it :)

chapter2
flashback
3 months back

Manik was driving to college..suddenly saw nandini standing on the road...he recognized her immediately as he could miss those big round nerdy glasses...(imagine deepika from yjhd)
the relationship between between nandini n manik was like that of a typical first girl and the bad boy of the class...they never talked..there was an unknown barrier between them..but whenever their eyes met they passed a cordial yet sweet smile to each other...
nandini looked worried...manik stpped his car and went to her
M:anything wrong miss.Einstein?
N:woh umm..
M:what?
it took a while for nandini t0 get normal..as manik never talked with her before..
M:im sorry can u not speak?
N:of course i can
M:oh..vaise tumhe maine pehle kabhi baaat karte huye nehi suna nehi..
N:oh...
M:so whats up?yaha pe khari khari konsa scientific discovery kar rahi ho?
N:wo umm..my car broke down..so im stuck
M:oh..thats ok..come with me im going to college anyway
N:u will drop me?
M:dont look surprised..im a lovely person..
N:oh umm..
M:listen tum yaha pe therke wo umm wo umm karti raho aur main jata hu..ok?
N:manik..
M:what?
N:please mujhe le jao..
M:ok miss.einstein..
manan entered into the car..manik turned on the music..it was too loud for nandini's comfort..nandini gave him a pleading look
M:is something wrong
nandini bobbed her head in the negative
manik smiled and lowered the volume..nandini looked at him being shocked..
M:miss.einstein agar tum brain ki baat smajhti ho to main dil ki baat..samjhi?
Nandini bobbed her head in affirmative
M:god u r so cute!!
a sweet blush crept on nandinis face while manik started the car..
soon they reached college...manik parked the car..
M:vaise i dropped u here..so in way i did u a favor right?
N:ya..
M:sooo ummm...u have to return the favor
N:what do u want?
manik leaned towards her..nandini closed her eyes in horror.manik smirked and opened her seat belt..
and moved back
M:that ill ask for later...vaise tumne kya socha..
Nandini had turned completely red by then..she jumped out of the car and ran away..manik laughed at her innocence..when he came out of the car he saw her returning...
N:woh manik umm..
M:ummm??
N:thanks..
with that she turned and walked away before his response
M:pagal hain..par jaisi bhi hain acchi hi hain..
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break time
manik was walking around..he was lonely as none of his friends showed up that day..
he was walking around when he suddenly felt some hugging him from his back..he closed his eyes in horror and prayed to god that it wasn't who he thought it was..he slowly turned around and to his dismay it was who he thought it was..it was karishma!!!(imagine from splitsvilla)
M:hi karishma!!
K:hey there baby!!!!!!!
M:whats up?when did u get back from uk?
K:last night!!u know umm im here for 3 whole months!!i missed u so much!!
M:ya me too!!
K:aww baby!!
she was about hug him..manik stopped her..
M:i have a girlfriend!!!
K:oh umm..who is it?
M:ill show u(stammering)
K:ok cool..lets go
M:now?
K:ya..why not?
M:excellent question...why not..lets go
karishma out her hand around maniks elbow..they walked around for a while but just couldnt find any one..suddenly he saw nandini and his brain clicked..he ran to him
M:baby!!!
N:what?
M:dont say anything ill explain later..
N:what?
M:karishma meet nandini my girlfriend..and nandini meet karishma my childhood friend..
N:hi!
K:hi!listen its really nice to meet you..but i gotta go but ill definitely catch up with u later o..
N:ok sure!!
K:bye manik!!
M:bye..
karishma left
N:what the hell was that?
M:wo umm listen.she is my childhood friend but she is kind of a psyco..she is crazy about me but she is a lovely person thats why i cant say it out loud to her..
N:ok..but where do i come from?
M:well i kinda told her that i have a girlfriend..which i dont...
N:why me?
M:well i didnt take your name exactly...but u came suddenly and im sorry..
N:ok im outta here..
M:no no no..o have to help..
N:nop!!
manik knelt down and joind his hands
M:miss Einstein please..
N:manik!!
M:oh wait!!i dont have to say please u owe a favor!!
N:what?
M:remember this morning?
N:oh no no no no no no no no no
M:oh yes yes yes yes yes yes yes
N:oh crap!!
M:oh yes!!
N:oh god
M:oh come on..its just college..
N:for how long?
M:3 months!!
N:manik!!!
M:please...come on pretty please!!
he made puppy dog eyes..
N:ok..so college..hufff
Manik got a text from karishma
M:ya and a party tomorrow night..
N:manik..
M:come on..tomorrow is Saturday night..u would be going to party anyway why not this one..
N:i dont part on saturday night..
M:oh god u have so much to learn to be my girlfriend..
N:huff...ayyiaapppaa please save me!!!
flash back end
present
manik finally came out of his trance and drifted to sleep with a smile on his face :)

so guys here it is...im done!!please tell me how was it..the more replies i get the faster i will update..till then lots of tlc to u all!!!!!!!!!
precap:more flashback n present drama...

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mehek.kwatra97

@mehek.kwatra97

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Nyc update...

Waiting for next part...

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chandni_as

@chandni_as

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

I loved both the chapters of ur story..it is really an awesome one..the idea of the story is quite unique and the way u have written it is impressive too...update the next chapter as early as possible...eagerly waiting for it..

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suraiya77

@suraiya77

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Omg!
Mindblowing chapter!
Loved it very very much
their first conversation was awesome
but how come Manik has never heard her voice.. They are in the same class right?
Manik seems to be a flirt
so this is how Manik made her his fake gf!
Update soon

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