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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mohammadnoureen

Great prologue. Will start reading soon!

thank you Dea
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Posted: 10 years ago
have updated on wattpad Dea.. I don't have net in my tab...I ll update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Acchu02

have updated on wattpad Dea.. I don't have net in my tab...I ll update soon

ok
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Posted: 10 years ago
you can read here as well

http://w.tt/1iibQDt

chapter 4

Jo's prov

I stir in my sleep and slowly opened my eye, I noticed I was in a huge room, walls with grey and white paint with some photo frames, I was tucked in a cosy bed with sheets wrapped around me tightly, OMG, I immediately sat up noticing it was not my bed, I remembered the last night incident, so it wasn't a dream, I am really kidnapped

I immediately got down the bed, where is mothi, O god why are you testing me like this, I want to check for mothi

I ran towards door, tired opening but it was all in vain

How to get out from here I was thinking, I saw the window open, but wait I can't leave Mothi here, I want to search where is she first, but how.

I heard someone turn door knob, I saw a guy from yesterday entering, "hello luna", he said

"hello what", I asked in confusion not understanding what he said

"ho, he.l..lo hello Ms.Jodha, Jallal Sir has some important work, he will come by afternoon, he told you should have your breakfast and rest", he said looking at me

So this Greek god name is Jallal, Ridiculous, I thought they are going to kill me, but here they are treating me.. do they treat all the kidnappers like this, providing them a room, a luxury one and look after their needs.. what if they are trying to get our trust and rape us.. O god no.. Geez| my dual mind

I saw that man going back, "hey wait, where is my friend", I asked in urgency to know whether she is alright or not

"O, the other girl, she is in Mirza Sir room", he said.

"And where that", hoping to find out some clue so I can go to her...

"you can meet her Ms.", but before that you got to have your breakfast, and Jallal sir have strictly ordered us, if you want I will send your breakfast here", he said hoping me to answer.

"O, yeah I would like to have my breakfast here only", I said thinking I need energy to escape

"ok , miss I will send it here", he said and turned

"O, wait Mr. ___ what's your name?", I said in confusion not knowing what to call

"Abdul", he said slyly, I don't know, why he is acting so weirdly

"Abdul,.. ok Abdul can you take where Mothi is?, I like to have my breakfast with her", hoping he won't deny

"ok, Ms. As you wish", he said , follow me he said and turned

Thank god, he didn't deny, now we can escape, I smirked evilly and ran behind him

He opened the door, I entered the room and he left, I ran towards Mothi, closing the door, and jumped on her bed to see she was opening her eye in shock, when she saw me, she immediately hugged me tightly.

"I saw a weirdest dream, you know we got kidnapped", she said still hugging me.

I hugged her "it's not dream, it's in real we got kidnapped", I said pulling away to see her face.

"what ? we got kidnapped, what are we going to do now", she started freaking out

I held her tightly "calm down Mothi, we will escape", I said hoping she will understand, I saw her confused and explained her the plan, and at the end I saw her smirking evilly.

LATER AFTER BREAKFAST

I jumped out of the window and waited for Mothi

"Mothi jump", I said hoping no one hears me, and she jumped.

I ran towards, to check whether she is ok

"Are you alright", I asked

"all good, let's go", she said, more like a whisper.

We both turned to leave but what we saw made us freak , making our wide go in wide, Both Jallal and Mirza standing there with red shot eye.

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OMG what will jodha and Mothi do now?

will jallal get angry?

no proof reading done so please excuse me for mistakes done

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Edited by Acchu02 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Acchu02

you can read here as well

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/48736789/write/166290320

<font size="4">chapter 4</font>

<font size="4">Jo's prov</font>


<font size="3">I stir in my sleep and
slowly opened my eye, I noticed I was in a huge room, walls with grey
and white paint with some photo frames, I was tucked in a cosy bed with
sheets wrapped around me tightly, OMG, I immediately sat up noticing it
was not my bed, I remembered the last night incident, so it wasn't a
dream, I am really kidnapped </font>

<font size="3"> I immediately got down the bed, where is mothi, O god why are you testing me like this, I want to check for mothi</font>

<font size="3"> I ran towards door, tired opening but it was all in vain</font>

<font size="3"> How to get out from
here I was thinking, I saw the window open, but wait I can't leave Mothi
here, I want to search where is she first, but how.</font>

<font size="3"> I heard someone turn door knob, I saw a guy from yesterday entering, "hello luna", he said</font>

<font size="3"> "hello what", I asked in confusion not understanding what he said</font>

<font size="3"> "ho, he.l..lo hello
Ms.Jodha, Jallal Sir has some important work, he will come by afternoon,
he told you should have your breakfast and rest", he said looking at me
</font>

<font size="3"> So this Greek god name
is Jallal, Ridiculous, I thought they are going to kill me, but here
they are treating me.. do they treat all the kidnappers like this,
providing them a room, a luxury one and look after their needs.. what if
they are trying to get our trust and rape us.. O god no.. Geez| my dual
mind</font>

<font size="3"> I saw that man going back, "hey wait, where is my friend", I asked in urgency to know whether she is alright or not</font>

<font size="3"> "O, the other girl, she is in Mirza Sir room", he said.</font>

<font size="3"> "And where that", hoping to find out some clue so I can go to her...</font>

<font size="3"> "you can meet her Ms.",
but before that you got to have your breakfast, and Jallal sir have
strictly ordered us, if you want I will send your breakfast here", he
said hoping me to answer.</font>

<font size="3"> "O, yeah I would like to have my breakfast here only", I said thinking I need energy to escape</font>

<font size="3"> "ok , miss I will send it here", he said and turned</font>

<font size="3"> "O, wait Mr. ___ what's your name?", I said in confusion not knowing what to call</font>

<font size="3"> "Abdul", he said slyly, I don't know, why he is acting so weirdly</font>

<font size="3"> "Abdul,.. ok Abdul can you take where Mothi is?, I like to have my breakfast with her", hoping he won't deny</font>

<font size="3"> "ok, Ms. As you wish", he said , follow me he said and turned</font>

<font size="3">Thank god, he didn't deny, now we can escape, I smirked evilly and ran behind him</font>

<font size="3">He opened the door, I
entered the room and he left, I ran towards Mothi, closing the door, and
jumped on her bed to see she was opening her eye in shock, when she saw
me, she immediately hugged me tightly.</font>

<font size="3">"I saw a weirdest dream, you know we got kidnapped", she said still hugging me.</font>

<font size="3">I hugged her "it's not dream, it's in real we got kidnapped", I said pulling away to see her face.</font>

<font size="3">"what ? we got kidnapped, what are we going to do now", she started freaking out</font>

<font size="3">I held her tightly "calm
down Mothi, we will escape", I said hoping she will understand, I saw
her confused and explained her the plan, and at the end I saw her
smirking evilly.</font>

<font size="3">LATER AFTER BREAKFAST</font>

<font size="3">I jumped out of the window and waited for Mothi </font>

<font size="3">"Mothi jump", I said hoping no one hears me, and she jumped.</font>

<font size="3">I ran towards, to check whether she is ok</font>

<font size="3"> "Are you alright", I asked </font>

<font size="3"> "all good, let's go", she said, more like a whisper.</font>

<font size="3">We both turned to leave
but what we saw made us freak , making our wide go in wide, Both Jallal
and Mirza standing there with red shot eye.</font>

<font size="3">-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------</font>

<font size="3">OMG what will jodha and Mothi do now?</font>

<font size="3">will jallal get angry?</font>

<font size="3">no proof reading done so please excuse me for mistakes done </font>

<font size="3">vote pls</font>

<font size="3">comment pls</font>

<font size="3">my twitter id: Archana_Nayak02</font>

<font size="3">Instagram: archana_mv</font>

<font size="3">thank you</font>

<font size="3">
love you all</font>

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

oye archana page not found

check now dea
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update archu dear
Omg Jo and moti r kidnapped
Who r the kidnappers?? Jalal Mirza and Abdul hahaha
Interesting yaar, but why they kidnapped them??
Omg Jo and moti tried to escape ?
Continue soon
Thansk for pm:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb chapter
jalal,mirza and abdul r kidnappers
jo and moti try to escape
but why they kidnap them
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update acchu... I liked idea of this story... nd I follow up on wattpad also...
update soon dear... y did r they kidnapped. ...???
thanks for pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Acchu🤗 Awesome update dear.
Jalal and Mirza were the kidnappers. Awe interesting to see them giving royal treatment to Jo and Moti.
BTW why did they kidnapped them.?
Curios to know further story..
Update next chappy soon.
Thanks for the pm.

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