ArHi SS: Memories|| *Thread Two Link page 150* - Page 28

Originally posted by: Meenu_Luvs_ASR

the word has certainly become a common swear word.. F*** why am I even talking about that😛😆

Ahh.. another filler eh?😉

But the way you are building it.. I am enjoying..

Eagerly waiting for that Teaser to come in update😛

Sorry about not commenting on previous chap.. I will be irregular... kindly bare it..

And that was actually a relief that Anjali is the one with the problem.. 😃

Originally posted by: l.o.v.e.

Such a great concept n such a great update...I was eagerly waiting for your update...finally Arshi!!!continue soon...

Originally posted by: sonia_92

this is definitely fresh and very interesting. can't wait to read more :)

Originally posted by: rk2127

Oh my Anjali got a very bitter wake up call when she forgot about her car at the publisher. Whatever she might have expected with her earlier episodes, Alzheimer's must certainly not on her list.

That was a shocker to Arnav too. It was visible to how he who valued his work and the way his all the living sec revolves around his work dropped everything to go to Anjali. His only relation who he understand he is going to lose.

So him keeping himself busy and not allowing himself any reliever in terms of a companion, female companion is because someone butchered his heart badly. Well time to move on I guess.

Khushi seems to be a mystery yet is like an open book. She was hurt by her fathers act of leaving her and her sink mother alone at the time of need and her brother failed her too. And her only good memories are what she is holding on too to keep her sane and connected to the only family she is left, though other need is money but that is super-flawed since given how she was let down by Akash, she wants him to pay by bearing her demands. That my take.

Well he did find her a job she is good at and booked her a flight.

Now destiny will role it's dice.

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

What a story gal I am truly speechless! 👏👏 Thank God i coincidently came across it and read both of the chapters in one go together with the prologue, 😃 otherwise you had me missing that wonderful story of yours for sure! 😉

That is some stuff yaar, three contradicting characters. One is a writer sure she has got Alzheimer but writer's will always be writer's my favourite personalities! 😉

To tell the truth your these two chapters had me scared shit less because sometimes i too forget very important stuff in just one or two minutes, goes in one room and forgets completely what i am doing in this room in the first place and sometimes even forgets to add sugar and salt? I don't know if these things are just my suspicion or not! 😕

Now coming towards your both updates i loved your style of first person narration gal. There were tiny weeny bits of details that made me laugh sometimes and sometimes made me emotional! I loved that line when Anjali said marry me bed! Arnav and Anjali's talk was humorous too, the way she said chi when she forgot too add sugar! 😆😉

The character that i loved the most was ofcourse khushi's. Totall badass gal loved those lines of her that you wrote in the end of the second chapter while she was sitting in the tail of the plane! Love what other's hate etc! 😉

Here i found out two contradiction's in Arnav's and Khushi's character, he doesn't like to travel in planes he hates it, while she will be loving what he will hate in future. So i think more of the tom and jerry fights will be seen in near future! 😆😉

I can somehow relate to that character too as I am a lazy ass gal too, never wants to do a job however any one pushes me around. I even got a job on skills basis but ran away on the third day he he! 😆 they wanted hard working person and i am a definite no that category. 😆😉

But you are a very hard working gal dear, PHd and stuff I am really impressed with you yaar! I am a computer sciences person too so i know how challenging it would have been for you to write on a psychological disease then give the right amount of emotion to the person suffering from Alzheimer's, create a whole psychological background and then give life to your characters! I am in awe of your writing style dear! Simply breathtaking! 👏👏

Next time do send me the PM for future updates dear, 😳 otherwise i would really come here to stalk your thread. 😆 You can ask Sadhana that I always fulfil my devilish threats! 😈😆

Originally posted by: anu1017

Week e update as usual Cheeni!! Aww it's Anji with the disease, felt so bad reading about her with so much creativity losing a bit of her mind at a time.

Poor Khushi's mom also had Alzeihmers, when a person gets a degenerative disease it affects everyone in the family!!!

Cannot wait for the next update!!!!