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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Woderful update...

Pm me fr ur future updates :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
interesting story, wonderful start... loved the teacher's response to Khushi's innocent questions... continue soon dear... waiting to know about Arnav and read their first meet ❤️ lovely update 👍🏼
Edited by christi002 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23


Chapter#2






Attraction





A man in his late twenties got out of his luxurious car and moved toward his huge mansion followed by his assistant and body guards.

"WHAT ABOUT SHYAM?" Arnav asked in his arrogant tone not looking at anything particular.

"ASR WE COULDN'T FIND HIM" Hearing this his blood boiled.

"WHAT THE ****..." He turned toward his assistant and glared at him angrily before saying "I WANT SHYAM MANOHAR JHA ON MY FEET AT NIGHT ITSELF OR ELSE I WILL KILL YOU" Aman shivered before nodding rapidly and left to his given work.

ASR entered inside his mansion and found his family sitting in living room as always he went toward his ROOM.

"WHAT THE...HP" he shouted making his family flinched.

"JI SAHIB..." HP shivered.

"WHO TO PU PINK SHEET ON MY BED" He said angrily glaring at him.

"SAAB I DIDN'T DO THAT...I"

"THEN YOUR GHOST DID THAT"

"ARNAV I DID THAT" said Anjali entering inside.

"WHY?" asked Arnav irritated.

"ARNAV I WANT YOU TO MOVE ON..."

"OH C'MON I M NOT A CHILD, I AM 28 YEAR OLD AND WHEN TIME ARRIVED FOR ME TO MOVE ON THEN I WILL MOVE ON WITHOUT TELLING YOU" with that he turn toward HP and ask him to change sheet.

"DI..." He called his sister who was silent.

"STOP INTERFERING"

"I AM SORRY" she said and hugged him.



at night

"ASR WILL KILL YOU ALL IF HE DIED OR ESCAPED"

they all carried man and took him to the backside of ASR's Private mansion.

AR club

"KHUSHI DID MACK AND AMAN KNEW YOU ARE HERE" asked Fizza.

"YUP AND THEY WISH ME GOOD LUCK" khushi grinned.

"KHUSHI WHERE ARE ENTRY TICKETS?" kirti asked khushi eager to see beautiful club.

"FOLLOW ME..." Khushi said confidently and others follow her knowing well how crazy khushi can be sometime.

"EXCUSE ME..." guard looked at the beauty in front of him and was mesmerized.

"YES" he heard her voice and cleaned his throat before saying "YOUR MEMBERSHIP CARD"

"ASR HAD CALL ME HERE, I WILL SING HERE IN THIS CLUB AND HE ALLOWED MY FRIENDS TOO" khushi said with such a genuine tone that made guard to bow his head welcoming her inside. all laughed silently.

OSS, KHUSHI, KIRTI, FIZZA, VARUN, JAY, MIRA and Alley left shocked looking at stunning club.

"MAN THIS IS AMAZING" exclaim kirti excited.

"WELL ALL THANKS TO ME" said khushi raising her imaginary collars.

"WHAT IF THEY CAUGHT US" khushi winked at oss and said "DON'T WORRY I WILL HANDLE"

"AND YEAH I THEY TRY TO MESS THEN REMEMBER WE ARE SO MANY AND..." they all said in union "TOGETHER...FOREVER" and giggle forgetting tensions.

they were enjoying and dancing in their own tunes. when a girl frowned and came toward them.

"WHO ARE YOU?" she asked in anger.

"WHY? WHO ARE YOU?" kirti asked with the same attitude.

"ASR SENT ME TO SEE IF YOU HAVE MEMBERSHIP CARD" khushi frown and turned to see a man sitting in a corner talking to someone. he was tall with perfect features. is he ASR? she wondered if she was wrong but then she confirmed her doubt and she was left in awe. he is so beautiful.

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Arnav entered inside the club after khushi and her friends arrival and every head turn to see the great ASR except some heads, who were busy hearing a petite girl. well he felt angry because in his club they have gave him attention but they. he was fuming when he saw her "the petite girl" turned and he saw her "BEAUTIFUL" was the word escape from his mouth unknown to him which angered him and to add fuel to his anger Lavanya was beside him in no time making him irritated with her chatter before he shut her giving her some work she loved the most.



and now he was talking to Aman no asking him "DID YOU FIND SHYAM?" hearing his answer "YES SIR" a smirk appeared on his lips as he turn to find someone well the beautiful girl staring at him with so much interest.

he smirked thinking "stupid teenagers". but her continues stares were sending unknown chill inside him making him puzzle at his own body changes.

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on the other hand khushi said ending arguments of the girl and her friends without breaking her stare "LET ME MEET ASR"

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"HI..." Khushi said still looking at him.

"SO...WHERE IS YOUR MEMBERSHIP CARD" with very difficulties he managed to sound normal.

"NEITHER I HAVE ONE, NOR MY FRIENDS" everyone gasped even ASR gasped none have guts to talk to him looking in his eyes but he was impressed.

"REASON?" he frowned.

"LOOK ASR, LET'S MAKE A DEAL. I WILL SING HERE FOR YOUR CLUB TONIGHT AND YOU WILL LET MY FRIENDS ENJOY" he looked up at the girl shocked but managed to say "FINE"

"YAY" her friends danced dragging her with them :)

Khushi felt nervous "What to sing?" her heart beat raised but one look at ASR with that clingy girl was enough to turn all her courage and she went on the stage.

Now khushi went to stag and started singing "LET IT GO"





"Let It Go"

The snow glows white on the mountain tonight

Not a footprint to be seen

A kingdom of isolation,

And it looks like I'm the queen.


The wind is howling like this swirling storm inside

Couldn't keep it in, heaven knows I tried!


Don't let them in, don't let them see

Be the good girl you always have to be

Conceal, don't feel, don't let them know

Well, now they know!


Let it go, let it go

Can't hold it back anymore

Let it go, let it go

Turn away and slam the door!



Khushi sing the song and then her eyes went see ASR, there he was surrounded by that girl talking over something. She didn't know but she wanted to pull her hairs for touching him. Was she jealous? No, no khushi jealousy is bad thing but look at her she kissed his cheek. She was pulled out of her thoughts by her friends and audience who wanted to hear more.

Arnav was all ear to her childish song "let it go" who sing a song from animated movie in his club. He sighed again wasn't she a teenager what can he expect more from her. Well no matter what she got a very beautiful voice. He heard Lavanya bringing him back to earth, he turned to see her.

"ASR YOU SAID WE WILL Discuss THIS PROJECT IN THE CLUB" ASR nodded knowing well this project was damn important, well for ASR nothing is important because he had everything except LOVE. He can conquer the whole world but cannot bring his barren heart into life again. He can make people bow in front of him but cannot made them love him.

He was pulled away from the deep discussion by soft and seductive voice. He saw her singing with er eyes closed.

I'm on my 14 carats

I'm 14 carat

Doing it up like Midas, mhm

Now you say I got a touch

So good, so good

Make you never wanna leave

So don't, so don't

Gonna wear that dress you like, skin-tight

Do my hair up real, real nice

And syncopate my skin to your heart beating




She opened her eyes looking in his direction smiled feeling so happy but reason is unknown.

'Cause I just wanna look good for you, good for you, uh-huh

I just wanna look good for you, good for you, uh-huh

Let me show you how proud I am to be yours

Leave this dress a mess on the floor

And still look good for you, good for you, uh-huh

Her lips quivered singing this, never in her life she sing a song like this except in her bathroom.

His eyes were glued at her, her wet is lips trying to control his desrre for the particular girl he met jut some minutes ago.

I'm on my marquise diamonds

I'm a marquise diamond

Could even make that Tiffany jealous, mhm

You say I give it to you hard

So bad, so bad

Make you never wanna leave

I won't, I won't




She felt his intense gaze which can read her soul too and she felt her palms sweating, she averted her gaze to her friends who were enjoying and calling her names she smiled feeling better.



Gonna wear that dress you like, skin-tight

Do my hair up real, real nice

And syncopate my skin to how you're breathing

'Cause I just wanna look good for you, good for you, uh-huh

I just wanna look good for you, good for you, uh-huh

Let me show you how proud I am to be yours

Leave this dress a mess on the floor

And still look good for you, good for you,

Uh-huh, uh-huh, ah...

Uh-huh, uh-huh, ah, mhm...

Trust me, I can take you there

Trust me, I can take you there

Trust me, I, trust me, I, trust me, I

His breaths were heavy, he felt his palms shivering and sweating, his heart was racing so fast, as if it chasing, he felt ALIVE. But how can he feel this for her when he met her some minutes ago? How can he crave to have her? Was he attracting to her? No, it's out of question. Why she wasn't looking at him? He felt frustrated all of a sudden.

I just wanna look good for you, good for you, uh-huh

Baby let me be good to you, good to you, uh-huh

Let me show you how proud I am to be yours

Leave this dress a mess on the floor

And still look good for you, good for you, uh-huh, uh-huh, ah...

Uh-huh, uh-huh...

Trust me, I, trust me, I, trust me, I.

She completed the song and her friends and people were praising her, she turned to see him only to find him staring at her with some unknown feelings, she couldn't understand.

He s different, so different from any other guy she ever met, his eyes show something very strange, something horrible which made her shiver. She brushed his thoughts and started singing.

Night went away and they had so much fun.

That night Khushi left her heart for ASR unknown to her and their journey of love start from that night and it will end with their last breaths, may be even after their death.


the song above is my favorite number from movie "Frozen" ;] i love this song.

i love you all and thank you everyone who commented

Edited by aashikhan120 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
love it dear...
so they met.. spark fly...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
OMG. this is soo awesome. Khushi sang in the club arnav is kinda smitten by her. Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
wow beautiful update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
nice update.. so ARSHI met and on their very first meet they are attracted towards each other.. chalo accha hai.. lets see what happens next??? loved the update..


thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
omg... someone say first impression last impression... really it happened... love at first sight...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
They met... N couldn't take their eyes from each other...
Nice...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Loved it,attracted to each other from the first meet

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