Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 69

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#CC0066" size="2">Hi 😛
I m working on the next chapter. I will update it soon.
Thanks for liking my story 😃</font>



Ya I liked it... I feel its quite different... I always felt Mahabharath had somehow made injustices to many characters like karna who suffered without any reason and this story is quite justifying to him...
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Ya I liked it... I feel its quite different... I always felt Mahabharath had somehow made injustices to many characters like karna who suffered without any reason and this story is quite justifying to him...


Thanks again 😃
Well its history and I feel the epic has some important lessons to be learn in life.
Amd Karn's life story intrigued and could relate the most

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Posted: 10 years ago


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~ Thank You all for liking the previous chapter and for your sweet comments. To be frank, I was a bit fidgety while posting this chapter as I completely twisted the Dyut Sabha plot. But all your feedbacks were wonderful and I am glad my twisted plot is accepted by my dear readers ~
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago

I m just reserving my post so that I can update my chapter by wWdnesday. I usually do it b4 posting the chapter 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
New entry😲 kaun????😲 I m thinking a fairytale twist 😳 that too in this tension se dushit vatavaran!

PS: I will unres my all posts on saturday after my sem😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
You want detailed review so here I go..
First of all I never expected sugh abig kahani mein twist!!😲 I didnt expect Swarzz to sit mum bt not revealation in DS... Its like star Ju stole KK daan scene frm star Karna TT Karna stole it frm TT Drau via TT ki maa Hema errr Swana😉🤣 do u have ny idea how I find humour in such serious update😳 but u know how serious writer I am😛
nyways now to Kunti be it TT, Sid T or original Text wali I never get this character, I loath it at times nd at times I feel some tilt towards it! The MOST shrewd character of the epic!!! She always made sure whatever she got be it out of a mistake its the best... like Karnas birth she made sure that Karna had all his fathers good qualities though it ws a mistake nd she very well knew... I dnt really beleive that she asked all that jst as sheer curosity, there might be some bt nt 100%, also I always had a question why didn't Madri invoke more gods for kids like Kunti was it bcoz Ku didnt allow her as she wanted to be supreme as at that time nly the higest level ny women can reach is being eldest wife nd MOm to more kids, ofcourse she didn't wish Madri to stay barren bt she didnt wish that her saut goes ahead of her also in case of Madri why nly Ashwini kumar twins did she knew her sautan so well nd thus used a clever strategy for two kids so that she remains no less?(again this is just my thought no offense PLEASE!!) okay I think I am going off topic we will discuss this via PM😛 bck to Kunti I personally dnt think she will accept her fault... NOWAY!! She will never allow her silk white sari ka pallu to be stained with the blackest die!!!! Acc to me she nly let the truth of Karna out to everyone bcoz her consience refused any more burden after his death and the reason behind going to Karna is mostly to save her 5 sons and some percent bcoz of her consience as I dnt really think she didnt knew Karna would have given the throne to Dury!! But again though she faced no less loss she made things turn to her side, she got what she wanted! Throne for sons... No competition for them...
Nyways waiting for everyones esp Ku's reply
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Posted: 10 years ago
NOTE
Guys I told u all that I will be posting my next chapter two weeks earlier. But I m really sorry I could not do so since my laptop's battery is almost dead and is not charging not even opening once. After giving it for repairs some other problems came up with the system. I tried writing thru my windows phone but its a really tedious job and I had to write a lot. I wrote this post from my Windows phone since some of u sent me msg & posts for the update.Hopefully I will get back my system this week and I will post it asap.

Sorry again for the delay
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sooo sorry for being late Hemangi di. 😭
Just read parts I missed earlier. Amazing nd last part when Swarna reveals truth. I was like😲 omg!!!!
Plsss update soon na.

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