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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
finally u agree fr updating this story
such a NYC update

PS thanks fr pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update!
Loved it!

Do write more! xx
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: jeharshu

It was awesome update

Loved it to the core
When will abeer accepts her
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
Nd thanks for the pm



thanks a lot ! 😃😃😃😃

im very happy you liked it 😃😃😃⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolishparul

finally u agree fr updating this story
such a NYC update

PS thanks fr pm



thanks a lot 😃😃😃⭐️⭐️⭐️ im very happy you liked it 😃😃😃😃😃⭐️⭐️

and yes , i gave this story a chance 😃😃⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: xxSomeonesLuvxx

Amazing update!

Loved it!

Do write more! xx



thanksa lot 😃😃😃

im really happy you liked it 😃😃⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi guys, so this is the second last chapter of this story , i hope you enjoy it please please hit like and comment if you liked it , and enjoy 😃😃😃

Chapter 4

Mehbeer left for the party. They all were enjoying in the party, and maneer was staring at meher, and that didn't og unnoticed u abeer , who was really very angry at maneer , or better said, really very jealous . Maneer asked meher ofr a dance , she refused but he kept insisting and he even grabbed her hand, abeer couldn't stand that and he grabbed her other hand and took her to the dance floor , a new song started playing

Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai
Kuchh Duriyaan Najdikiyaan, Kuchh Hans Padi Tanhaayiyaan
Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Kya Yeh Bahaar Hai, Kya Intjaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Meher tried to free her hand and leave , but abeer grabbed her waist and pulled her towards him , she collied with his chest, and looked up slowly , he also stared at her beautiful chocolate brown eyes, and stated dancing in rhythm with the music


Kuchh Saanz Hai.., Jaage Se Jo Kal Soye
Alfaaz Hai.., Chup Se Nashe Mein Khoye
Nazar Hi Samjhaaye, Yeh Guftgu Saari..
Koyi Aarju Mein Hai, Angadaayi Pyaari..
Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Na Inkaar Hai, Na Ikraar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

He pulled her more closer and saw maneer , who wasn't looking at them now, and then he saw meher , who was completely lost in him,slwoly he aslo , danced looking into her eyes deeply nad lovingly, thye could feel each others breath and their noses were akmost touching , this closeness made meher blush really deep.


Kehna Hi Kya.., Tera Dakhal Na Koyi
Dil Ko Dikha.., Dil Ki Shakal Ka Koyi
Dil Se Bhi Meri, Ik Shart Yeh Aisi..
Laage Jeet Si Mujhako, Yeh Haar Hai Kaisi..
Kyun Yeh Pukaar Hai, Kyun Bekaraar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Jaadu Sawaar Hai, Na Ikhtiyaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Evryone was looking at them as they were dancibng so close and lost in e ach other. Abeer was completely spellbound of her beauty , as he couldn't take his eyes off her, not even a moment.

Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai..

Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Yahi

They got so lost in their dance that thye didn't even realize when did the song end, when the song ended , after a moemnt , meher came back ot her senses and removed his hands off her

M..yeh tum kya kar rahe the abeer , sab ke samne, mujhe dance nahi karna tha, na tumhare saath , na kiske saaath ,.



And after saying that she kleft from the party and abeer followed her.

outside the party, at the road , surounfded by the lush green trees,

A.. meher , meher kahan ja rahi ho !?

M.. tumse door ja rahi hoon abeer , !

A.. meher , yeh tum kya bol rahi ho ..

And int that moment , it starts to rain , but softly,

Abeer grabs her forearm and pulls her towards him , and she collides with his chest , but she turns around in order to leave , but abeers grip tightens and he doesnt let her go.

M. Abeer chodo mujhe !

Abeer . Nahi chodunga tumhe ... Kyun zis laga kar behti ho ! Otni raat mein aur itni baarish mein kahan jaogi ? !

M. Kidhar bhi jaungi bar tumse door !

A. Meher bachon wali baat mat karo ! And come with me !

And he took her by her forearm under a tree , but meher was adamant to leave , so he pulled her towards him and locked her in hus arms , placing both his hands on her lower back . She ciuldnt move , even if she tried and she looked up at him , after so much trial to leave , in his eyes and he looked at her as well .

Meher stood still , in his arms . Looking at him , they shared a very beautiful and emotional eyelock . Abeer slowly realeased his grip on meher and cupped her face and leaned forward , and softly kissed her cheek . Meher closed her eyes , shocked at his sudden move . His kiss felt as soft as if raindrops were falling on her cheeks. Then , he kissed her other cheek , making meher shiver. He moved back to look at her, lovingly , and she opened her eyes and looked at him , with lots of questions in her eyes, but the feeling which was overshadowing the questions was love.



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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Wow romantic update 😳
Abeer is jealous

I love to see him like that

Beautiful song

I hope he remembers everything

Great job 👏

Keep it up 👍🏼

Thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asheley

Wow romantic update😳

Abeer is jealous

I love to see him like that

Beautiful song

I hope he remembers everything

Great job👏

Keep it up 👍🏼

Thanks for PM



Thank you so much 😃

Im glad you liked it 😃 ⭐️

Thank you so much 😃 ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Just read the last 3 parts...!!
It would have been easier if I got APM... Anyways it is going on brilliantly.
The situations bringing mehbeer close. The hug in the room was so cute. And I really love that song. Zara Zara mehekta hai...
Then abeer getting jealous... Realisation of love is what happens next, usually...
Waiting for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

hi guys, this is the last chapter of this ss , hope you enjoy it , and please leave your feedback and likes ⭐️





Chapter 5


They were both standing under tgat tree and the rain cobtinue to fall , softly.

M. Kyun nahi jaane de sakye tum mujhe abeer ?

And abeer moved his hand to her face and carresed her cheek ... And with the other hand on her waist

A. Kyunki ... Kyunki main tumse pyaar karta hoon... Karta tha aur ... Hamesha karunga ...

Meher was shocked at his response ...

A. Meher... Agar uss din nisaar ne mujhe uss dr ke paas na lejata jisne mujhe accident ke time tum gayi thi...aur ... Agar woh mere aur tumhare kuch lamhein na yaad dilata jo hum sabne bitae the sasha nissar tumne maine hamare shaadi ke baad ... Woh photographs na dikhata ... Jinkodekh kar mujhe dheere dheere yaad aa ne laga ...tumhaari care , tumhara saath , mere liye sab kuch hai meher ...

Meher stopped him putting a finger on his lips and hugged him tightly , he hugged her back , as tight as she has hugged him , and closing his eyes , while some cold raindrops were still falling over them , they were lost in each others embrace .

After a while , meher broke the hug ,

M. I love you abeer , main bhi tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon .

Abeer , with tears in his eyes , cupped her face and placed a kiss on her forehead . Meher then kissed his cheek . And he again took her in an embrace .

The end .

Edited by heartbroken1 - 10 years ago

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