FF : Her First Love 2nd thread, Chapter 20 in pg 53 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

superb update

thanks for the pm...


Thank you Ashvneet.
Your welcome.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

Loved jo nd moti convo ... jj part was cherry on cake...loved it is adham is+character here???? Wat is ja past pls reveal soon...this surya is out of control..wat to do our jo is like that only...looks surya nd jo meetup in ja meeting...continue soon nd do pm


Thank you dear,
Glad you loved Moti-Jodha and JJ's part dear.
Yes, Adham is a positive character.
Jalal's past will be revealed a little later dear.
Surya is quite annoying but his character is just for a few chapters that's all.
Will try to update soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93

Thank you dear.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Nice n update sn n thnxx for pm


Thank you Natasha, will try to update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: swetiii

awsum chappi dr...
plz dont make adham a villan in this story coz avi tak toh acha hi character dikhaya h..


update soom


Thank you dear,
Adham is a good guy dear don't worry. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: melovesja

like the convo between jo and moti her teasing and jealous jodha is sweet. jo feels happiness of jalal talk with his mother and touched by ja's thought to meet her with his parents. ja is feeling vhappy as jo also want to talk to her family like him. like his care and worry when so tears in her eyes. he is really changed. Awesome update.

wants to know abt adham's behavior and real feeling towards jalal and rista topic conclude to jo . her parents fix it without asking jo. what will be joja 's reaction.ja and humayu's convo.
OS idea was too good keep writing if anything new idea pop up surly ask you.


Thank you dear,
I am glad you liked Moti-Jodha part and JJ's part dear.
As for Jalal, yes he is a changed man dear.
Most importantly he hates to see tears in Jodha's eyes.
Adham is a good guy dear but the reason he is afraid is because of the past and how Jalal started to hate him.
JJ's feeling and thoughts on Jodha's rishtha will be revealed in future chapters dear.
Jalal and Humayun's convo will happen when Humayun and Hamida comes to india.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you dear. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: 155pari

Awesome chapter vincy...

Joja conversation was lovely...
It seemed so natural...
Thanx for the pm
And update soon...
Interesting precap
Eagerly waiting for the next update...


Thank you Namita,
JJ's part was the hardest to write so glad you liked it.
Your welcome dear.
Will try to update soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: harshu27

it ws really awsum chappy...joja's convo ws gd so finaly both jo told him abt her relations wid him 2 suks...and same wid him...luved jo and moti's convo 2 😆 so jo ws feeling really jealous or rathr ws possessive of jalal and dint wanted moti 2 call him as jalal 😆 😉 update soon... 😉


Thank you Harshu dear,
Moti was just teasing Jodha to see if she is possessive of Jalal and turns out Moti was right Jodha is jealous and possessive of him.
Glad you liked JJ's part and yes they both told their family.
Will try to update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Phulchukki

I've missed many parts of this ff... so I will comment later in detail after reading them all. Thnx for the pm.


Will be waiting for your overall review dear,
take your time, there's no need to hurry. 😃

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