Vignette : Everlasting Hope .... - Page 2

Originally posted by: goldstar678

Dead.will reply once I'm back to this world.

How you manage to write such amazing stuffs sitting at office,I never understood that.

Hats off to you.

Originally posted by: poetic

But I do stay for long at work. A total workaholic with no social life ... 😉

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

Inexplicable in words honestly! Personally, I dont think in a "romantic" way as thats just not in my persona but the atmosphere you just created totally dragged me down... You are just phenomenal and the emotion you transmit leaves tremors in us... I felt electrified reading this and the hope that was present all along just left me spellbound! How do u do this Rachna diii?!!!

Mwaaahhh😳😳

Originally posted by: metoyou

Sipping on my morning tea with not so nice weather; rainy, dark grey clouds and thunder...Wishing for some sun but little did I know I would be transferred to a whole other world...

Yes, this is mesmerizing. A fantasy that makes you forget all your worries because of these two imperfect souls. The way you described her body with so much elegance is just wonderful. I also liked his thoughts; he wants her yet he knows she is so fragile at the moment, that the last thing he wants is to break her again.

There is something about this part. The way she playfully says it and the way he replies with his laugh

"I do not like Dr Neil Khanna ... he is a Meanie"

And I laughed through my tears. I didn't like him either.

Another favorite is this one. Kuch kuch hota hai...

She kissed me slowly and I answered her mouth. She broke away with a gentle tug on my upper lip.

"Nachiket" she said, looking into my eyes, her look sincere.

"Can we stop thinking?"

I nodded.

I really think this has to be one of my favorites till now. It's all about them, their love, their trust and their longing. I don't know what you do at work, but as long as you keep writing this kind of stuff then I bet even your boss won't have any complaints!

Thank you SO much Rachna for this... there can be only love for you! 🤗

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Wow👏

I am going to call you a magician from now on That's what you are

I just don't know what you did there... It was so lovely❤️ I cried... then I sighed,,, I cried a little more... And I sighed a little more...

I felt that I was listening to a beautiful song... The song of true love... I would call it❤️

Ragini has started sleeping soundly nowadays, since he has returned to her life.

Love❤️

He turns around to spare only one glance of the moonlight that flames silver on her jaw, outlining the delicate curve of her shoulder, the fall of her hip, the line of her calves, slim, elegant and thin, and her arms hugging the distance between themselves.

Beauty❤️

"She is no longer there Ragini; she was never there between us ... and never will"

Truth❤️

"Ragini ... you have to believe me"

Hope❤️

"I do not like Dr Neil Khanna ... he is a Meanie"

Her own Prince❤️ Nachiket not Neil❤️

"I'm having a hard time believing it,"

Her doubt💔

"Can we stop thinking?"

Just them❤️ No room for more❤️

What I want is so simple. It should be so easy.

Not always💔But her hope❤️

I loved it😳 It was truly very beautiful❤️

Originally posted by: metoyou

Somehow I refuse to believe that...workaholic theek hai lekin no social life, that winky says it all 😉

Originally posted by: Santosh1999

I Faint too 😵 how did you do this sitting in office 😛

Originally posted by: poetic

Thank you so much Narges 🤗. You know what? Encouragement always helps. The steady support that we all receive over here keeps us motivated to write enough - good, bad or ugly.

And then, I love Nachiket and Ragini 😆

BTW< my Boss for sure ddoesn't know what i write 😆 Thank God!

Originally posted by: poetic

And thanks Santosh. Want a full response, you can't faint now😆