#3:ArshiSS/Inciting Desires2~llCOMPLETED/ CH 8-10

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Sweetshruthi

@Sweetshruthi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#621

Mind blowing update faiqa n sorry for the late comment

Enjoyed each and every bit of the chapter beautifully penned down by u❤️⭐️

I can easily visualize the behind the pillar scene hayee so romantic ... 😳

They are so much in love and Arshi kiss OMG so passionate ..❤️

She was enjoying the sound of her heart beat among the noise of rolling bangles over her wrists while he was feeling her presence with every heart beat of his which he never felt before...

Just loved loved loved it

His beaten soul met with its healer 😳😳 What a beautiful line

She is gonna confess to Arnav and u stpped right there😕😆

Thank u so much for such a lovely romantic chapter

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#622

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Khushi is not connected with his past.your SOME HOW...will be cleared in next chapter

Loved what u said balanced

So good to see you Sadia😊hope all is well

Khushi may not be connected with his past...but Thakur can !
So I am thinking her past was entwined with his...which will make the revenge drama more powerful! well was only thinking this way while reading!
Waiting for next chapter.
All is well but I am just in a rush schedule...! 😳😳

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arshi2612

@arshi2612

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Posted: 10 years ago

#623

chapter 9 fabulous update.loved it.engagement party was superbb. adorable arshi moments.payal adi was beautifully written.

nice teaser scary too.what happened to arnav? he is injured .and what happened to khushi. she is also in the hospital.update soon.thanks for pm.eagerly waitingg.

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#624

Simply fatanbulous chapter 9..

What a start meeting at temple then khushi's assurance to Arnav. ...

He gifted her bangles wow. ..

Nani Anjali can see Arnav is falling for khushi n they are happy...

Khushi really true to her name.. her whole family simply love her a lot..

Oh my my Arnav khushi's teasing n their passionate kiss (no words coming out from me...)👏

Arnav finally following his mom's advice..

Khushi is going to confess her love?

Eagerly looking forward. ..

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AdventureAwaits

@AdventureAwaits

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#625

Ok. I try it again. I hope my comment will be posted this time.

Faiqa you rock👏

Once again you proved that you are our details queen.

There were so many details in the last update where you portrayed through small things how closer and closer they came to each other.

It wasn't this direct in sentence "I love you" but more "I love you in this color".

To be honest I didn't await something else. In fact it was just how ASR would say to someone he loves him.

I know Aadi and Payal's engagement should be the highlight but for me it were more Arnav's and Khushi's kisses.

I am now curious what future will bring. Waiting for the storm and dark times. I think I am right that dark times are comming. We will see.

Thank you Faiqa and my big sorry for late reply.

Big hug

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.anjali.

@.anjali.

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#626

Ahhh...atlast read the whole story...OMG...it was one amazing story i have ever read...really..enjoyed the arshi ride through this...
Wanted to comment on each and every chap but that would take too long so will just keep my comment short and simple...
First of all you are an amazing writer...while reading i literally was transferred to another world and it felt like i was watching a movie...each and every scene explained soo beautifully the surrounding described to every detail...felt like i was in that place at that time...
It was a beautiful journey till now...from the initial attraction to hatred from khushis side to the lovely nickname that she kept for Arnav...Mr law and order😆and of course not to forget the hilarious Mr arrogant stale piece of raisins...😆😆...to Arnavs possessiveness for khushi...to their opening their heart out to each other...sharing their pains...them understanding the other without speaking much...Ahmazing...had a fun ride...
Not only arshi...all the other characters are amazing as well...payal-adis love story too cuute...to arun-anjalis story...well written all over...
But my favorite character is Mojo...his one liner songs...i must say all of them were apt for the scenes and lifted the scene to another level...and your choice of songs were superb...
Ahh atlast finished off...hoping i did not miss anything...waiting for the further parts of the story to unfold..until then will be reading your other stories...
Thanx for the PM
Keep Smiling..
Anjali😃

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Akhira

@Princessdream

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#627

Hey, sorry for commenting late😭😭😭. I loved this story.

Love their understanding with eatchother.
Everyone in this story r powerful character.
Adi is funny sometimes, love the way he said to payel I wont spare u😉
I love the dialogue " Never be afraid to Follow your heart ..."

Lovely update,Very nice.👏👏👏👏
Waiting for more...

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#628

Originally posted by: pup03
Awesome, Exquisite update.. finally work of Sheesh Mahal is over and Khushi is leaving now.. well this is gonna be interesting.. how ARSHI meet and how they are gonna make their relation work.. happy to see payal-aadi getting engaged.. ARSHI moments were mind blowing, beautiful.. loved the update..

Busy with work.. thats why small and late comment.. sorry for same and thanks for pm 😊

Thnx param,and sorry for late reply, not feeling well dear , so maafi😊

well said , yes now after work , what...will he accept her , let her go or wht...I am thinking the same 😊 but the thing is this Arshi and we know no matter what they will find their way back