Okay...sorry again mish...
I really love ur writing skills gal!! I love ur stories so much!! Though its painful to read/see manan in pain but for that u give those amazing flashbacks which is worth our pain reading manan apart!!! I am totally in love wid ur heart-wrenching stories!! I love heart-wrenching stories a lot...n a heart-wrenching manan story toh hw cn i not love it!!??? Gosh! I so love it mish!! Love u sweetie:)
nandu absorbing manik's voice n back into d memory lane ws sweet:)...
The flashback!! Sizzling!! Smoking hot!! I was literally laughin all the way wen nandu ws feelin awkward seeing their legs' positions n manik covering d duvet till his belly saving himself frm dat embarrassment...
Nandu giving him sweet bites n manik pretending to b asleep!! Typical manik malhotra!!! That was really sexy n hot!! Nandu completely flushed wen she got to kno dat manik was awake...heheh..n his 2 options..gosh!! EXPLAIN in detail wt she ws doin or demo it once agn!!! It was awesome!! Loved manik's naughty ideas..n flushed nandu a lottt!!! Aww...manik asking sorry wid each peck on her lips...adorable!! Manik is a mixture of everything!!! Hot sexy cute adorable calm furious rough evrythin!! So damn hot flashback that i frgot d present...lolol!!
Present...obvio manik has noticed her tears..!! That is out of question! Mr.sahni..bughto abb...NM ko gussa dilaya...aryamann..literally a poor soul!! He was damn scared of nandu..!! Bechara ek glare se hi itna darta hai!!! Nxt if he kisses nandu's hand in manik's presence toh he'll receive a death glare frm manik..n he'll be convinced n confirmed dat manan are made fr each other!!
Waiting fr manik's reply...
Awesome chappy!!
Reason might be...somethin completely relating to manik i guess...or somethin which will cause darkness in his life...which isnt good fr him...
Update soon...thnxxx for the amazing pm...lol
love u mish:D
the song...all of me...again an awesome song selection mish:)...coz all of mee loves all of you...uss kiara ko cmnt karne ko bol...aakhir kaar song ka title uske first ff k title hai!! Lazy kahiki...huhh!!
Edited by Toshna_1522 - 10 years ago