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Inciting Of Desire
Desire has quite been incited within me!Jawaud Shafeek, 5 months ago
The coolness of my head vanished rapidly as it raced inwardly!
Desire flooded my mind with tender notions.
To subdue and escape this I anxiously try to get lost in a Tootsie
Roll!
Ah! The euphoria of chocolate begins to affect me.
This little confection savors in my mouth calmly as I look out of a
window for nothing in particular.
This little wonder begins to dull the pangs of desire from
consciousness.
This sweet first aid marvel in my possession cools and tames
desire for some time.
Alas desire once again is relegated to the back burner of my soul.
The reduction of desire remains in force though its siren can
flare up again.
Quietly the coolness is restored though the memory reservedly
lingers on.Nice poem, TFS đ
The title of the story is only so inciting.. that too when with Arshi.. i cannot describe how i feel.
I had lost my FIL and my unborn twins when this serial started. This serial was a stress buster for me.
My son was born and was addicted for the title song..
romance reloaded or something new .. very pataka kind ipk started on a roll.. i fell for it.. stil now i wathc in tamil the dubbed version..Sorry to hear that dear, but I think we all connected to IPK through some pain and that is why this pain is linking all of us together.I believe in one thing, God always balances stuff for us.Yes painful it is,but our eyes can't comprehend beyond certain things.
coming to ur FF.. what do i say Faiqa.. u are queen in this.. writng and analysis.. symbolisms and reviews and pvos.. i read as many as work of urs...WOW! I never knew that, recently or you have been doing for a long time as I didn't see you before or did u change your name ID? I am honored if you liked my stuff which is mere love for this show and for these two characters.
The FF part attracted me more.. U write from ur soul.. each and every word comes from ur heart thru arnav and kushi..
The desire and passion, the romnace and the breath taking scenes leaves us spell bound or foot in my mouth... so undescriable in words.. only we could feel it..Thnx dear for this compliment , I am floored by your words and if u feel it then it did serve the purpose.
I did find the emotinal trauma what they are going thru too...
A gal who has a lost parents trauma.. A boy who was cheated and now trying to get everything back which belongs to him right fully..As I said Pain always connects you, and here is the same , their own life is so restless and they can find peace in each other only.You can't understand the pain when you are n the same shoes.
A family in the background, giving support to all.. a loving father.. a loving sister, mommy, buaji, anjy , aman.. and adi...
wow.. when ever i read arshi..i get a complete package..
each character has a pov.. love them..Thnx ,but u can't have story of Arshi only
From u next chapter i will be a regular commenter ..
for now.. i had read all the 8 chaps.. what do i say.. u have some kind of spell in ur hands woven.. golden spoon or magic woven spoon..
words flow so magically..
In each and every intimate scene.. the kiss part or the dhak dhal part or the just mere eye to eye talk.. SO MUCH IM TAKEN TO THE ALTER OR DIFFERENT WORLD.. feels it is real.
love the way u write,...
Thanks for hte pms and comments on my FF faiqa..
my love for u, ur stories and ur family..
read u have a little one like me.. so my more lvoe for ur little one..
dvđ¤
Thnx for reading altogether, and I really appreciate that dear.U are an amazing writer yourself...and it feels good reading a writer's perspective
My answers are in blue
THE red rose whispers of passion,
And the white rose breathes of love;
O, the red rose is a falcon,
And the white rose is a dove.
But I send you a cream-white rosebud
With a flush on its petal tips;
For the love that is purest and sweetest
Has a kiss of desire on the lipsJohn Boyle O'Reilly
this is another poem which i could relate with ur each and every updates..
rose, passion, love and lips..
desire enrolled in eahc and every move and the taste of it as pure as the nectar...
this is lovely , thnx for sharingđ
