MG OS - The Love Test...epilogue - Pg 82 - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...
Loved it ... Geet s crying bitterly and Maan s hearing anus and Geet talks and he s very confused ...
continue soon
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Part # 6

Maan was still stuck with the word prank... he suddenly said... Prank maine nahi... usne khela hai Anu... she played with me... ab toh mujhe doubt horaha hai ki woh mujhse pyar karti bhi hai ya nahi...

Anu is shocked to hear such words for Geet ... she said nodding her in a no... indeed Geet was right bhai ... uska pyar fail hogaya... sach mein... bhai main aapko zero numbers deti hoon...suna aapne... you have scored a zero a big fat zero in this love test ... she literally shouted ... now I am with Geet... usse chala jana hi theek hain... u don't deserve her... Pata hai bhai... mujhe bhi nahi bataya usne... Mujhe pata tha who kisi se pyar karti hai... par usne kabhi nahi kaha ki who aap hai... hamesha kehti rahi ki aap se milne ke baad hi who mujhe uska(Maan) naam batayegi... aur aap uske bare mein ye sab kehrahe hain....


Maan wondered did he misjudged Geet... how could he.. he should have not lost his mind like that... and now Anu is also angry... He was in his thoughts when he heard Anu saying... aapko aapki Pari mubarak ho... All the best bhai... all the best... aapke liye woh Pari hi sahi hain...she said woh Pari with a certain resentment .. you both are really made for each other... and she left from there without turning back wiping her tears... Rohan tried to call her but she left closing the door with a bang...

Maan looked at the way Anu went... somewhere he felt bad ... and his sister supported Geet... here his life has become a game for someone and she is not supporting him...

Rohan came to Maan and said... Maan mujhe theek se bata kya hua... Maan told him what he heard .. in Geet's room...

Rohan - mujhe ek baat bata ... tujhe kaise pata chala ki Pari hi mishty hain... matlab koi nishan ya kuch aur bataya usne...

Maan - no... pehle kuch nahi bataya... but jab main nikal raha tha waha se ... toh mujhe mail aaya... mishty ka... in that she said she doesn't want me to loose so she is giving a clue... that she will wear my favourite color dress... aur Pari ne hi sirf mera fav color pehna... he revealed...

Rohan - usne pehle kuch bataya...

Maan - no... she always said this will prove our love... if I recognise her then our love is true... but if I don't... she will not come in front of me... she will leave forever...

Rohan - Yeh Geet bhi na ajeeb hai... koi aise kaise soch sakta hain...toh usne kyun phirse woh mail kiya... yehi kuch gadbad hain...

Maan - pata nahi ... sab confusing hai...

Rohan - okk... tujhe aakhri baar mail kab aaya...

Maan told him the time and Rohan calculated Indian time , then thought for few minutes and said... dekho maine kaha na... kuch gadbad hain...

Maan - kya...

Rohan - tujhe jis time par mail aaya... tab Geet ghar par hi nahi thi... hum sab spa gaye... aunty ji ne poora spa book kiya... main veer naina... Geet.. ranbir... sab wahi par the... toh yeh sawal hi nahi uth ta ki Geet ne msg kiya... matlab kisi aur ne msg kiya...

Maan - matlab Pari ne...

Rohan - lagta toh aisa hi hain... kyun ki woh nahi aayi hamare saath... shayad usne Geet ka tab dekhliya hoga aur tum dono ke mails bhi... she might have guessed it as you... or Geet might have something like you pics which shows her love as she knew you... and she took the advantage of your not knowing Geet...

Maan - I will kill that Pari... how dare she comes in between me and my love... Maan said with hatred and anger...

Rohan stopped him and said - Maan ...not now...shaadi ka ghar hai... acha nahi hoga... agar paari ne hungama kiya toh... tum pehle yeh socho... Geet ko kaise manayega... woh bohut ziddi hain... itni aasani se nahi manegi... aur woh ek baar haveli chaligayi toh machar bhi BrijHanda ke permission ke bina andar nahi jaasakta... Pari ko mujhe pe chod do... I will see her... na.. I don't think mujhe kuch karna padega... meri jungli billi ne kuch toh socha hoga... Rohan smirked ... he knew Anu might be planning some thing... Maan nodded...

Maan - yeh.. BrijHanda hai kaun... aur tum sab kyun itna darte ho usse...

Rohan - he he... ab tumhe bhi darna hoga Maan... agar Geet ko pana hai toh... BrijHanda ki good books mein hona zaroori hain...

Maan - umm... yeh BrijHanda karta kya hain...

Rohan - Geet ne apne baare mein kuch bataya...

Maan - zyada nahi... bas apne Pariwar ke baare mein bataya... ki papa hai.. bhai aur bhabhi hain... usne apna naam bhi nahi bataya mujhe... toh mujhe kuch nahi pata uske baare mein...

Rohan - Geet ke papa ke kuch farms hai aur who retired politician hain... Inder Handa... aur Brij unki legacy continue karr raha hain..

Maan - Matlab who bhi politician hain... Maan said with attitude... lekin Maan Singh khurana kisi se nahi darta...

Rohan - Haa.. par tu jaanta nahi hain usse... maine khud dekha hain... woh ek taraf aur uske kutte ek taraf... agar galti se bhi unke daant ke neeche aagaye toh koi zinda koi nahi bachega... Ek incident batata hoon... jab Geet nayi nayi college join hui .. Anu ki aur uski utni dosti nahi hui... college mein usne ek ladke ko thappad mara... kyun ki woh girls ko comment karr raha tha... in a disgusting language... usne college ke bahar Geet ko pakad liya.. aur usse chedne laga... tab Brij wahan aaya...

Maan - kya kiya usne... Maan was interested as this is relted to his mishty

Rohan - usne kuch nahi kiya... bas apne char kutton ko chod diya... aur aaj tak woh ladke shehar kahin nahi dikhe... kisi ne kuch nahi kaha... koi usko kuch bol hi nahi sakta... usse dekhte hi darr lagta hain logo ko... 6ft se zyada lamba hai... aur body building bhi karta hain...aur jab uske saath uske kutte hote hain toh... kisi rakhshas se kam nahi lagta...

Maan - umm... Geet bhi darti hain kya usse...

Rohan - pagal hai kya... Brij khud Geet ke saamne kutta banjata hain...

Maan - what...

Rohan - mera matlab... woh kuch nahi karta... utna pyaar karta hai Geet se... woh Geet ke saath aur ghar walon ke saath kuch alag se hi rehta hain... Geet ke saath masti karta hain.. chedta hain... usse hasata hain.. uske liye kuch bhi karta hain... woh Geet se bohut par karta hain... Geet ko ek mamuli si bet jitane ke liye mr. punjab bhi bana woh... to socho uske liye kya karsakta hai... aur utna hi possessive hain Geet ke liye ...aur Geet bhi... ab aise insaan se tujhe Geet ka haath Maangna hain...

Maan - kyun Geet ke papa nahi hain kya... usne toh kaha tha ki uske papa hai...

Rohan - haina... but Brij ki baat hi final hai uske ghar mein... specially Geet ke vishay mein... so ready raho... teri band toh bajne hi wali hain...

Maan - aisa kuch nahi hoga... tum dekhte rehna main kaise dono ka dil jeet leta hoon...

Rohan- all the best... u will need it... and Rohan laughed...

On the otherside as Rohan guessed Anu barged into Pari's room... Pari was poring her sadness to her mother... And she startled to see Anu there... she knew that Anu will react but didn't guess this fast... She prepared herself to face Anu and convince her to give her (Pari) a chance... she has to act wisely.. coz Anu had a very bad temper...

Edited by -indu- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woewww maan know truth can't wait nextt
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
finally cat is out of bag...
pari messed everthing up...
brijs intro was mindblowing...
wondering how maan will set all well...
anu go baby... pari ko dho dena...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
chalo maan ki saari misunderstandings clear hogayi!
rohan told maan about brij and his bonding with geet
maan is confident that i will win brij and geet's hearts!
loved the update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear anu is very much anger on Mann and even told that he did not deserve geet at all Rohan asked what exactly happened Mann explain every thing to him and Rohan told that pari has played a dirty game with him he told he will look after pari and told about geet bro brij and his background
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update... Finally maan knew abt his mishty & his all misunderstanding is cleared...rohan told maan about brij and his bonding with geet maan is confident that i will win brij and geet's hearts... Hope Anu Pari Ki achi band bjaye... Thanks 4 pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...
glad maan came to know about pari...
waiting fr sm maneet moments...wonder how will maan win geet now...

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