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Aimer_vous

@Aimer_vous

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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

I am feeling for Arnav.😭 just want to give him a hug.

There is no lover who is not also a martyr.

Khushi is killing herself too,but My thing is if he is a true friend , he could be angry,but can't leave her at the moment when she needs him the most

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Finally I finished reading all the chapters.

Firstly I want to applaud you for writing such a wonderful character of Arnav. He is a larger than life kind of person. A young urban guy with a heart of gold. A person like him actually can reform a society. He is apparently my favorite character of this story.

Let's come to khushi. I loved everything about her except her weakness for the stupid social norms. To see her chivalry against Karan and his family I thought she is a bravado, but she actually disappointed me. Maybe I can't understand her situation as I am from a complete different social background. Maybe a girl from middle class indiAn society is compelled to follow the pros and cons of the faulty society, what inhibited her to dream for her life. She is the victim of the evil society what snatched her right to be happy. My question is, doesn't a divorcee girl have any right to give her life a second chance. Why the society is hell bent to snatch her and her family's happiness? Seriously damn this society! And khushi's parents also disappointed me to the core. How they can be so insensitive for their own child! But Arnav's parents absolutely enthralled me with their broadness. I wonder is it the impact of society too?

I'm heartbroken for arnav more. I wish if khushi would've trampled her family and society and would've left with arnav!

It's a kind request, please reunite them soon. They deserve each other.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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sriif

@sriif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#503

emotional and heart wrenching update... society is enough to kill and torture the life of women who has gone through painful life ...hope arnav wont leave her in the hands of ruthful society and her conservative parents ...he has to be strong for atleast khushis sake and give life to her not caring for others...arnav should understand even though hes in pain and teach khushis parents that there first priority always should be their childrens happiness and they should not bothered about their tauntful words...society is always there to poke their unwanted nose in each and everything but we should not bother and allow them to intervene...khushi is such a naive and only thinks about others happiness ...she was smiling keeping her pain aside only for her friends happiness ... poor girl was blamed without any reason even though nothing wrong she did...loved khushis concern for her friend when she saw pain in his eyes when she rejected his love ...she was feeling bad for him and only wished for his happiness...

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aranya_19

@aranya_19

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#504

sry for being late!

beautifully written...

feeling sad for Arshi...

Lukng frwd to the nxt update...

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Such an emotional update dii
Soo much of pain for Arnav
Khushis parents 😕 ..I m really scared of their reaction
What is going to happen now..how khushi is going to realize..
Please not to much dooriyya for arshi..
I want Arnav to give all the happiness to khushi..she really deserves all the happiness in the world
These people of society ..I hate them for saying all those things to khushi .. 😡 ..
Khushi is such a sweet innocent soul..the word infertile was soo bad..the mother in her is still there n it's never going to die
Waiting for the update eagerly
Ps sorry for not commenting on few previous updates

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premdewaani

@premdewaani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Wow what an outstandingly written update deepthi!!! Seriously starting with the happy occasion to hear breaking scene between Arnav and khushi.. Finally Arnav saw the horrible reality of khushi's world. Feeling very bad for Arnav but I guess this was also necessory in their relationship.. Looking forward to read the next update.. You are doing an awesome job writing this brilliant story..take care.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#507

Another beautiful update.

Dr R ji is now witnessed to the ugliness of Khushi's world and the true colours of our society. I am actually angry with her parents and sister more than anyone else...and yes, right now I am angry with Lavanya too...because of the people she invited.