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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle
Wonderful update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon

Thnx Twinkle 😊

Glad u r enjoying it

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: chinnulu
Beautiful update
Loved the Temple scene where she lets Arnav know she will be with him always whatever the situation might be. Arnav sending her gifts thru the small boy and she accepting it was lovely. Though Arnav will be standing near his SUV when the boy pointed towards his vehicle but that was also good, Khushi understood who the sceret admirer is and Arnav got to see and admire her expression when she accepted the gift.

Finally Adi and Payal got engaged with their family and friends blessings. Khushi's naughtiness was cute. Poor Sukhi uncle falling for pranks always without knowing her intentions. Loved the family bond between the Guptas. No update is complete without MOJO's song. Would have been more fun if mojo teased Adi and Payal during their engagement.

Arnav and Khushi steeling their lovely moments amidst of the people, their passion towards each other and Arnav accepting her return gift in the form of Kisses and both doesn't want to leave and go to their respective homes shows how much they are longing for one another. Glad Arnav atleast realised his feelings towards Khushi remembering his mothers words to always follow his heart.

So finally Sheeshmahal work is completed. He is feeling something is it because he didn't get Thakur Vikram punished for hurting his family. So, finally Khushi is going to confess her feelings to him. Though Arnav longs to be with Khushi all the time and realised his feelings towards her will he accept Khushi's confession or he doesn't wanted to accept her because he wanted her safe till he deals with Vikram or Shyam's entry again will create a misunderstanding between them which will make them to be away from each other because the way they are now shows how much they love each other. Will wait till everything gets clarified eventually.

Couldn't wait for the PM as soon as saw the update got to read it. Anyway Thanks in advance for sure u will be sending PM.

Chinnulu dear🤗

so much pink, u liked...

But you thoughts are gearing towards the right direction...these things will help in future...bangles, hand holding, kisses promises, spending good time all will help them to go through all.Secret admirer took what he wants and made her realize his intentions clearly which made her shy in the mirror...now that will break her heart badly...

Now he also has realized and this will be a punch on his heart while doing so...

😆 Mojo part , he supposed to sing during engagement,,I thought but then it was a party of big royal group, didn;t find room for that, ..but he did for Arshi and Buaji...

RED, all questions will be cleared ...mostly in chapter 10

Thnx dear for such an intriguing comment

Now blue

Poor Sukhi uncle and Khushi's torture...that shows how much he loves her...and she loves him...

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: heemasomani
Superb update
this update is full of desire and want
wow the kiss

Thnx heema😊

Happy that you liked this desirous full of masti update😊

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: sanjida123
REALLY..FABULOUS..DEAR..LOVED IT..A..LOT...
PLZ..KEEP PM ME..I LOVED.TO READ MORE...
KEEP WRITING N UPDATING

Welcome aboard dear

Sure I will if u are willing dear😊

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: gowtu
Wowwwooww it was so beautiful updt..
More beautifully written...
Nd d kiss was something else...
Loved it so much...
My heart cnt stop pounding...

This chapter was full of desire nd attraction...
Loved all parts bw arhi.. Specially temple one..
Awesomely written...

''Love dis color on u khushiii...'' Hhaayyeee d way he said it <3
So thus z how he realized His love hhmmm
Aaww he gifted her bangles...

Adi nd payal k engagement hogay.. Loved it when adi hold her hand like... Like he never let her go... Dat was so sweet part... Asr aaj kal Sab k chaukarahe hai loll
He hugged adi when he went to congratulate him...

Hhhwww how can u stop there !!!!! So what next !!!! Confession !!!
Ohh myy gggoodd.. I m dying to read more...

Loved d updt so much.. Awesome it was as always...

Continue soon

Thnx gowtu❤️, for all the pink, it means u really enjoyed it...especially thier moments...

Loves underlined , beautiful interpretation

He gifted her bangles, she gifted her promise to be there for him in temple

Now lets see what confession we have...

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

piaviviandsena

26 August 2015 DeleteHell boring. XAms aaj end hue. Yr m again having problem wid comment box. So m giving my review here.
Awsm update. Bt I wish ki arnav pehle confess karta. Bt I hv one confusion. D dates. Actually nt date by yr. U had written 2005... So... Arshi moments were really sweet and romantic. Sukhi uncle is very cute. Awsm person. I luved d update. Thax fr pm.

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Thnx Piya for ur lovely comment, lets see who confesses first

Dates are because this is all past chapters 1-10...read prologue and chapter 11 will start from there

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Priyanka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Thnx Piyu😊

peek-a -poo kind a romance😆so u like that with talking through eyes.

It can't be that soonish

hawww appa 😲 don't do that... pleaseee... m so eagerly waiting for their confession... 😳

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#478

Iamlee

15 August 2015 DeleteArshi H,What a rescue? Arnav saved her,but is it only bcos Thakur doesn't want renovation at SheeshMahal or is someone against Arshi union?Aadi looks out for Kh,but why is he overprotective? Does he feel Arnav is not good enough for kh?So Aadi& Payal are not innocent.they did make use of the time Kh was away at RM.Nani is astute,she wants KH as her grand daughter in law.Wish every unmarried fangirl gets sasural like KH,but strictly no cat fight girls,I get ASR that s final.Thanks for the update.bye.Reply

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lol, u can keep him...I am not interested...I am a fangirl...don't want him at all as long s he gives me his presence on teh screen

OK why Aadi is protective? u will see in coming updates...

Thnx Dear for the lovely comment as always

Thnx Bruce lee

Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 10 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: PRIAAMUNDHRA

hawww appa 😲 don't do that... pleaseee... m so eagerly waiting for their confession... 😳

Piyu I just updated on late night of 25 almost 26...update will take some time showeiii but u will kill me after reading that for sure

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Priyanka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Piyu I just updated on late night of 25 almost 26...update will take some time showeiiibut u will kill me after reading that for sure

it's okay appa... 😊 I know m rude but not ruthless to kill my appa... 😉 would be waiting for the next part... 😳