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Deepthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

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akai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#712

Not waited this eagerly for any updates.

Just stalking for it now.

I'm desperate

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@shekha2012

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Posted: 10 years ago

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What have I become?

I doubt I have an answer to that but I do know what I want to become...

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maxnruby

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Ahhh.. the much awaited update! But haven't all recent SBH updates turned into "the most awaited ones"?? How do you do it, Deepthi? How do these Arnav and Khushi keep us wanting more week after week?

It was a beautiful chapter in many ways. Khushi's reaction was quite expected given her social background and emotional state of mind. She needs to work on herself so much.. she needs to love herself first in order to fall in love with Arnav. She has a huge internal struggle to deal with fighting off her demons. She needs to see herself worthy of a second chance, worthy of true happiness, worthy of undying love and most of all worthy of Arnav, then only she will be able to move forward.

I am hoping Lavvu will make Khushi see the light at the end of her self made tunnel. I hope she makes her realize the intensity with which Arnav has fallen for her. I was grinning like a fool when she gave him a thumbs up!

What do I say about this Arnav? My goodness! Is it possible that I fall in love with him more and more after each update?! He deals with heartache so well..giving her much needed space.. like he knew this was coming but he also knew that there was no other way out than expressing what he feels for this woman. If only she could see herself the way he does.

Absolutely loved both their POV's. Her dream, her reality, her subconscious mind everything is paralyzed with his thoughts. He's slowly going to be HER EVERYTHING. I just hope it's sooner than later.

Deepthi, I've got my seat belt on. The heart is thumping, blood rushing a little faster, full on adrenaline rush ready to unleash.. let this rollercoaster ride begin! We are ready!! 😃

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sweety421

@sweety421

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Firstly... many applauds for the writing Di...
It was very different to read and very refreshing...!!!
Khushi's reaction was expected of course... but the way she is thinking about the senario is something that needs to change...This is going to be a big task fo Arnav...!!!
She thinks Itz wrong to love juz because she is a divorcee... no girl...!! Hell... u have every right to love...!!!
Arnav's pov was ausm... He can read her like a book... He knows her so well... I hope he will make her run in his arms...litraly..!!!!
Loved the update di. ...Very eager to read the new dynamics of them... plz continue soon

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: akai
Not waited this eagerly for any updates.
Just stalking for it now.
I'm desperate

Same here LMAO... 😆😆😆

What this FF has done to me *sigh*

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manusmithcl

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Have never waited for anything so badly..

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Mushfika

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Posted: 10 years ago

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aapka 15 minutes kab khatam honge, may we know? I keep dozing off and might smash my nose on the laptop any moment

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pravallika

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Beautiful update deepthi😛

I've imagined so many things, when you said you are experimenting, but that was wonderful to read from just their pov👏⭐️

kushi's reaction was the same as everyone guessed it.. she ran away and she shut herself... but, blaming herself that she might have crossed the limits and would've given him some wrong signals was very painful to read.. she thinks she is not worth him and he deserves better than her, was again something expected from her.. she considers herself a divorcee and she has no right to enjoy life after this... this perspective of hers has to be changed and she should think beyond this now.. I think la and Arnav should work on this first... but the way she has realized that he has consumed her everything and called him as Arnav in her dream was something I loved reading😊

i'm glad that la has witnessed everything and her 👍🏼 was bang on.. I guess la must be doing

gayatri's character is one beautifully portrayed character in this story.. i'm so much in love with this mother cum friend❤️ she knows in and out about her son and she is always spot on with her advice to him😊

coming to Arnav, I loved the grin on his face which was not ready to leave 😆 huhh!!! what a relief he might have felt , after what he had gone through from last few days.. his restlessness and his tension to know her reaction was cute😊 he is so much in hurry😆 he wants to become

"HER EVERYTHING"

every update you end with something like this punch dialogue and leave us wanting for more

thanks for the pm dear😊 waiting for the next..

Edited by pravallika - 10 years ago