FF : Hum hain adhure part 3 updated on pg3 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: gajalakshsandy


why rofl anjana 😆 😆


You are asking her to break the rules na... 😉
If I understood it correctly..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: --FM--


You are asking her to break the rules na... 😉
If I understood it correctly..😆


i asked her to break the rules in writing 🤣 🤣 🤣 you...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Nice start. Do continue. Please don't make Zakir give the details of Sandy's mission to Suraj. Let Suraj understand it when Zakir tells him that he is going away for some days on an important but risky mission and till he comes back, Suraj has to take care of his parents who have just arrived to Pushkar. Suraj shall be their son till his return and that should sound the bell in Suraj's mind that why Sandya was crying before leaving. Let Suraj be the strong person to console the 2 families while Sandy is away. Please atleast let him be alright in this FF.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
thankyou anjana lakshmi and dee
@fm nd dee wait for the next part 😉
@ lakshmi ur post made me realise that there r rules too for writing 😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Zakir is getting ready at home and got a phone call.

BK: Zakir, you have to report to the station at 10:30 itself. The only change in our plan is we execute it on today.

Zakir: Yes Sir. I will.

Flashback: Zakir and some other officers are called to the office and Himanshu trapping plan was discussed there.

Everybody reached at the station at the correct time and the train left the station. Zak went to cutoff the last 2 compartments and succeeded in it. The other officers were ready to jump on the river. When Zak comes back he saw a glimpse of Sandhya and astonished to see her. He could not look further as its their action time. Their plan succeeded and every officer gets back safe. BK and Zakir was travelling on the same vehicle.

Zakir: Sir, I have seen a glimpse of Sandhya in the train, but...?

BK:Yes Zakir, Like you she was also a part of this Himanshu trapping mission,but she joined only yesterday.

Zakir: Ok sir. But where is she?

BK: She may be in the other Vehicle.

In RM Suraj was getting ready.

Suraj(himself): When Sandhya came back she should be happy, otherwise she will start complaining me for not starting the works of Vedansh.

Suraj stepped down to aangan. In TV Sushmita express bomb blast. Suraj got tensed and called her but the phone was switched off.

BB: What happened Suraj? Why r u so tensed?

Suraj: BB Sandhya was in this train.

BB: (shocked) What?Sandhya Beendini in this train? Chora call her. You don't get tensioned. Nothing happened to her.

Suraj: Her phone is switched off. She is not responding.

Suraj called Zakir and he said that she is with him and on an official duty and will call back him.
Suraj felt relieved and said to bb that she is ok.

Zakir checked other vehicles. But Sandhya was not there . Eventhough Sandhya was a good swimmer they checked her on river and could not find here. Zakir was feeling tensed. BK assures that she will be safe and reach to them soon.

It was late night and one of the officers informed BK that one body is missing and it was Sandhyas. Zakir and BK got tensed . BK orders other officials to keep an eye on the other shores as if she may trapped in hands of terrorists they may kill her.

Suraj called Zakir . Zakir was confused what to say to him. He attended the phone call.

Suraj: Zakirji, It was late 11 pm and Sandhya's phone is still switched off. Is she with you?

Zakir : Surajji she is on an official duty . So her phone is switched off. She will be back to home after 3 days . You need not be worry

Suraj was not convinced.

Suraj: Please pass the phone to Sandhya.
Zakir: Surajji now she is on a meeting and cuts the call.


Ved: Papa what did mama say?

Suraj: Your mama is fine and will be back to home after 3 days. No need to worry.
He went inside the room and praying God to get her back home safely.
3 Days after. A knock in RM. Ved hurriedly went to open the door saying my mama came. But it was Zakir. Ved felt disappointed. Suraj look outside for Sandya .

Zakir: It is a lie. Till now I can't find her dead or alive.

Suraj: I know you are mocking me. She tell you to say this to me.

He looked outside and called her to stop her drama. But there is no response from outside.

Zakir: (in tears) No Surajji. Sandhya was not with me.She was in the same compartment where the blast happened. As per our plan she was asked to jump to the river. But we cannot find her till now.
Suraj and ved are shocked.

Ved cried Mamma Mamma and hugged Suraj. Suraj was still in shock on her missing. He somehow manages himself and consoles Ved that mamma will come back. He was consoling others and burning inside. BB asked Emily to bring Ved inside and pointed to Zakir

BB: You assured me the security of Sandhya. So you should take the responsibility of her missing. Why are you being cruel to us. We cared you like Suraj then why did u do this to us. I can't tolerate this injustice. My suraj suffered a lot in the childhood itself. Despite being a brilliant boy his studies got the fullstop because of family. In every scenarios of his life he stay first for the right at any cost but why fate plays cruel to my son.

Zakir: (consoling tone) None can change the fate. Iam still confident BB that she will be back.
Surajji she will be back to you forever. God cannot be blind in front of your love.

Suraj remain silent. Her words "I will be back to you" was echoing in his ears.
Precap : A body is found near a river and some people gathered around it .
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Avoided certain conversations as it is shown on the show. Hope I meet your expectations
Edited by SurYalover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
thank you dear for the lively 2nd part. Hope we could get some info in your next part 😉. Hope Suraj joins hands with Zakir in restoring Sandya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Nice update 5..
Thank god... suraj s fine atleast here ... 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
@ dee zak suraj part is not yet planned by me
scratching my head for next part 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SurYalover

@ dee zak suraj part is not yet planned by me

scratching my head for next part 😆

😆scratching is OK as long as don't do it so hard that it leaves a mark or so long that you don't pull off your hair 😉. No problem, you can write whatever comes to your mind in the flow, we will be carried away with your flow of thoughts.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Nice update 5!😳
Please update the next part soon..

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