Ardhika Nesam SS Timeless Love, [ Chapter 10 , page 19] Completed !!! - Page 6

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thanska tone !!!!! im happy you liked it!
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hi guys, im here with the next chappy , i know im updating soon, im on holidays thats why , i hope you enjoy it 😃😃 and please like and leave your feedback to encourage 😃😃😃😃

Chapter 6 , part 2

In the restaurant ,

while having the vanilla ice cream

N. sam woh , main tumhe kuch batana chahta hoon, woh ... mera contract 2 dino khatam ho raha hain aur tumhara bhi ... aur mujhe ek south indian ad company ka offar acha laga yahan wale offers se ... i mean... higher post hai uss job ka ... toh...

s. toh tumhe accept karna chahiye ! isme poochne ki kya baat hai ! mainbhiwaha koi naukri dhoond lungi , dont worry !

n. matlab tumhe india wapas jaane mein koi problem nahi hai ?

s. nahi toh ? kyu honi chahiye ? ( she said laughing and having her ice cream ) aur vaise bhi , south indian ads agencies main bahut kaam mil jaata hai , so dont worry !

While eating the ice cream, neil got some on his upper lip , and sam saw that...

s. neil tumhare upper lip par thodi ice cream lag gayi hai , clean kar lo,,,

He did try to clean it , but he couldnt spot it,,,

s. tum chodo , main hi kar deti hoon,...

And sam extented her hand to clean it, she gently wiped the ice cream from his upper lip with her thumb , and neil was looking at her while she was cleaning it, completely lost in her eyes...

s. ho gaya...

And just her comment got him back to his senses ...

N. umm.. thanks sammy..

S. neil , tum kabse formality mein believe karne lag gaye , ?

N. no its just ... kuch nahi ...


Neil smiled at sam , and he after finishing their ice cream and paying the bill , they went home .

At the khannas house , in the hall , piyali was sitting on the sofaand samrat was on hos knees and had piyalis hands in his .

p. samrat ... tumhe pata hai na . aaj ki party ki asli wajah kya thi ... sam aur neil ki anniversary ... bahut yaad aati mujhe unki ... bahut ...saath saal ho gaye ... sam india nahi aayi...kaam main hi busy rehti hai ... aaj jab meine un dono ko congratulate kiya toh , neil ne mujhe bataya ki ... usse koi bahut acchi kerala ki koi ad company main offer ayi hai aur woh sam se puchega ... i hope ... usne haan kehdi ho... ( she said with wet eyes )

s. piyali ...par ... woh jahabhi hai... woh bahut khush hai ... bahut . neil ne usse woh har ek khushi di ...jo woh deserve karti hai...

p. pata hai samrat... iss baat ne hi toh mere dil ko sambhala hua hai ... ki woh jahabhi hai ... bahut khush hai ...

in the office ...

arjun was sitting on the sofa , resting his head on the back rest and his eyes were closed , but he wasnt sleeping , just resting .

Lag Ja Gale Ki Phir Ye Hasin Raat Ho Na Ho
Shaayad Phir Is Janam Men Mulaaqaat Ho Na Ho
Lag Jaa Gale ...

He felt like someone came and sat on his lap , he opened his eyes , it was radhika . In her baby pink saree , sitting on bhis lap , smiling like an angel and looking at him lovingly.

Ham Ko Mili Hain Aaj, Ye Ghadiyaan Nasib Se
Ji Bhar Ke Dekh Lijiye Ham Ko Karib Se
Phir Aap Ke Nasib Men Ye Baat Ho Na Ho
Shaayad Phir Is Janam Men Mulaaqaat Ho Na Ho
Lag Jaa Gale ...

And she wrapped her arms behind his neck. Coming closer to him and caressing his hair softly and then , caressing his face.

Paas Aaiye Ki Ham Nahin Aaenge Baar-Baar
Baahen Gale Men Daal Ke Ham Ro Le Zaar-Zaar
Aankhon Se Phir Ye Pyaar Ki Barasaat Ho Na Ho
Shaayad Phir Is Janam Men Mulaaqaat Ho Na Ho

Arjun hugged her and she hugged him back . Afetr few seconds of a tight embrace , She broke the hug , but only to kiss his forehead . And after she kissed his forehead, she again hugged him , finding solace in him. And arjun also hugged her , and just wished ... that this moment nver ended... well said... this dream doesnt ended...at least not so soon...


Lag Ja Gale Ki Phir Ye Hassin Raat Ho Na Ho
Shaayad Phir Is Janam Men Mulaaqaat Ho Na Ho
Lag Jaa Gale ...

Arjun opened his eyes, it was just his dream. He looked at her , she had fallen asleep . And it was quite cold as it was raining strongly outside, so he stood up and went towards radhika and removed his coat and placed it on radhika. And , while keeping it , she woke up , and when she found him standing there and with his coat on her ,she took that coat off her, stood up and threw it on him , she fumed at him and shouted :

R.. yeh aap baar baar mere paas kyu aa jate hain ? kyu ? jab bhi aapse door jane ki koshish kar ti hoon , aap mere paas aa jate hain ! Aap kyu nahi samajte sir , please... mujh se door rahi ye , please ! mujhe nahi chahiye aap ki koi madat ! mujhe bas akela chod dijiye , nahi reh sakti main aap ke kareeb , main nahi ! samjhe aap?!!!!!!!

Arjun was shocked at this behaviour of her , but he just prefered to stay silent, kept his jacket on the sofa and sits back on the sofa looking at her stubborn behaviour. She comes to the coffee table and took the jug and filled a glass of water for her , right in front of her , arjun was sitting with his eyes closed. After drinking the water ,she went to her seat and slept there .

in the morning ...

Radhika woke up first , it was quite cold , She saw arjun sleeping on the couch without his coat as his coat was lying on the couch . She was upset that he slept in a rainy night without his coat , in cold.

r( in her mind ) itni thand mein hi so gaye bina kudke coat pehnne ! thand lag jaati toh .

she went towards the coffee table for a glass of water and her eyes fell on arjuns neck , which had some bruises and below the neck , a deep cut , with blood , but the blood was dried . She gently touchd his bruises and wound with her hand .

R. ( in her mind ) gundon se ladte hue lag gaya hoga inhen ...

She took a tissue paper and diped it in the glass of water she was going to drink , bent down and cleaned his wound , gently , so he doesnt wakeup ... She took the coat which was lying on the coach and placed it on him ( on his chest ) ...

she saw the guard in the office from her transparent glass ...

and she went towatds the door and the guatd went there seeing her there anf opened the door .

g. madam... puri raat aap yaha ?

r. haan woh arjun sir bhi hai yahaan... piyali mam aye toh unhe bolna ki mai bas 1 ghante main aa rahi hoon please .

And she went home to freshen up ...

Arjun woke up , listening to the converdation, and found his coat on him , removing it from him and still with sleepy eyes ...

a. ( in his mind ( yeh mere upar kya kar raha hai ?

And he looked around for radhika ... he didnt find her there ... he looked at the opened door and the gurd ...he waked towards he guatd who was at tye reception ...

a.Yeh . . radhika kahan gayi ?

g. woh toh ghar gahi hai bol ke gayu hai ki 1 ghante mai aa gayengi ...

a. acha... toh tum meta bhi bol dena ki mai bhi 1 ghante main aa raha hoon..

And arjun leaves from there .

In london, in sam and neils bedroom, sam was sleeping while neil was awake , and neil got up from the bed and called piyali:

N.. hello ma, ma , maine sam ko kerala wali job offer ke bare mein bataya , aur usne haan bhi keh diya , ma , hum jald se jald kerala ja rahe hain,main aap ko message kar dunga kal ki hum kab a rahe hain.

P.. that's great neil ! main tumhare message ka wait karungi , , take care neil aur sam ko bhi ,

N..yes ma,



In piyalis cabin,

P.. Samrat , sam ne kerala jaane ke liye haan kar diya hai , aur hamara latest ad project bhi kerala ka hai , we have to send a team to shoot the ad there and also some legal work , which arjun will handle. Par problem yeh hai ki agar hum dono jaa te hai toh bs kaun sambhale ga , ?

S.. no problem piyali, iss baar sirf tum jao , ab toh sam kerala mein hi hogi toh, mein kabhi bhi chala jaunga , tumhe uski bahut zyada hi yaad aati hai na , toh , you go .. ill handle evrything here ..

p.. r u sure ?

S.. im 200% sure!

In the conference room , ( with piyali , samrat , radhika , zubin, kritika , teji , bonnie , and arjun )

p.. so guys , jaise ki aap sabko pata hai , ek bahut bade south indina actor ko hum ne sign kiya hai ek kerala based ad karne ke liye , and this a a huge project for us, so , I have decided that , since the idea is given by radhika and teji and bonnie have been in her team , so they will be going to handle the shoot in kerala , hence travel there, along with arjun , who has to take care of soome legal work regarding this ad and . So youll be leaving today in the evening and I ve already booked your tickets, so, Teji bonnie radhika and arjun , please go home and get ready . I hope I made myself clear . you may resume your work. Oh, and one more thing , ill be joining you as well in the trip. Does anyone have a question regarding this trip ?

b.. mam, what will be the location ?

p.. oh, thnaks bonnie , ahh,,,, we havent decided the location , well have to go on a location hunt .

B.. yes mam ...

P.. alright then ..good luck !

And everyone left the room.

Precap. arjun kaka convo, nesam caf scene ...ardhika ( romance ) and tream leave mumbai ...nesam bedroom romance.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
You touched my heart yaar
Such a beautiful story
Arjun changed alot
Piyali and samrat convo is so touchy ❤️
Loved it ❤️
You are excellent writer 👍🏼
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thanks a lot for your encouragement ! im really very happy you liked it !
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Wonderful chapter 😃
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Originally posted by: .navi.

Superb viny :) grt going :)




thanks a lot 😃 im glad you liked it
Edited by heartbroken1 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

<font size="4" color="#cc6666">Wonderful chapter😃</font>



thanks a lot im really happy u liked it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u for updating soon.. Beautiful one👍🏼
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Originally posted by: romi21

Thank u for updating soon.. Beautiful one👍🏼



im glad you liked it 😃😃😃😃
Edited by heartbroken1 - 10 years ago
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awesome updayte
loved it viny
i am really sorry i am quite busy these days i rarely come online
so just couln't comment but whenever i get time i will commment
anyways update soon
thanks for the pm

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