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@pup03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Awesome start of interesting three shot.. felt bad for Khushi.. but seems her husband shows something else while he behaves other way.. Arnav is angry as somebody proposed to his ex-wife however he is openly seen with other woman.. well waiting to for Arnav's pov.. loved the start..

sorry for not commenting regularly..

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Fe-en-Dios

@Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: .LadyHitler.
I'm glad that you didn't post the second update yet! I knew i was taking time to read but i didn't want to be this late!

So finally, i'm here with my comment after reading! 😆

Firstly, do you hate NK or what N ji? I mean why do you always have him heart-broken! 😆 I'm not sure if he is serious about Khushi in this but still you are breaking his heart!

Coming to the plot, i find this interesting! Arranged Marriage, divorce but not completely out of it! Their hide n seek of feelings which they don't want to show but some times fail to do so!

So Khushi still loves him but thinks that Arnav doesn't! I don't want to judge Arnav without knowing his POV! That Green monster which we have seen once is enough to know about Arnav's feelings!

I love the way you have all your characters a bit complicated, i mean close to reality!

I'm enjoying this completely N ji! Bring it on!

There's some thing i'm excited about! And that's Sheetal! I want to know if she is bad! I mean completely negative? If she isn't then its probably Arnav's fault!

Omg Nisha better late than never lol ...

But I will wait to read back ur views on BTS 😳

Lol sheetal n exciting 😲

I will update today in an hour or so 😳

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Fe-en-Dios

@Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: chandni4433
Will b waiting

I am updating soon 😳

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

BrIng it on dear... 😉

We are anxiously waiting😃

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Fe-en-Dios

@Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Edited!

Okay N you have me speechless or rather wordless here! You Get that?

Aww that was cute. The first part of Arnav marriage and how they had very easily fell into that camaraderie. Emotionally and mentally attached yet physically afar. You had very beautifully set the pace of the story.

The slow revelation of the past and the simultaneous description of the past and Arnav's feelings in the present.

And the best part of your writing is how so easily and fluently you narrate both the past and present. And it never confused us too, that is the best part dear! Oh have I told how much I love you and your writing? If not hear it again and clear!

Then coming back. Oh Arnav wants to get her back and how! Yeah we are waiting for that how apart! We know they why, when and what! Waiting totally, seriously and enthusiastically!

You did an excellent job of portrayal of Arnav's pov. I keep telling this N, there are very few who write his POV and that too in such a manner in which we can very easily relate and travel with him. I am seriously astounded by your writing darling...

Waiting again N!

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Wow.👏

I wish you could continue this bit longer... I m loving his POV more than Khushi's

But, what I find disturbing is, why didn't Arnav man up and ask Sheetal to back off..

The reason for Khushi's misunderstanding might be because, she is naive and pure... On the other hand, he already had few relationships...and he broke with Lavanya to settle with her...

I guess, at one point Khushi decided to give them a chance, but, Aranv flying out of country may have given a negative signal and on top of that he asking to hide the truth from her... Blown-up everything... She was holding for...

But, what i didn't get is, Khsushi filing for divorce, this is a very childish act...

As you said in the begging, its how we perceive things... Or the angle which we look at...

Both are at fault.. BOTH need to workout the issues at hand...

Anxiously waiting to find out the outcome of the the last shot...

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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

me :))

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N fantabulous update 👏

Weakest link in any relation is mistrust. When I have read part 1, I thought Arnav was at fault but when I have read part2, I felt sad for him.

Loved the insight into Arnav's POV.

Aww... Arnav was hopelessly in love with Khushi from the day he married her. Arnav was not at fault. He honestly told her about his past relationships on their wedding night. Commonly in arranged marriages husbands won't think to wait till they fall in love to consummate their marriage... But Arnav respected her and he did that because of his respect for women... I felt he is true gentleman.

Slowly they grew closer but Sheetal entry back into his life ruined everything. He thought to give her time and went back without talking to her. Arnav might have asked Anjali not to tell Khushi about Sheetal being in Dubai, but his intentions were not bad. He doesn't wanted anything to add to the already miseries in their marriage.

Khushi Gupta, was chosen to be his bride. Young, educated, self -respecting, forthright and cultured, not to mention exceptionally beautiful, khushi' was probably every guy's dream come true. And Arnav was no exception to not be cast under her spell. However, the irony was that while everyone unanimously believed her to be "the best" she thought otherwise

by reading this I understand that the problem with Khushi is, her insecurities, inferior complex and lack of communication. I guess Khushi herself don't feel, that she is the right one for Arnav and she misunderstood him with lack of trust on him. I felt Khushi sending divorce papers is an impulsive act. But when Khushi thinks she loves him a lot , what is it without trust... But will wait for next update to see Khushi's side story what it says.

But why her parents didn't allow Arnav to meet her daughter? Is there any reason?

Loved how Arnav didn't leave her even when she left him⭐️. To be with her he even bought the company she works for... That shows why she works for him.

Arnav is waiting to talk to her

"May I come in, sir."

"of course, Miss Gupta, I have been waiting for you, for too long now."

Waiting for next update.

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

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Wow that was some revelation of Arnav's POV.

So he was and I guess is not saint. He confessed this to his wife Khushi whom he was and is immensely attracted that too on there wedding night, not before and not after, knowing she is cultural and traditional. I still give him points for being truthful but what after Sheetal re entered?

I mean he had an idea of how Khushi has inferiority complex, does he had no idea of the things brewing in her mind regarding him and Sheetal, was it all her brain creation of some doubts seed by Sheetal, and she is still trying it all to keep them away.

Is Arnav aware of all this? Is he in relation with Sheetal at present or was he when he was in uS for two years after divorce? If not what will he do of Sheetal when he will know the rumors she is spreading?

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#150

UnRes :-)

Wow!!! This is interesting N :-)

Arnav is head over heels for kushi.. he is not at fault.. he might have asked anjali not to tell kushi about sheetal being in dubai, but his intentions were not bad.. he doesn't wanted anything to add to the already sinking marriage. . But destiny had something else in store for them. .

So, the problem with kushi is insecurity.. and with this she is hurting him and herself. . God!! Knock some sense into her..

Waiting N to see how arnav is going to convince her and win her back..

This story is awesome and very different. . Loved it..

Thanx for the pm dear :-)

Edited by pravallika - 10 years ago