Originally posted by: gayatrisahu1985
priya please update already have liked and commented for part 1 looking forward to the story thanks
Originally posted by: swapna.p
nice start..
ragini and maan are not happy with this relation..waiting for maaneet meeting..
Originally posted by: nishamna
Nice starting.maan has been married for 2 years and today was his anniversery . all were wishing them but the couple didn't wish each other. Yash and meera tried to made.them understand but it seems they don't understand each other. Waiting for maneet meeting.
Originally posted by: samidsamid
awsm updt...maan and ragini married to ech othr...bt nt happy with rltnshp...maan misses his dadi...waiting fr maneet intro...
Originally posted by: Drashtilove
nice start both r pretned to be a happy couple infront of the world but in truth they r not both lost their child n blamed each other for this yash n meera did try their best but they couldnt bring them together lovely start thnx 4 pm
Originally posted by: Arina_10
interesting update! well written!
thanks for the pm dear!
It's their second anniversary!
ragini didn't told him abt da pragnancy!
maan tried to console ragini!
she blamed him 😒
both are not happy & blame each other!
maan is so lonely 😭 😭
maan misses his dadi!
eagerly waiting for maaneet meeting 👏
Part 2
Ghume hai hum saari duniya mein
Par sakoon milta hai bs teri bahoo mein
.
.
Geet
.
Geet
Geet : ji maaji aayi
Maaji : nasta tyaar hai
Geet : ji bs ho gya
Maaji : jaake princess ko uthayo humari
Geet : hmm
Maaji : aur sun
Tera purse kaha hai
Geet : purse kis liye
Maaji : swal na kr
Pasie chaiye mujhe
Aaj pari ka phla din hai collage ka
Geet : usse pocket money di toh thi
Ab aur kis liye
Maaji : chup chap de rhi hai ya nhi
Geet : mere pass nhi hai
Pari ko bolo
Wo apne kharche limit mein rakhe
Yaha koi paiso ka ped nhi laga hai
Maaji : tu toh yhi bolongi
Mere bte ko toh kha gyi
Aaj wo hota
Toh mujhe tere aange hath na felane pdte
.
Pata nhi usne tujhme kya dekha
.
From past two year she listening this type of talk daily ... Now tears
also dried ...but pain is still...
Days and night passes like years...
.
Har din sochti hu
Asa kya kiya tha maine gunaah
Jiski mujhe ye saza milli
Jb bhi muskarana chaha
Usse phle aansu humesha mile
Khehne ko toh bhut bda parivaar hai mera
Par rishte ke naam pe ye hath humesha khali rhe hai
.
Again night come, as usual for walk she comes to rose garden... For
public this garden always closes up to 9 pm...
Rose Garden Asia's largest Rose Garden and is spreaded over 30 acres of land having over 1600 different species or roses. These have been planted beautifully carved out lawns and flowers beds.
But geet always come after 10 pm...
Kaka : geet beta
Geet : kaka aaj maine halwa bnaya tha
Aapko pasand hai
Toh aapke liye bhi le aayi
Kaka : beta koi khas wajh
Geet : khas wajh toh ab meri zindagi mein kuch nhi rhi kaka
Wo maaji ne bola
Toh bna diya
Kaka : khush raho beta
Geet : kaka mujhe andher jaana hai
Kaka : jaa
Jaldi aaiyo
Geet : thanks kaka
***********
Dev : geet I love you
Will you marry me
.
Geet I promise you
Mein tumhe wo har khushi dunga
Jo tum chahti ho
.
Geet : par dev
Mein
.
Dev : koi aur hai tumhari zindagi mein
Geet : nhi dev
You are my best friend
And I love you too but as friend
Dev : so
Tumhari taraf se HA hai fir
Geet : yes
.
But dev my family
You know na
Chacha chachi toh bilkul nhi maanege
Dev : sweetheart don't take tension
Maa aaj unse baat krne gyi hai
Abhi tk toh puch bhi gyi hongi
Geet : what
Itna sb kr diya tumne
Aur ab mujhse puch rhe ho
Dev : because I know my geet
She never denied
Geet : acha
Ydi mein NA khti toh
Dev : asa kbhi nhi ho sakta hai geet
Mein jaanta hu
Tum mere liye kuch bhi kr sakti ho
Jaise mein tumhare liye
Geet : yes dev
I do anything for you
Ek tum hi toh ho
Jo mujhse smjta hai
Jo sch mein mujhe khush dekhna chahta hai
Na ki mere chacha chachi ki tarah
Jo bs mujhe is liye jhel rhe hai
Smajh kya kahenga
Wo toh mujhe college bhi nhi jaane dete
Ladki pe kya paise waste krne
Wo toh acha huya
Tumhari wajh se mujhe part time hotel mein job mil gyi
Aur half scholarship
Dev : geet maine kuch nhi kiya
Ache logo ki madat khud bhagwan krte hai
Aur tumhare babaji toh humesha hai na tumhare sath
Geet : thanks dev
Par kya meri family maanegi
Dev : of course
Maanegi
.
Now give me gift
Geet : gift for what
Dev : geet aaj humari friendship ko 3 saal ho gye
Aur tum bhool gyi aaj ka din
Maine kbhi nhi socha tha
Tum humare is khas din ko bhool jaayungi
.
Now am angry with you
Geet : dev sorry
Sch mein na jaane mein kaise bhool gyi
Baba maaf krdo
Dev : ase maafi nhi maangte
Geet : toh fir kaise maangte hai
Dev : abhi batata hu
Dev pull her by waist and kissed on her lips, she shocked from sudden kiss...
Dev : don't shocked sweetheart
Bs ek kiss hi toh tha
Geet : how dare you
Mujhse bina puche
Dev : can I kiss you again
Dekho ab mein puch raha hu
.
Isliye bina puche kiss kiya tha
He winked...
**************
Dev happy friendship day
Dekho is baar mein nhi bhulu
.
She hugged herself and sits on bench...
Another side at far on one corner someone also sited and lost into
own self...
Chilly breezes only shoo thing the body nor to soul...both tries to
show the society we are happy family, but in inner both losing own
self...
Khud ko khote jaa rhe hai hum
Logo ko ye dekhane mein
Hum khush hai
Kya humara mann khush hai
Nhi...sayad ab ho bhi nhi sakta
************
Maan bte humne aapke liye ek ladki dekhi hai
Achi hai
Maan : daadi phle aapka ilaaz honga
Then meri shaadi
Daadi : pata nhi hum bachenge bhi ya nhi
Humari aapki shaadi ki khawaish sayad adhuri hi rh jaani hai
Maan : daadi kitni baar mein aapse kahu
Aapko kuch nhi honga
You are my life daadi
Daadi : beta ab waqt aa gya hai
Aap kissi aur ko apni zindagi bana le
Please beta
Humari aakhri khawaish hi smjh lijiye
.
Hum marne se phle aapka ghar basta dekhna chahta hai
Maan : daadi please as amt khiye
Daadi : ye ragini ki tasveer hai
Aapko kal unse milna hai
Maan : ji
***********
Geet ab toh tujhe na chahte huye bhi us char divari mein wapas
jaana honga
Let's go
.
.
Ye indhera kitna acha hai
Kam se kam
Roshani ki tarah aankho mein chubta toh nhi
.
.
She collided with someone, for protecting her, he held her by
shoulders ... Due to darkness both not able to see whole face, but,
both stare to each other...
.
Shi kaha aapne
Darkness is better from that light, where we smiles for society but nor for own...
Ye andhera khi acha hai
.
.
Sayad aap khud se naraaz hai
.
Sayad aap bhi
.
Sorry , andhere mein , mein aapko dekh nhi paayi
Aur aapse takra gyi
And thanks too
For saving me
.
Acha hai hum ek dusre ko nhi dekh paaye
Nhi toh firse ek jhooti muskan aur jud jaati
.
Good night
.
Same to you Miss
.
Miss
.
Ajnaabi rahe toh jyada acha hai
Km se km
Formality nhi hongi
.
Right Miss
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