RagNa TS-A Intense Love Story (Last Shot -pg12&13) 31/7 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanchal57

Loved intense love TS.. k read both chappy in 1 go... Hehehe raghav shouted on sam nd doubted who is this jaan..? Lol
Later he get to knw she is her sis,hehe raghav ka popat ho gya... later when kalpi came in different avtar hehehe it was awesome specially sammy's twirling her.. later ragna fall in love awww...
Next chappy pain😭😭it was really painful ...Kalpi coma mai hhaifrm past 7 years grrr... how can maya force raghav to marry piggy I knw she love her bro but still.. awww sammy love kalpi so much.. is guilty for kalpi's condition.. his condition is heart wrenching... he love her so much... yay he shouted on piggy for playing wid ragna children.. sammy come home drunk nd push maya so sad ,raghav punching him for hurting his sis it is nice...later raghav consoling sammy who is again crushing himself for hurting his sis... when he went in her room nd his emotional words made me sad...later ragna & sammy maya sleeping together is too gud.. right only kalpi can give them happiness nd old sammy back.. hope she. Recover soon.. update next chappy asap nd how many children do ragna hv?😆

Thanks aanchal and yeah raghav shouted on sam and doubt on him and yeah raghav ka popat ho gaya when he gets to know that she was her sister and yeah then kalpi comes in totally different avatar and as soon as raghav see her he gets attracted to her and yeah I know second shot is really very painful,kalpi is in coma from past seven years and maya forced raghav to marry pakhi because she only wants her brother's happiness because she had seen her bhai dying everyday and yeah sammy blames himself for kalpi's condition and he too was in too much pain and yeah he shouted on pakhi for playing with ragna kids and yeah in night sammy comes home drunk and push maya and raghav punched him for hurting his sister and at the end raghav console him when he again start cursing himself and yeah later sammy comes to his sis room and pleads her to get up and then everyone sleeps together and yeah right now only kalpi can give them back their happiness and old sammy and whether she will recover or not you will get to know in last shot and dear ragna had two kids and will update last shot soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you everyone for your wonderful comments and feedbacks.
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Last Shot (Together Forever)
In night doctor comes to see kalpi and after checking up her doctor informs everyone that we all are loosing her day by day which hurts everyone and tears fall from raghav's eyes but he wipes it before anyone could see it but maya notice it so when doctor left she again tells to raghav to please accept pakhi and please move on with her which irritates sam and this time he gives a tight slap to maya which made her fall on the ground but shouts on her and say if again ever you raise this topic na then at that very moment I will divorce you which shocks everyone and raghav tries his best to make sam understands but suddenly maya gets up and shouts on sam and say do whatever you want,I don't care,if you think I am selfish then fine I am but not for myself but for bhai as I only wants his happiness and specially at this age their kids needs their mother the most to which sam ask raghav himself doesn't want to move on in his life then why are you forcing him to which maya reply I know this but I know this also that he going through a lot of pain from past seven years but he won't say anything to anyone but I had seen him dying everyday,every second of his life and now I only want their sufferings to just get end and I don't know if kalpi do the same or not if she was on my place but I know she too also wants everyone's happiness and she never wants us to go through all this pain and suffering because of her,she wants us to move on in your life and be happy after saying so she left from their leaving everyone dumbfolded at their place and soon sam to left from their angrily whereas pakhi comes to maya's room and maya apologised to her for everyone's rude behaviour but pakhi says maya it's OK and asked her what had happened seven years ago, how kalpi slips into coma,how that accident took place to which maya reply four of us are very happy after our marriage infact our life is also going very smoothly,we enjoyed every single moment of our life and live it fully but seven years ago, one day on sam's constant insists kalpi had comed to our house to live with us for some day leaving her children's with raghav but at that very night kalpi gets a call from raghav that their children's are not well,they both had a very high temperature and kalpi told to raghav that she is coming right now only but raghav suggests her to come in morning as it was heavily raining outside and kalpi agrees but after an hour she called raghav to inquire about their kids healthy but raghav doesn't receive the call which makes kalpi very worried and she decides to go back in night only and me and sam tries our best to stop her from going but she was admitted to her decision so sam says to kalpi that come I will drop you to your home but kalpi denies and told sam to stay with me as the outside the weather was not good but sam doesn't allow her to go alone in night but she was admitted so sam locks her in a room and after half an hour when we both goes to give her the food we get to know that she had already run away from their through window and we tried our best to call her and even we tried to call raghav but due to heavy rains the call doesn't get connected then me and sam decides to go out and search her but we couldn't able to even step out as it was rain heavily and water had gathered all around and whole night passes like this and whole night we both keep pacing back and forth in tension but we didn't get any news of her then in morning sam receives a call from raghav and raghav informs him that he is coming to take kalpi then we get to know that till now she had not reached her home and when raghav comes to our house we told him everything whatever happened past night then three of us go out and search her but we didn't find her nor any of us get a single hint about her then we goes to police station and fill her missing complaint so after one hour raghav gets a call which changed our life and that call was from inspector who informed us that they have found kalpi's car but the car is in very bad condition like a accident had happen so with the help of police three of us scan every hospital and at last we find her in a hospital and a smile comes on our faces when we get to know that she is alive but soon it fades when we get to know that because of accident she had slipped into coma and from that time sam blames himself for everything and now from past seven years everyone of us is praying that she just recover soon but now it seems like god is very angry on us and while narrating the whole incident maya had tears in her eyes so pakhi place her hand on maya's shoulder and give her a assurance look and tells her soon everything will gets fine,god can't be so cruel on you all,he will surely listen to your prayers whereas on the other hand sam's mom come to his room and tells him to calm down and just listen to her careful and sam just nod her head then she again says that beta I really don't think that maya was wrong because for just once think that if kalpi was on raghav's place and raghav was on kalpi and you were on maya's then after seeing your sister,your jaan dying and suffering everyday and every second of her life won't you suggests her the same,won't you to which sam quickly reply no mom,I won't suggest her the same but his mom gives him a small smile and says sleep beta and just think about it once again after saying so she left from leaving sam in a confusion,he was in two state of mind,one is saying maya is right but other is dying so to avoid it he decides to sleep but sleep was very far away from him as his mom words are still ringing in his ears,he just imagine the entire situation which his mom had told him then he realises that maya was right at her places and if he was at maya's place he too would have done the same thing but next morning they both again start fighting with each other and that to in kalpi's room and raghav tries to ask them the reason of their fight to which sam tells him that yesterday I had only told about divorce but your sister had sent me the divorce which shocks everyone and they all give her a questioning look to which maya says yeah sam is right I had sent him the divorce papers because now I am feed up of daily fight and now I have realised that we both can't stay in this relation anymore and specially I don't want to stay with that person who doesn't care about my feelings and emotions so it is better that we both get separated and lived our life,like the we want to which sam reply OK fine,I also don't want to live with you anymore and it will very good for us if we both part our ways and all this while they both kept on looking kalpi but she didn't open up her eyes nor she shows any sign which kills and hurts sam so he shouts on her and say enough is enough jaan,to wake you up we both had done this drama but it doesn't effect you a bit which again shocks everyone and raghav ask maya whats going on to which maya tells all of them what had happen yesterday night,(fb starts) after realising his mistake sam comes to maya and apologise her for his rude behaviour and says to her that he don't have any problem,if raghav wants to move on his life and wants to marry someone else he can do that but only he wants but shocking to him maya told him that from now on she won't force raghav to move on with pakhi or anyone else as no else can takes kalpi's place in our family and hearts and she again says that till now we both had tried our best to wake up her but always separated so why don't we tried it again for the last time but this time together and sam agreed so early morning they both goes to meet the doctor and doctor told them that may be shock therapy can work and she will get up so we did all this drama to give a shock to her but our plans failed (fb ends) but it is high time for sam so he again says to kalpi that you love na seeing all of us begging infront you to get up but from now on none of us going to beg infront you to get 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And sam continue saying that today if won't get up na then I promise that never again in life I will come to this room nor I will see your face,right now here only I will break my all the ties with you and you that I will do which shock everyone and maya tries to say something but sam stops her by showing his palm so she tells raghav do something and make sam understand but sam's mother tells them not to interfere between sam and kalpi,let them handle all this and specially now sam won't listen to anyone,he is just stubborn like her jaan only and today kalpi has to get up,if she won't get up then she has to loose her bhai then suddenly kalpi start breathing heavily so sam calls the doctor and within in 5 or 10 minutes doctor come their and check kalpi and did their best they can do to save her but at last they lost her and doctor informs everyone that she is no more which stunned everyone and everyone starting crying except raghav,he was standing at his place like a statue not ready to accept what he heard just now whereas sam starts crying and say to kalpi please jaan come back,I promise I won't fight with you ever nor I will break my ties with you,we will always live together but please come back,we can't live without you and maya tries to console him but he says to maya that please tell your doll na to get up, we can't live without her but she tells sam to calm down and tells him to be strong as now everyone need us the most and specially raghav and soon as sam hears raghav's name he looked at him who was standing at his places unaffected so he goes towards him and shake his shoulder to bring him back into the reality as soon as raghav realised everything he just fell down on floor and tears are running through his eyes so seeing his condition sam hugs and consoles him but raghav says now what's the need of me to live when my life,my kalpi is not with me, now how can I survive,in this past seven years I am living with a hope that one or another day she will get up,she will come back to us but today I lost that hope too after saying so he quickly gets up and takes a knife from fruit basket and says if she is not in my life then I too don't want to live so right now,here only I am ending my life and everyone tries to make him understands to not do such a mad thing but he was about to cut his wrist and at that very moment kalpi move her hands and legs and soon she again starting breathing and after one or two minutes she opens her eyes too then days passes like this kalpi recovers very fast but still as seven years had passed and their kids never get the mother's love so their was a lack of tunning between kalpi and her kids and everyone tries their best and helps kalpi to win her children's heart and as time passes slow-slow kalpi develop a bond with her kids too and even
maya to apologise to kalpi for pushing raghav to move on in his life and marry someone else but kalpi tells her that di,it is completely fine,no need to apologise as may be if I was in your place may be I too would have done the same thing so at end when everything gets back to normally they all enjoy and shows their excitement by organizing a grand and a lavish party for kalpi in which they invited all the closed ones...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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really fab update
hmm kalpi get so sick that her brother was in despair
hmm kalpi was lost but rag attempt bring her back hmm kalpi slowly get her kids n ends well lovely end
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb dear
Maya determind she wants rag's and kids happiness
First u give me heartattack then happy ending
Awesome story and thanku r sharing us
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏Awesome ending .
Loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update. ..
Yippee finally kalpi get up👏
Update soon next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the lovely story ! Thank God , it did not turn out to be a tragic ending ! All ended well, so finally our hearts are at peace !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow happy ending to a beautiful story
Thnxs for giving us dis wonderful love story❤️ 🤗

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