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@candyjan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#791

Allah finally i got hold on this story... Ye muj say kho gai thi...

All chapters are mind blowing dear...

Do continue soon n pm me pleej...

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jasbin

@jasbin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#792

thanks for pm

that was a lovely teaser

as for the note, as a writer i agree with u & will wait for update as a& when they are updated

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Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 11 years ago

#793

Originally posted by: candyjan
Allah finally i got hold on this story... Ye muj say kho gai thi...
All chapters are mind blowing dear...
Do continue soon n pm me pleej...

Hi there thanks for reading n commenting on BTS

Surely will add u n keep u posted 😛

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Fe-en-Dios

@Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 11 years ago

#794

Originally posted by: jasbin
thanks for pm
that was a lovely teaser
as for the note, as a writer i agree with u & will wait for update as a& when they are updated

Thanks jasbin will be putting up the update in a few hours 😛

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Fe-en-Dios

@Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 11 years ago

#795

Originally posted by: cheesemad
Waiting! :D

Won't keep u waiting for long hopefully

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Fe-en-Dios

@Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 11 years ago

#796

Originally posted by: sudhareddy
me :)
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N loved reading Khushi's POV.
Now I understand that Arnav is not only sufferer, Khushi is very much hurt and alone too. Though she is not ready to forgive him but neither she couldn't forget him. She is trying to move on with Nandan but reality slapped her harshly in the form of Arnav as Lavanya's fiancee.

Loved how you wrote the way Khushi standing at the same place where Arnav was there before and reeling the past.
Loved how Khushi's bonded with Arnav and Aman's families and mostly with Anjali.
"Yes both Aman and Arnav had a "normal' family life , unlike what she had witnessed,"
The way you said I felt Khushi has a painful or bad childhood.

Khushi thought Arnav's gestures to be of a person in love and someone having feeling for her. I guess he hurt her deeply by not accepting his feelings for her or may be that time he still not able to understand his feelings towards Khushi...
"woh kabhi na to samjhega na kahega, but he does like you a lot. Maybe you should take the lead."
I felt that because of what Anjali said to Khushi.

"Her young self had not imagined and anticipated the blow from Arnav of all the people. He knew her weakness and he had ended up hurting her where it hurts most. Knowingly. "
... With what you wrote I guess may be in anger Arnav said about her family or her character.
"So many questions unanswered and while the two best friends had been torn apart then, she had been left guilty of the happenings. Yes, in hindsight she wasn't the one responsible nor was she the one who had initiated the argument. But somewhere she had been the reason for the fall out."
Even though Aman is Arnav's childhood friend and knows him inside out, he had chosen Khushi over Arnav ... that means something big has happened and that related to Khushi. What ? Waiting to know eagerly.

So the person who overheard Arnav and Nalini convo is Lavanya and she was upset and hurt that her mom chose to talk to Arnav than her. Did she called her chat friend or Nandan?

Aman and Arnav arguing?
Eagerly waiting to read next update

Sudha thanks for ur comments ...loved Reading them

ASR is our very own ASR ..he is haughty and doesn't have self control too often 😆

The chapter tonight will definitely reveal a bit more ..

I hope to see u arnd sweety 🤗

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#797

Hi Dear N,

Waiting for update...

Where is my buddy? EC, buddy? Hope you are doing great...

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Fe-en-Dios

@Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 11 years ago

#798

Originally posted by: SharuAG
Hi Dear N,
Waiting for update...

Where is my buddy? EC, buddy? Hope you are doing great...

Sharu Updating now 😛

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Fe-en-Dios

@Fe-en-Dios

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Posted: 11 years ago

#799

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cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#800

Here

waiting for signal :P

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hey N, I am finally here to give my feedback for this update. I am sorry for being late but I know you understand🤗 I loved the quote at the beginning of the update, it is so true!

Coming to the update, it was one of the best updates, now that things are opening bit by bit but the way you are opening the things up, I am loving that style, a little past here, a little bit of present there, I am loving your style. Now I was so excited to read about Aman and Arnav's fight, things like this happen, sometimes friends turn enemies 😛 On serious note, sometimes guys get really crazy! But I am curious to know why did Khushi not tell anything to Arnav? Was there a reason, because I thought she would ask him to help her? Or she was too embarrassed to ask him? I would like to read Khushi's POV in this matter and I will wait for it.

Aman was wrong, fighting like that would give nothing but yeah I agree Arnav had provoked him. Arnav has some major anger issues! I am glad that Khushi came in between and interrupted their stupid fight, but I guess, damage was already done!

Yes, Arnav was wrong! Very very wrong! Both the people involved in this were every close to him so he should have kept a little patience. But now also they are being childish, both Arnav and Aman, Arnav a little more than Aman, according to me. I know he still has feeling for her but this is not the way he should have acted at Nandan's place. Another thing that had caught my attention is when he said Aman knew about Khushi's whereabouts, what does that mean? She hid from Arnav or another way of saying that is, she went away from him and did not tell him anything? Arnav must have felt betrayed when he came to know that Aman had an idea about Khushi but that was no excuse to react in such a way. he could have waited for a better time, anyway as I have said I love flawed characters, though he was wrong he took my heart away again 😛 LOL

Coming to the sensual dance, it was obviously the high point which everyone must have loved but for me, the high point was of course the little fight between ex-best friends.

You managed to write an awesome description of the passionate dance of ex-lovers. Of course the way they were lost in each others arms, everyone had gotten a little hint of it. Aman would never let Khushi go to Arnav, this is something I would love to see, how he manages? I am so curious to know it 😳 Lavanya also has gotten a little hint, and she would let Nandan know, same with Lav, he is ready to take his own steps, his own ways to prevent a disaster. Could I suggest that Arnav Singh Raizada is royally screwed? Another thing, till now I am not a a BIG fan of Khushi, she is just okay for me and you know the reason but here she is wrong, she should tell Nandan everything and if she is thinking that she would screw Arnav and Nandan's friendship like Arnav and Aman(I am not blaming her for their broken friendship but I am saying she would not want Arnav to lose another friend), she is wrong!! We should never give any chance to others, to blame them!! NEVER!!

Continue soon N!

Also, this update and giving feedback have helped me a lot, I was very sad and you know the reason but now I am happy! Very happy! :D

Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago