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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chapter Hemangi😳
I eagerly waiting to read the next part⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome chapter Hemangi😳

I eagerly waiting to read the next part⭐️


Thank u Nonie 😃
Yeah...i will update it soon 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

A pure soul drenched with pain for her loved ones drove vigorously not caring about the dizzy sky just as her future that threatened to shower wildly any moment ..., even the wind that day blew opposite her that made her feel the whole world is running opposite them... she could clearly see three storms approaching them to shake them wildly tracing away even slightest droplets of happiness with the towel already drenched with a fatal ambition...though she knew the thing she intentioned to change is inevitable some part in her could not stop hoping that beyond this storm lay a bright summer but all the thing threatened her was before she could approach the summer the dark weather would engulf her and it seemed to be the clear cut marking on a black sedimentary rock! **sigh**

I didn't write anything such for a long time now😭, I miss writing So I guess this came out in a reflex 😆 so I didn't RES do bear with me😳, BTW you understood the metaphors😉

Wow...Sansii beautiful lines 😳 ⭐️ Yeah even I missed ur writings...why did u stop

Ofcourse I did understand the metaphors... I got tutored by u all in IF 😊 & wacked my head hard to understand 😆... and now its easy for me to decode it


Anyway now coming to the update😳.. It ws sooperrr bt not much long like ur PM threatened me 😆nyways chalo get serious nd read below😛

I cut short a few sub-parts, otherwise the entire update would cross 3000 words 😲 😆 but still I felt a bit long thats the warning in PM 😆

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Dwarparyug:

Omyyygwaaad one strom passed now two more to go, I fear VH. Now what Karna felt it's a controversial part for sure let the KaLi angle rest in Kaliyug only😆, I do feel he strongly redeemed his mistake ofcourse he had to do it no matter what... mistake is a mistake I m nt going to do pakshapat here!⭐️[not turning antiKarna here...I never can😳] bt one thing I never understood how could a person go alive to heaven after committing such heinous crime😡.. na I am nt saying he is a wicked man all know about the connection between the ground nd his wheel😆 bt still, Why did HP elders keep mum when their beloved DIL was begging in front of their eyes, how correct is it to keep expectation of saving her frm their enimies when her husband[s] couldn't take a stand for her😡

If u ask me I m still befuddled by HP elders silence in VH...& in my next update Swarna will question the same

plus how could Kunti stay with so mahan Vidur uncle after nearly disrobing of her DIL and after her blood ones left HP as it wasn't safe WHY she?? 😕Though I believe she had some shrewd reasons too😈

Obviously I agree she had some shrewd reasons...did she go to Karna to ask a boon for his five sons but not anything for her first born...that too when Krishna insisted her...she did not even tell Karna's true birth even after his death...so that she can keep her image clean or even politically keep her position high in the royal family 😡

BTW how abt a different reason😉.. I mean a addition to INDO MB relationships😈🤪 like we did in the Prapanchi CC😳 K nd V😳 (u getting what I say😉... OMG I committed 100 sins waiting for the Krishus sudarshan chakra to behead me🤪),

@Bold: Yeah...we had some fantastic notions esp in the matter of relationships 😉 and etcwhich includes blends of vadas, mukuts etc etc🤣

anyways I would love Swarna discuss abt this bt at present let her handle herself nd her present now⭐️

Yeah...she will soon

Swarna nd Drau who did catch her😕 Karna or Ps😲

Ps???... Do u think Ps will even dare to approach implusive Angarani in front of Angaraj 😲

Owing to the bout history betwn Swarna & Dushy 😆, Ps would definitely think twice

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Kaliyug:

They got a hint.. abb kya hoga😲

Bahut kucch hoga...but in next chapter 😆

BTW even I did hear that if ever a TT is invented it can travel max 500-600 light years based upon the knowledge of Physics we have at present so I will love to read the PHY gyaan u will tell thru Brayan, Shib or Swarna😳

I had to go thru many many theories and articles about TT... and sometimes some concepts bounces of my head ... but still I attempt to keep it simple in my FF...Hhmm lets see if I can include some gyan in the upcoming chappies 😊

Waiting, and I know dare I ask for a quick UPDATE😭

I know...nowadays I m really really bad in updating early...but still I will try my best...hopefully within a week 😊

Love u🤗

Love u too sweety 🤗

Update soon nd lamba😛

Rest assured...this will be a pakka lamba wala update


Thanks for the sweet comments Sansii 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow!! 👏 so nice hemu!! so the most important incident infrnt of swarna now..how it wud be I am just imagining myself in the situation!! the point where karna realized his fault was very nice with out any extra fittings..well done hemu dear!! next what??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

wow!! 👏 so nice hemu!! so the most important incident infrnt of swarna now..how it wud be I am just imagining myself in the situation!! the point where karna realized his fault was very nice with out any extra fittings..well done hemu dear!! next what??



Thank u Dhivii 🤗
U must have guessed next chapter will be completely imaginative 😊
@Bold: Yes Karn was going thru contrary emotions... he was glad he felt nice that the people who ridiculed him, mocked him to no end is now humiliated in the presence of those who sang praises of them...until he realized it was too late that he and his mitr has crossed their limit in the blindness of getting even to Pandavas.

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~ Thank you all for liking the previous chapter, the first part of Game of Fate series and for your sweet comments ~
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Chapter Hemangi 😊
The truth has finally come out😳
It will be interesting to read the next chapter

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Posted: 10 years ago
Yay! Long update yaar!
It was just simply...AWESOME.
jaldi update ok?

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