MehBeer Three-Shot: Humari Adhuri Kahani || COMPLETED - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
What an update.
The waiting paid off seriously.
Both are idiots. Loved each other so much that they ultimately hurt them.
Abeer, he has got quite a lot of talent and with it a bonus of insecurities too. And his father, ufff, that man needs lessons on relationships.
What she saw in him, indeed.
He came to comfort and did more damage. Panoti!
And Sur, so sad.
Meher lost her right in front of her eyes and could do nothing.
His daughter was dying and Abeer unknown to that was perhaps singing somewhere.
Life!
Btw a superb end to your fic.
I loved it, every line, every para of it.
Please write more and pm me whenever u do.

Niki
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Awesome post.

As per this, Abeer will soon realize his feelings for Meher.

When Abeer's dad praised Meher for topping, how come he didn't like that relationship?
Madhavi(Abeer's mom) likes Meher very much.
Meher's mom likes Abeer
Tunnu(Meher's brother) likes Abeer & wants to be like him.
But Meher's dad & bua, Ufff!


Both of them are talented in their own way.
Both the idiots still love each other.
But they are filled with ego.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
awesome ending...
loved it...
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Very nice, please do write more on mehbeer.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
@Kriti : Well Done ! Honestly your writing style is on point, had me wanting more !
You have a serious gift there my friend ! Hoping to read more from your side !


-Steph

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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
loved ur FF
please write a new one soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Gosh u made me cry. Its so beautifully written and trust me u r just amazing.
Loved the way meher described about their child but alas she lost her. The mere misunderstanding and everything finished..i m happy that they are together again.
Thanks for such a lovely OS. And thanks for the pm. And sorry for the late comment :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Loved this entire thing! The way you described every detail was beautiful! Couldn't stop crying!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Reading this story was an absolute pleasure! I loved it. Please keep writing more on MehBeer :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
that was a beautiful story i just read! 👏
loved it!
u r brilliant

keep writing 😳

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