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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice teaser😛 eager to read the update 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago


Still waiting 😭

AB AUR Kitna wait N ???😭


N pls Jhalak Dikhla Ja 😲😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago


THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.


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Posted: 10 years ago



A/N

So I have decided to split the note and the update, especially now that I can afford to mark two posts. And it's solely for the reason that I WANT the readers to read the notes, atleast the ones which are put up with the chapters. First up, from the teaser to the update, I have changed the usage of one teaser. This one was MORE important. So yes as most of you guessed the second couple were Arhi and the first were initially Aman and Lavanya but I changed it.

We are now at the crossroads of the past colliding with the present in the story. Lots of angst, emotions and Arhi await you. DONOT just read but read between the lines from this chapter onwards. The characters are set and we will have passing references of few and maybe one more entry but now its all about Arhi. I have deliberately kept lavanya away in this Chapter but she will be back in the next, to meet her match.

And now something for my regular readers, some of you have been actively guessing about the past. (and those who haven't can start now), I will now from the next chapter announce the people whose guess/ prediction is accurate in the story AND THAT READER GETS TO READ THE UPDATE BEFORE IT GOES UP FOR OTHERS. Lemme know if this suits you guys, the regular readers I mean. And I mean every word of what I am Writing.

Some of the readers ( jay, kavi, EC, and few others) have already made a few guesses about the past and the characters and guys I remember it all. I will NOT put up the exact thoughts because I want you to read up the chapters and get your answers. But I can tell you that you have got the tail right, though the elephant still seems missing. But well tried. There is a lot more coming up we have just started. So hold it and keep reading BTS.

And I don't have to say this but I am reading each and every comment and I know whose line of thoughts is correct and whose guess is not. But yes from this chapter onwards things will fall into perspective and that is why I am saying that you need to catch the hints thrown in the Chapters.
The above chapter was turning out to be too long and so I have divided it into two. This one is chapter 8. The next would be up soon.




Now coming to another issue. I will be honest, I was in two minds whether to post the update or give it a miss, not cause the update was not ready but because my sole purpose of posting on IF hasn't met its expectations. I was told by a very old member and buddy here that people do end up reading stories and THEY COMMENT. I think I had mentioned this before that i am not looking at a big readership but a 'dedicated' one for sure. And since I do have a life beyond this place I totally get it that one could be busy to not post 'immediately' but there is NO WAY that one doesn't find time to post in weeks together BUT have all the time in the world to read. How do you justify that?

I have been in touch with some awesome people here who actually have written down some beautiful comments here on the thread and also to me on Pms and scraps and I wish I could share those here but unless and untill the readers feel uncomfortable posting here its OK to personally let me know how you feel about the story. And I am not even talking to the regular ones. To actually gauge up the silent readers here is an unfathomable task and i get it that a certain section of the readers would always be silent ones. Fine you have an issue with English or articulating sentences, or your just shy or maybe you are just too stubborn and wont comment or as a matter of fact you're pretty lazy, but all said and done atleast hit the like button. How much time does it take to do that? There is an effort that goes into wriitng chapters and putting them up here and to be honest i donot do well with free-riders. I Don't know I will see the response to this chapter, now that we are at a crucial juncture and then decide further. I had mentioned in my opening note too that I don't want to shift the story or discontinue it and despite my "more than regular" Updating schedule if you give me crap that you don't comment cause you fear that I may leave the story unfinished, and are waiting for it to get over, BUT DO END UP reading, then I should look at first finishing the story "elsewhere" and then I may or may not put it up here. Fair enough? You see there are two sides to every coin. If you have your POV, I have mine. And i want you to see the other side of the coin too. I agree it's the case of once bitten twice shy for a few of you. But every writer is different.

I will also tell you very soon as to why I decided to write BTS and also as to why I am insisting on readers to comment more. And rest assure this will be a win-win situation for both me and my readers. Like I stated before I have been in the business for a long while and I do know how to safeguard my interest and also my readers. That is why I request you to pls hit the like button and take a while and comment, even if it's one word, it makes hell a lot of difference to me. And yes other authors may not bother about silent readers BUT I DO.
Also I have the bandwidth to PM, pls send me a buddy request for future Updates, only if you wish to read and comment.


Edited by Fe-en-Dios - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
yayy i'm first..
i am very much eager to read their past..
now Aman to enter into picture..😉
I think Arnav done something in past which result in hurt pain and at last breaking apart of their friendship.

What a tangled mess of relations and Friendship.. 4 of them r connected..two among them love one...one who feels for two..and one who is friend to three...ufff😆

but at the end someone is going to hurt bad..
and the sad part is that we know who that someone..

Lav is strolling here and there...Inbestigasion karega padi..😆

Cont soon and thanxs 4 pm..

Really vry busy wid projects sry if I miss to comment u...in future.😊
Edited by lechuarshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


Res 😛

Holy shit my heart beats when u update 😛

Woh hoo N u rocked it with ur Updates 👏

Can I hug my baby Arnav pls 😭..he is so umm guilty and yet stern abt what he wants in life 👏

I LOVE HIM ..pkus he was in the black suit and white shirt 😳😛


N I think KHUSHI' is genuinely affected but putting up a brave front ...😕

N I think Lav hates Aman for a reason ..😆

Love you for this update n Thankyou for mentioning me in the note 😳
Edited by ecrivain - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
UnRes :-)
"MEMORIES " are the only thing which is left with arnav. . He is reliving those memories at every chance given.. i think those are the only things left for him to keep himself sane and will act as a driving force to win her back.. every minute he looks at kushi, he is remembering their past moments. . He didn't forget anything..
All these updates, i was in an impression that he hurt only kushi but with this update, I've a feeling that he hurt even aman and screwed up everything between them.. what a mess of relations he had landed himself into..
one thing is very clear here.. don't know how much he hurt kushi and aman, but in the process he hurt himself more than anyone... destiny... no one can change that and no one has control over that.. we sometimes don't intend to do things, but we end up doing them and we regret that moment in every breath we take later.. i think arnav has done the same thing like that.. that doesn't mean that kushi and aman should forgive him.. you haven't revealed the past yet.. so don't know what arnav has done is maafi ke layak hain ya nahin.. but he too is hurting equally. .
I loved the way la has ended things. She doesn't want him to hurt her ego saying that he ended things.. so she dumped him.. lol.. but arnav is a gem in this issue.. he wants to be with la when she breaks the news to family..
What does he want to speak to kushi when the party is going on??? Can't he wait???
Why is lav's sixth sense warning him about aman.. i didn't understand the hint you were giving us with that..
Anyway N another amazing update from you as usual..
Waiting dear.. thanks for the pm :-)
Edited by pravallika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Me!
Edited:

Sorry could not be here on time to RES first spot, was running some errands but at least I am on the same page as the update😳

I liked the chapter. Was aim of the chapter to feel a little bad for our lead guy? Because it kind of worked for me. But I am still saying I am not going to judge anything until and unless complete past is out. I feel somehow that girl Sheetal is involved in this. Lets see if I am right or wrong.

Starting from the beginning, almost every one must be right about the couple😃 ArHi! :D It is hard to deal with this attraction and we all can see that. I would love to read the same scene with Khushi's POV. I know Khushi is still not over Arnav but is she into him as much as he is interested in her? I would love to know that.

Coming to the flashback, I somehow felt that circumstances have been changed, Khushi is now with Nandan, but that attraction is still the same. Arnav's passion is still the same. Another thing, Arnav thought his action would make Khushi realize that his feelings for her are more than just friendship but he was wrong. Is this a huge deal in the past? Did he never express his feelings? I am a big fan of Gillian Flynn and Stephen King, so I kind of refrain myself from guessing, I end up guessing anything absurd and bizarre 😆 Still could not stop this time :P

I can totally understand his shock and somewhere he must be feeling betrayed seeing Khushi and Aman. Aman was Arnav's best friend but now he is way closer to Khushi than him and moreover Nandan is a good friend of Aman too. Arnav might be wrong but that doesn't mean he can't feel this way, after all he is human but unfortunately because of past episode he has to make peace with these new equations between his past and present friends.

Yay! I was correct though you changed it and the time I read it, it was Aman and Lavanya, still I get the to celebrate 😛 And I am so happy! I am just so happy that Lavanya stood up. I am not against Arnav but I feel what Lavanya is doing is absolutely correct. One should do anything(Not illegal stuff of course :P) for his/her love but according to me self respect comes before anything! My POV.

Best part of their conversation according to me was, when Arnav asked her if she really loves him and called her love as infatuation. I loved her reply. I know he meant good, he wanted to make her feel good but that was kind of offensive. You do not love her, fine! Do not label her love as infatuation at least not now, so early. Loved her reply! :D

She is going to handle her parents, I would love to see Lav and Arnav's confrontation.


Coming to the last paragraph, could Lav please stop being God Father and leave everyone to their own? He is starting to irritate me but of course he is a father he obviously would like to make his children's future safe. Still I don't like him much.

Nice one N! Waiting for you to update next chapter :D
Love you<3
Edited by cheesemad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lechuarshi

yayy i'm first..

i am very much eager to read their past..
now Aman to enter into picture..😉
I think Arnav done something in past which result in hurt pain and at last breaking apart of their friendship.

What a tangled mess of relations and Friendship.. 4 of them r connected..two among them love one...one who feels for two..and one who is friend to three...ufff😆

but at the end someone is going to hurt bad..
and the sad part is that we know who that someone..

Lav is strolling here and there...Inbestigasion karega padi..😆

Cont soon and thanxs 4 pm..

Really vry busy wid projects sry if I miss to comment u...in future.😊


Lechu 🤗

Since u were first I will reply to u first ...
First up send me a buddy request ..I don't have u in my PM list

Second lol it looks tangled doesn't it but don't worry its not that messy ..and I am there to simplify it ..

Just have faith and read and comemnt and love Arhi 😉

Good luck with ur projects but I better see u around here ..ok my story is incomplete without ur comments 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the PM.
As expected Arnav' was at fault in the past. Now eager to know what did he do to lose his friendship. I felt bad for him in this update. At present he doesn't have anyone to confide. Hope Anjali comes soon. The plot is thickening. Look forward to read further.

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