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mohabbat_bs thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi saby,

wow i came for 1 update n i got 2 thx a lot

i liked d way masi n doc tried to reason with bani n jai

both the parts r very well penned.

hey but i wanted a little more of kabir and as MT said i was too wonderin how cum jai din protest when bani was takin kabir with her i mean he married her for kabir na n he fought with her to keep him at the start of the story so how cum he was quiet when she left with him

love
benazir
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sabby Massi 😃 😆 ...loved the way you portrayed the conversation between Mcdreamy (by the way he sounds like an ice cream sundae from Mcdonalds 😆 ) and our very own idiot Jai Walia 😡 (ghada kahin ka).

The manner in which Bani is thinking about this entire matter is so very different from the way Jai is thinking and reacting. Her take on the entire matter shows heartache and sorrow while Jai is still being himself-a Jackass. Loved the way Mcdreamy gave it to him, specially when he said "well had I not been engaged to be married myself, I would have ensured Bani didn't end up with a loser like you." he was also right that with Bani around, Jai was losing his power on making all decisions and that affected his ego.. 😡 hence making him shun her...Mcdreamy's analysis on Jai's thinking was right to the point. I just wonder when will Jai learn 😕 I just hope Jai stops his "oh pity me mode" and gets into serious thinking before he loses out the best person to come into his life and spends the rest of his lifetime wallowing in regret.
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Posted: 18 years ago
"God gave men both a pen*s and a brain, but unfortunately not enough blood supply to run both at the same time. That is why we have men like you who give the rest of us a bad name," snapped McDreamy.

^^Now that line cracked me up! I couldnt stop laughing... 😆 😆.. Go Dreamy, tell him! Ugh this Jai is making me mad. I really wonder how he is going to be redeemed. But I trust ya Saaby, you'll make him better.. or I atleast hope you will! Hehheee, Dreamy takes Massi's spot now 😆. Hopefully it'll get into Jai's brain...

Where is my lil tyke?? 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago

Sheen huny, kahan ho tum yaar.........trust me when i put that line down i was laughing like a mad woman too, my hubby was wondering kya hua, till i told him, and he was like 😆 😆 😆 we'll talk about this tonight.

now i am really scared, have killed JW's character so badly, i better be able to redeem him, but not like mayi did 😆

as for your little tyke.......he's there yaar, being protected by his Mama, enjoying masi's and the rest of the gang's attention, putting up a show for his daddy...don't worry, he'll make his entry in the next update

and now for the big question as to how come jw let bani take Kabir.........see friends, the way i see it, JW is a jerk, period, he knows Bani has no where to go, he knows she is at Masi's, was hardly able to put two ends together for herself and Kabir, and now is preggy again.......toh jayegi kahan. he is just throwing a tantrum now, footage kha raha hain, wants to have his space, his peace of mind without bani, so he didn't mind her taking kabir too, becoz everytime he saw kabir he would be reminded of bani......

once his mourning period is over, he'll go claim his heir apparent........itna bhi dayavan nahin hain apna walia 😆

lekin main hoon na.......fikar not, actually please fikar, becoz i have no clue what to do now 😆 better get back to Saby Masi........she is the antaryami.......wohi raasta dikhayegi

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Sabs,

just read both part 41 and 42,just fabalous.truly amazing.the way you have protrayed both Jai and Bani's conversation,truly beautiful.Kabir is so cute, I miss him.hope they get to talk at the dinner,this is getting so interesting,lovin it. 😊


preet 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: mistletoe

That wasn't boring at all, Saby!

thanks MT, u seem to be in a very generous mood with me these days 😆

The conversation between Dreamy and JW is kind of a parallel to the conversation between Massi and Bani! Only that the maturity levels of JW and Bani are poles apart....

yeah becoz bani's brains are in the right place, where as jw........i guess u know where 😆

But good to see that everyone around has enough brains and heart to see who is being shallow, selfish and totally egoistical!🤢

bhagwaan made one namoona like jw, kaafi hain

Really liked how Mcdreamy showed the mirror to JW and let him know what a Royal jerk he has been...even though the man has too much ego to ever own up to his mistakes. More fool him😡😡😡

u r being too lenient, u should read some of the gaalis the guy gets, i can't stop laughing my head off 😆😆

Btw, the whole scene of JW and the Doc playing Basketball while talking😳 Very well written indeed!👏 The way you write visualizes the whole scenario very nicely!

thankoooo, McDreamy is my.........haiiiiii, mujhe sharam aa rahi hain.......😆 anything he does is heavenly

"As I see it, love is the feeling that enables a woman to sing while she once again mops up the clean floor after her lover or her husband has walked across it in his dirty boots for the nth time."

Beautiful definition of a woman's love!👏👏👏

that is what love means to me......so all u women who hate jhadoo katka, don't gun for me 😆

Was missing Bani in this part...

masi ne itna bheja fry kiya uska, she needed a break

You are really bringing in the updates super fast and we hope to see the next part soon!

am just too tied up with baby, her school and now my in-laws are coming down........but i'll try and keep up as much as i can

PS: I so missed Kabir and his 'Ere is Man?' in this update! He is such a sweetheart😳 Can totally picture him; chubby, tomato cheeks and such an angel!😊

u described him exactly the way i picture him......he is the best character i ever ever created

Btw, I was a little surprised at how JW let go of Kabir so easily...For some reason, I thought and hoped that he would atleast put up a fight for his son

i explained that in another note........hopefully u'll read it, otherwise mods will chase me for quoting again

all said and done thank u so much for your comments, i don't know what to say........esp since they come from u 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
😉

Der Aaye, Durust Aaye....😉 I should have started on this addiction of reading FF much earlier!😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
Saby Baby just caught up with your update. Fab as ever. Dahling you just busted a myth for me. I always thought that male locker room talk revolved around
1.The cup size of the new babe-next-door.
2. Who scored how many times in the last week/night
3. Who's doing whose wife 😉
Mcdreamy actually made real observations. Mighty impressed with the man. 👏
BTW have a suggestion for dimwit Jai. When, if ever, it dawns on him light a bulb above his head a la Big Moose in Archies comics. Or maybe he could jump out of the tub a la Archimedes yelling 'Eureka, Eureka' and run buck naked to Maasi's house to claim Bani. What say??
Somali
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Posted: 18 years ago
The update was wonderful(I pasted this line directly from Ms Word, My genius brains!)
Derek is such a wonderful man, he is so understandable. Just a request, if you can just avoid those Love triangles between B-J-and any of the Baani's ex-BFs. It will makes matter worst as it will hurts the ego of a person(Jai, in this case) instead of bringing the realization of the situation. I requested this b'coz reading the past few pgs, there were a few post about Dereck triangle which is now not possible. But then the other two are, so I thought of writing to you.
Waiting for the next update.
With Love,
Shiya

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Posted: 18 years ago

Simi............fanbloody tastic 😆 thank u my dear, i thought only i come up with words like too mucking fuch etc, tum toh ek kadam aagay nikal gayi........no wonder we are SS's 😉

Even i think the line..........."I think men who have a pierced ear are better prepared for marriage. They've experienced pain and bought jewelry." is a classic............and so very true..........experience se bol rahi hoon 😆 not mine, not mine, before people start jumping to conclusions

As for McD and Poo..........yaar, when he was single and ready to mingle u were busy playing Mommy, toh Poo ka setting kara diya.........she is my other chahiti 😆

God bless true friends…they truly know when to pick you up, when to give u a shoulder to cry on and when to kick you ass!! 😉 😆 😆 Amen to that

Kya yaar, what's all this lecture shecture comment…this is a very maturely written ff, not a filmy treatise or a Mills n Boon story..so why apologise for it? Samajhne waale samajh gaye, jo naa samjhe who anadi hain

Thanks hun for your vote of confidence......now i need not worry........ab chahe sar phoote ya tang, main toh aise hi likhoongi......atleast when the story demands it 😆

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Somali, happy to bust anything for u my dear.......like I said Saby Masi and her gyaan are kuch hut ke and so are her characters. I will definitely keep ur suggestion in mind 😆 Big Moose used to be one of my fav's after Jughead........imagine poor Masi seeing her munna with nothing on his tun badan 😆

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Mistletoe.......I personally thought Massi was really cool in the last update. Loved the portrayal of her understanding and compassion, minus any melodrama. The interaction between Massi and Bani was very natural and heartfelt!

Thanks MT, some sweeties tried to make me feel guilty for spreading so much wisdom around 😆 they wanted 'action' 😆 but it is refreshing to see that the veterans have no qualms about it.

ShiyaNasreen29, sweety don't worry, i am not in favor or triangles, atleast here.......so rest assured no such thing will happen, unless and until i get into a destructive mood like mayi's creatives 😆



Edited by sabsj - 18 years ago

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