LOVING HER WAS RED- A Manan ff Updated (DEKHO DEKHO KAUN AAGAYA) PG64 - Page 8

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LOVING HER WAS RED (part 6B)

Recap: cabini and Manti leaving for college

Manik's p.o.v

We reached college mukti was so damn excited that she hopped out of the car and then she was busy searching for cabir, I left her there and parked the car, reached to the corridor where dhruv was waiting for me, we both shared a friendly hug and dhruv said "So all set? Ready for some masti?"

"Ofcourse, aaj toh facchass are gone" said I and gave an evil smirk

We heard a voice from behind, "Hieee baby" and I knew it was none other than alya and they began to start there hugging and holding hands vala romance... I coughed and said "uhu uhu, listen guys we r in clg so please cntrl" they heard me and stopped alya excused herself frm us...and I was lyk thank god! Now we can focus on teasing d facchaass... we were looking at the end of the corridor and a chomu type guy entered in with a bag pack on his back, spects on his eyes...looks like a nerd... and I signalled dhruv dat we found our frst bakra

(Guys I want u ppl to imagine adhish khanna as the nerd guy, if u've watched Pyaar tune kya kiya ep04 s4 toh u can see tht how cute he looked and acted...so am including him in my story)

"I called him hey you nerd, come over here...Abee idhr udhr kya dkh raha hai yaha aa" said I and tht guy came towards us,it was written on his face ke he was damn scared but who cares... "so what's ur name?" Asked I

"ADHISH KHANNA" said the nerd

"Oohh, Adhish g chlo apne seniors ko salute karo, tumhe kisi ne sikhaya nahi?" Said dhruv

"But mai aisa q karunga, please mujhe jane dijiye" said the nerd wid fear written on his face

"Oye zaban ladane kaha tha humne tujhe? Nai na chal ab tujhe punishment milegi, toh chal ab sunn jo bhi iss corridor me pehle entry maarega tu, tu use kiss krega wether it be a girl or a guy.." said I

"Ye,ye aap kya bol rahe ho mai aisa nahi kar skta please mujhe jane do" said the nerd I was irritated by him now

"Oye sunn zyada baate mat kr aur jo bola hai vo kar varnaaa" said dhruv

"Okay, but promise aap mujhe iske baad chod doge"said the nerd

"Abhi tu jaake karega ya nai?" Said I

"Acha okay, okay" said the nerd

And a girl entered checking her books in her bag in a white kurti and blue jeans,her hairs were covering her face and then she looked up only one thng came out of my mouth after looking at her "oh! Freak, nandini" tht nerd kissed her suddenly on her cheek, she was shocked and she stood still, the very next moment cabir came in and punched the nerd, for the first time I was happy with the entry of cabir by the way what a punch was that...dhurv came in btwn cabir and the nerd but cabir's anger was lyk crossing the boundaries he was about to punch dhruv when I came in and hold his hand...

End of p.o.v

Nandini's p.o.v

I entered the corridor of the college and a guy kissed me I was lyk waaatt? And he got punched by my bodyguard (cabir) the fight was growing and the person came in and began to punch bhai...it was none other than the Casanova..aargghh he was the last person on my list to whom I wanna see when am about to die...wait is he evn on my list?...arghh! That's not imp now I need to stop them...I came in btwn bhai and tht bamboo stick...they both stopped...mukti and alya too entered and separated them...

"What the hell is this happening?" We heard a voice and turned around to see the owner of the voice and it was the principal...aiyappaa lyk srsly? Frst day aur aissaaa... ahhh! "All 7 of u in my cabin now" he shouted

Bhai and manik gave a dead glare to each other all of us entered into the cabin...

"Oh! Look whose here my two favorites" said the principal

I chuckled listening tht
" the college haven't evn started its frst class and we are witnessing ur fights, u dont get enough of yourselves right?"

"Sir he started first"said the spects guy

"Shut up, now u all are going to have detention of two hours for two days here in the college"said the princi

And we all were pissed hearing tht

"Are u all deaf? Or u haven't understand what I said?" Asked the principal...

"What?" We all said in unison

"Say yes that u r going to attain the detention class" ordered the princi

We said "yes" slowly

"Out all of u" said he and we left

I was avoiding that bamboo stick (Manik) cuz the last time I was friendly with him, I was about to loose cntrl on myself..so I decided to stay away from him...I was busy thinking when mukti shook me by shoulders and asked "Oh hello, lala land se vapas aagyi toh chale class me?" I simply nodded, "Um...Mukti sunn idhr aa" said the bamboo stick who was standing 10 steps far away from me... mukti asked me to move and she left, alya was busy with the guy who is always seen with manik (dhruv)...so I was walking alone when bhai catched my hand and said "listen, sOrrY yarr mai tera college ka first day spoil nahi krna chahta tha, but I promise u will be happy by the afternoon time...just wait I have a surprise for uh " I was lyk surprise on d frst day of college what can it be ah! Its a surprise ryt I will get to knw yah so chill...I smiled and said "okay, so lets get going into the class"

"Yah just wait let mukti come" said bhai
End of p.o.v

Meanwhile manik and mukti's convo

Mukti: kya hai bhai?
Manik: listen am sorry for that fight woh cabir was about to punch dhruv and I cannot handle that

Mukti: maine aapko kuch bola ki aapne aisa q kiya ya kuch b? Nahi na so chill

Manik:love u fr dis...acha lstn vo um..nan...ahhh! Kuch nahi

Mukti: bhai aapko nai lgta ke aap aaj kal ye 'um.. vo..nan' bohot use kr rahe hai...seedha bolo na

Manik: vo nandini...u knw mujhe accha nahi lag raha I mean I want to just talk to her...for that night..

Mukti: oohh...so u wanna apologize?

Manik: helloo pagal hai kya Manik Malhotra never apologize to any one..

Mukti: Acha toh phir q baat karni hai?

Manik: vo..vo bass yuhi ..lstn mai nahi chahta ke vo kuch wrong signal le meri uss harkat ka

Mukti: Acha dont worry I will talk to her..but u dont come near her..I will handle this my way..and yes remember 'uske kareeb mat aana, she is not like other girls'

Manik: yah wat evr..

Mukti: ab chale to class?

Manik : haan u go am coming

Manik's p.o.v

Ye mukti ko kaise smjhau ke I want to talk...but wait she was ignoring me yes she was ignoring me but y? Obviously u duffer to avoid talking to uh na...but mujhe baat karni hai...wait mukti said na vo baat karegi
Then y tu q baat krna chahta hai? God! This is too complicated...

I was brought out my trance when dhruv waved his hand in front of me and said to move towards the class...I was about to enter the class whn I got stuck with her (nandini) at the door, the length of the door was too short that only one person at a time can enter in...she was continuously trying to push her self in when suddenly our hands touched and we were lost in ech othrs eyes...Muktiwas standing behind us and also was noticing all this, she coughed and said "may I help u?" Our eye lock was broken and some how I manged to move back and let her in... I entered the class after her and took a seat beside dhruv..where as alya and nandini were sitting together in the middle row and mukti n cabir infront of them...

End of p.o.v

Nandini p.o.v

I came in after he moved back and took a seat beside alya...the professor came in started the class, I wasn't able to concentrate remembering the scene which happened few seconds ago ...the moment our hands touched and the same electric shock passed through me that time...we had an eye lock which was broken by mukti...he was too much to handle for me...I decided to stay away from him but it looks like every single thing in this world has taken an oath to put me with him in such embarrassing situations...aiiyaappaa thanq for this haan...and yes thanx fr evn not letting cabir bhai notice this incident...
Vaise wat would be his sweet sa surprise?

End of p.o.v

Precap: a new entry
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Hope u guys liked and enjoyed it stay tuned for knowing the new entry 😉 and yes for pm in futures buddy me till then see ya stay blessed

Amazing update yaar and also pm me

Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next soon

Fab update very well written
nd plz try to write manan scenes
thanks for PM
update next part soon

Superb update dea. ..

Originally posted by: mishshergill

one thng came out of my mouth after looking at her "oh! Freak, nandini" tht nerd kissed her suddenly on her cheek, she was shocked and she stood still

(Super cannery ahit!!!!)

the very next moment cabir came in and punched the nerd, for the first time I was happy with the entry of cabir by the way what a punch was that...

(Wohooo!!!! Kya entery ...I can imagine that...Cabir hottiee with his gogs on )

I came in btwn bhai and tht bamboo stick...

( did she just called manik a bamboo stick ...urghhh)

Oh! Look whose here my two favorites" said the principal

I chuckled listening tht

( yeh principle piece hai...)

Ye mukti ko kaise smjhau ke I want to talk...but wait she was ignoring me yes she was ignoring me but y? Obviously u duffer to avoid talking to uh na...but mujhe baat karni hai...wait mukti said na vo baat karegi

Awww desperate romeo

he was too much to handle for me...I decided to stay away from him but it looks like every single thing in this world has taken an oath to put me with him in such embarrassing situations...aiiyaappaa thanq for this haan...and yes thanx fr evn not letting cabir bhai notice this incident...

( manik is not a easy guy to handle sweetheart...)

Aqsa...I don't know should I point it out or not...but aiiappa is basically aii is for ma and appa is for papa...which you know...and in your story u have shown her parents alive and she kinda hate them... I don't think nandini should be adding aiiappa in her thoughts in your ff...

Soory but I read very few ffs like 2 or 3 and what ever I read I read very intently.

The update was cool...

Update soonish princess...

Love u..

Misha

hoye thanx heheh yah it took a lot to think n write n no worries thanks for correcting me well that's what I say if any thing is just incorrect point it out n let me know iam new to these so yah cool n thanx sweety .. but here I just googled this thing and found that ayyappa refers to deity which is y I used it for her self ranting .. But still thanks n love yah😉

Originally posted by: shaanmaan

Fab update very well written
nd plz try to write manan scenes
thanks for PM
update next part soon

thank u so much for the comment it means alot n abt manan scenes I believe patience is virtue😉 their scenes will happen soon probably in the next update I guess n trust me on this u will love it though am nt good in romance just will give it a try