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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies


^^ what and i thought u wrote it😡



Am catching my ears please i am sorry.. If u wud have been on whatsapp i would have sing for you to compensate but please m sorry
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiaraMaNanholic



Am catching my ears please i am sorry.. If u wud have been on whatsapp i would have sing for you to compensate but please m sorry

its ok not angry just teasing..
give it wen u can!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Starsfireflies


its ok not angry just teasing..
give it wen u can!😆



M sorry
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
u also stop saying sorry!!
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uff khuda😃😃 yea larki to mar he dalyge hmy lol😆😆😆😆😆 uf inta b naughty b koi oo skta ha😉😉😉😉 uff yr jst cnt w8 for d chapter plzz update its soon man as i really hate promos😃😃😃😉😉😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiaraMaNanholic



Why do i feel i m going to get chopped by you guys cause I didn't write the update as no elevator no lappy n now i will sit n if I complete i will write.. Rotten tomatoes eggs everything is okay with me sorry


WTH!! U said u had written d update jst to tease us!!!?? U will nevr stop teasing us kiaraaa!!! Its confirmed nw...nw plzzz dont say srry haan... 😆
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WTH!! U said u had written d update jst to tease us!!!?? U will nevr stop teasing us kiaraaa!!! Its confirmed nw...nw plzzz dont say srry haan... 😆



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 54:

After marriage condition of a house is worst than a garbage can.. Mess created here and there takes lot to clean but than Am's insisted the kids to continue with their packing as she knew that they had a flight in next 3 hours.

Now one was aware of the plan of CaVya except MaNan as they forced them to understand their situation. Manik and Nandini cannot miss this chance on being on sweet romantic prehoneymoon with their friends but if they had to decide this than they would have opt for CaVya to spend it alone but CaVya owe that to everyone as they knew all that these ppl did for them and moreover they knew it would become awkward for them to go alone...

Cabir was looking at everyone who were shocked on hearing what cabir said just now except Manik as he knew about this. Cabir, "guys chill it's just that we want you all to be with us for the celebration and ya even Karan you have to come with us". Mukti, "Cabir I am okay with star family but why Karan? We hardly know him moreover we can't invade him in our family". Nandini, "Mukti, calm down he is Manik's cousin so we can trust him or else Manik would have never agreed to it". Mukti knew Manik always thinks about fab 5 before taking the decision but somewhere she was not upset with the decision of taking Karan but she was upset about the feelings she is getting for him cause she always thought whoever comes near her eventually either hurt her or leave her alone to suffer and now she has lost all the strength to face any of this stuffs. Karan saw a tensed Mukti, "guys if she doesn't want it's okay. Manik it's alright". Mukti, "no its fine you can come".

Karan is a big time flirt but when he saw Mukti for the first time he felt it was different it was not an infatuation it was maybe what ppl called love? But he wanted to clear those doubts he wanted to be sure if she is the one cause somewhere he thought he cannot hurt her and moreover can't see her hurt.

Manik saw him looking at her, "Karan Mukti has already suffered a lot. No dirty games with her or else I will smash your face I won think twice for doing that even if you are my brother". Karan, "Manik it's not the same with Mukti as I feel with others but I will maintain distance and fist try to clear my head that is engulfed by some foreign feelings". Manik, "guys chale packing done?" Everyone nodded a yes in unison...

At airport, Cabir, Manik, Karan, Dhruv gestured each other and removed an ipod from their bags and handed over yo the girls and asked them to listen to the songs at the highest volume and told them they are gonna get blind now by the cloth. A confused Nandini said, "Manik first of all hum yeh q kare and secondly yeh airport wale hume nikal denge". Everyone laughed at her innocence and she gave what look to all of them. Manik came to her and held her from her waist and brought her close to him. Nandini, "Manik what are you doing? we are at airport". Manik, "and you think I care?" Nandini "shut up and answer me". Manik, "okay to firstly as we have planned a surprise for u girls and secondly its Manik Malhotra's private jet so no queries okay".

Nandini face palmed herself for forgetting that she was the Gf of the great Manik Malhotra she then agreed and they had the ear phone in their ears and a blindfold and they sat in the place. There was time for them to reach when Nandini saw Manik was sleeping holding her hand she wanted to use the washroom she swiftly moved his hand and when to the washroom she was about to enter when someone pulled her and before she can shout her lips were trapped in his.. She knew it was him so she reciprocated but as soon as she came to know where they were she broke the kiss. Nandini, "Manik tumtoh so rahe the na?" Manik, "I have got long legs I can reach faster hahaha". Nandini, "shut up Manik we are not alone and on top of that we are in this washroom. Like seriously you can't resist yourself till we reach?" Manik made a cute pout saying no and then he asked "why did you remove your blind fold?" Nandini, "manik flight is already in air how would I know now and my ears were hurting so but now I will wear it again par yahan se chalo". She was opening the door when he pulled her back. "Not at all first let me kiss you properly only then". Nandini knew it was useless saying anything to him so she accepted her defeat and landed her lips on his but little did they know that their passionate kiss was about to get interrupted by the newly wedded DULHA. Cabir, "guys are you done? Cause I really wanna use the washroom". Manik felt like killing him that time for killing the moment but seeing her girl flushing red he kept his forehead on her to calm her down. "Cabir tu wahan bhi aisa hi karega?", manik said coming out of washroom he continued, "nai agar aisa karnewala hai toh batade main tujhe yahin se wapas bhej dunga pakka". Cabir, "shut up jo chiz jis kam ke liye bani ho wahikarnachahiye, he said while going inside and stopped at door and continued, and Nandini if you don't want another teasing session when you reach at your seats then fix your lipstick it is already spread". Manik, "han thik hai tu apna kaam kar hum apna kar denge" he said after seeing her flushing hard. Cabir, "bhalai ka toh zamana hi nahi raha hai". Manik, "tu jaata hai ya tere sath bhi andar aau?" Cabir, "chi chi mana main gay hun par Manik, I am married now and you have a girlfriend". Manik was about to hit him when he closed the door he saw Nandini laughing and was just admiring her.

Nandini saw him staring, "look kya de rahe ho jo mess create kia hai use clear karo". Manik, "what?" Nandini pointed over the smudged lipstick. Manik gave an acha look to her and then came near to her and was about to kiss her when she kept her hand and said, "Not again clean with your hand don't act smart okay". Manik made a fake pout and cleaned her face properly and they got back to their seat. The flight landed in a while and all the girls were about to remove the blindfold when boys said them not so early. It was night and the stay they chose was breathtaking hence, they decided it would be best to make them see that.

"What the f**k we are at Maldives? Guys this was the best surprise ever", said Mukti as she and the other girls opened the blindfold from their eyes. It was Manik's plan to blind the girls as he wanted to see their reaction. Nandini jumped upon Manik getting herself tangled with him like a sweet bacha.. She was on his waist her legs were tied on his back and her hand snaked his neck. He was shocked at her this reaction but chucking all that he held her firmly by her bottoms and she kissed his forehead. He whispered in her ears, "I know you are impatient to be with me in the bed after looking at the place. I wouldn't mind but I think you would certainly mind me kissing you passionately in front of everyone". Nandini blushed harder...

Cabir, "Nandini tum itne main hi agar itna blush kar rahi ho I doubt tab tumhara kya hoga jab you will see your villa and the special room in it". Nandini was hell confused when her thoughts were interrupted by Alya "I doubt baby hum CaVya ke honeymoon pea aye hai ya MaNan ke? She said cuddling Dhruv.. Cabir, "Alya jab tum apna villa dekhogina to tumhe yeh lagega ke tum apne honeymoon pe aai ho Manik has made it sure that couples don't suffer". Nandini saw a sad Mukti and gestured everyone to look at her. Manik, "guys but I envy her yar" pointing Mukti, like seriously she will enjoy the entire room on its own huh bad". That bought a smile on her face. Mukti, "guys itna tension mat lo m okay and waise bhi ek acha kam hua karan ko lane ka that he will at least give me company right Karan?" Karan, obviously now these couples they will to bore us". All of them chuckled at his statement and then they thought of getting in the room and retire and meet in an hour for dinner.

ManBir made sure that this trip is so good that it can be written in their diary of good trips.

Nandini was excited to enter their villa when Manik saw her clapping like a kid and Manik took her there and said, "this is our villa for the next seven days."

She again jumped upon Manik saying this is the best Manik closed her eyes by his hand and said there is another surprise.. our bedroom is more beautiful than this. He took her to the bedroom and on the count of three he opened her eyes. The look in front of her made tears rolled down her cheek.

Bedroom of MaNan:

Manik, "hey what's wrong? You dint like it?" Nandini dint had words to describe it she just threw herself on him and rammed his lips and the next moment they were on bed. Manik dint expected this but then he knew that this made her happy. They were kissing each other like there was no tomorrow and Manik started unbuttoning her shirt and he was about to enter his hands in her shirt when Knock Knock. Their moment was disturbed and Manik was like as expected. They straighten their selves and went to open the door. Mukti was standing their MaNan got worried about her and seeing them worried Mukti said, "chill Manik I guess our bags got exchanged I just came to take that" MaNan calmed and changed the bags and promised to meet in 30 minutes at dinner spot and assured they will come to take her with them. She left and MaNan went to get fresh.

CaVya were about to enter when Cabir said, "it might be of your choice but I know you will like it". Navya, "Cabir, you got me here that is more than enough for me". Cabir just hmmed to her answer and took her to the room.


Navya was overwhelmed seeing the beauty of that room he just hugged Cabir for this and Cabir broke the hug saying, "I m glad you liked it but there is another surprise can we get ready?" Navya agreed and asked him to change first. Cabir came in plain white shirt and jeans and Navya went to change and came out in white top and shorts. She was perfect.


Rest of the family got ready and MaNan took Mukti with them and reached at the dinner venue which left the girls speechless. They were in love with the boys more now they can't imagine what all they did for them.

Dinner:

Alya, " guys this is phenomenal like seriously you guys made it worth I am overwhelmed". Nandini, "seriously like thank you for everything".

They sat for the dinner, DhruLya, MaNan Mukti and Karan. Mukti, "yar Cabir aur Navya kaha hai?" Manik, "ahh they are on their post marriage date. Cabir wanted it to be special." Mukti, "Cabir is responsible now". They started their dinner which included every cuisine.

Navya, "Cabir baki sab kah hai?" Cabir, "ah we are on date Navya" Navya was touched and then the location made her go gaga..


Navya was so amazed seeing the location in front of her for a romantic post marriage date. Cabir was busy admiring her she was looking exactly how a married women will look.. Being a bit western wearing a short and a top but not forgetting the vermillion on her forehead and the Punjabi Churas in her hand that covered half of her forearm.. Cabir missed the kaliras she was wearing at the wedding which were shed on Nandini during the ceremony giving everyone a chabce to tease her saying she would be the next to get married. She was looking dazzling and he was captured by her looks. May be he was falling fir her but nothing was sure. "It is the best place i have ever been thank you for making it beautiful", she said.

[Note: please imagine this look of Navya with the above one ]

The location was so romantic and so was the date and they loved it. Everyone retired to the room except MaNan. Manik sneaked her from there.

Nandini: Manik hum kaha jaa rah hai sabse chup kar?

Manik: Nandini tum chup chap chal nahi sakti na?

Nandini: okay but is it worth seeing?

Manik: you will go mad baby I promise.

Nandini:

Manik took her to the beach and now she was crazy looking at that. She has always dreamed of and has listened of such beach but she never felt it was real. Shouted on the top of her voice, "Manik, the starry beach oh shit its real I never it would be its like..." she was interrupted by Manik, "like millions of fireflies" Nandini, "no like your stars has come to earth to enlighten our love"

Nandini: Manik thank you so much. Can I go there?

Manik: of course you can..

Nandini on beach:

Manik was watching her playing with the water that was shining in her hand. He made it more special by giving her the best view. They were standing on the sand when he asked her to move Nandini moved in confusion and asked him what to which he said look down.


And what the sand stored for her was beautiful she quickly took a snap and her eyes was all teary. They moved on she complained of her legs that they are paining Manik lifted her on his back.

Nandini was looking like a baby when Manik was carrying her at his back like piggybacking. She was moving his legs making herself heavy on Manik but he was adoring her cute antics but Manik was in some different mood. He with one jerk made her come on his front he held her by his bottoms and he placed his lips on her... Kissing it with an intensity she would not imagine but she reciprocated with the same intensity moving her hands in his hairs... they lied don on the beach and continued their kissing and broke when they were out of breathe. Suddenly Nandini got up and made a heart on beach and wrote Manik and Nandini in it and it glowed. They hugged each other and were back to the room. Manik lifted her and started teasing her by kissing her neck, cheeks,chin when Nandini said, "Manik what stop it kya kar rahe ho?" Manik, "finishing the unfinished task".

Nandini: unfinished task?

Manik: what we left on the beach.

Nandini understood his intention and his need as she was in that need too. She wanted to show him she was so happy to be with him and whatever he did for her.

He dropped her on bed and started undressing her...

Note: let the teasing continue...

Who want the next update...

Jaldi bolo...

Precap:

Unfinished task...

Morning at Maldives...


Edited by kiaraMaNanholic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i dont wanna unres😡
lovely update!!😉
loved how manik went all protective over mukti and scolded Karan😆
Then manan washroom romance awesomeness personified😳
Lovely how cabir teased them!!😃
Then again cabir teased saying lipstick smudged😆
nandu jumped on manik!!
I liked mukti interrupting manan romance (how can someone leave them alone)😛
Then cavya date😊
After that manan sneaking away!!😆
complete the unfinished task😡
waiting!!
I liked mukti and karan's thoughts too btw..
Edited by Starsfireflies - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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