NiBir SS - Finding Kabir (COMPLETED; Chapter-6 UPDATED on Pg-19) - Page 2

Originally posted by: arshiss

lily u r super fast..😆

interesting story..

continue soon

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Nice story👏 Wish you were one of CVs of this show too..we could have got to see this sensible track!!

Originally posted by: poo10

Lol...leaving for london without passport 😆
Jst wanna knw wat happens next 😃

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Thank you ...😊

CV's of the show gave us good scenes too... we don't know the constraints behind them screwing up their own story...

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Well I hope I post my comments before u update ur story again😆 cz u write like a superfast express😆

I love the enthusiasm with which u write😃 U keep showering the readers with updates of ur story one after the other and it is blessing for us 😳😃

Coming to the story, it is surely a wonderful read. A very different perspective on the whole scenario and u have kept the readers in suspense😆😳😉

A very original concept with an interesting story line 👍🏼. Love the pace of the story😳👍🏼

That last sentence was such a cliffhanger😎

Eagerly waiting to read more

Continue soon😳

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

kabira ko jeen mil gya kya... bina passport k london ja rha h... khi kidnap yo nhi ho gya

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

I agree.. I am now relaxing seeing old NIBIR scenes only.. But i was talking about the nonsensical tracks in last 2-3 weeks.. they could have corrected it anytime like you depicted. It was never late- but they are hell bent on dragging till last moment. Sorry for going off topic.. Once again, I like this story..Please continue soon.. Now only NIBIR stories can help us revive that wonderful magic😊