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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful chapter
asad was so cute in the office scene..
love asya moments in the farmhouse especially at the lake
shocking last past..who was that?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just one word for the update
PERFECT👏⭐️
Wonderfully written
love love love it
each and every part was superb
enjoyed reading it
but who the hell was that jealous now😡

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Rabba inna sara romance😃😃😃
Adi Srash love u hai🤗
Asad ke monologues were nice
he is changing & he realised that
d dinner scene was fab bechara apni hi wife ko lejane main kitna dar raha tha 😆😆
Ayaan is so naughty
Farmhouse main Asya fall & catch was MA😳
Zoe ne shirt di thi toh Asad ne bhi toh suit dena tha na
Zoya akele kya karne gayi thi outhose over excited bacchii😵
I loved d whole date part it was very sweet dono wanted 2 hear ILU but dono ne nahi bola
end main kbaab main haadi kon aa gya😡😡
PS-Adi ki bachi sabse achi pic toh tune dali hi nahi bhulakad😲
PSS- 1 rqst hai tum log itne time gap ke baad updt karte ho main bhul jati hon kabhi kabhi last part main kya hua so plz 1 chota sa recap de diya karo na plz jaise serials main hota hai😳😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful well written part
like it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wwooow...

Awesome .

So happy to see asad like this...trying to get his happiness. ..

Ohh god. Misunderstanding again gonna happen I guess...
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG got no words to describe how beautiful n well written this update was
Loved it to the core!!!!
It was surely an asyalicious update n just too good...
Aww asad is changing n he has actually changed all because of zoya...
Asya surely make the best couple ever...
Loved the part where asad was remembering the moments n smiling...
His realisation was also very well written..
Ayaan is the mischievous one
He knew what asad was upto n didn't leave a chance to tease him
Najma is just too cute blushing n getting all red like a tomato
Just love the khan family really cute n sweet small family...
The farmhouse idea wasn't bad asad miyaan
Zoya is just zoya love how she brings out the best in asad...
The rain part was really nice n cute
Love the way asad was consoling her with his soothing words n also to take her attention off that incident he told her bwt the secret place..
Both gifting each other sumthn was just too sweet n cute
Loved all asya's parts specially the date one where he confessed thru his song n how he planned the surprise for her was just too sweet...all her fav foods n then him confessing bwt how is life changed was wonderfully written...
The whole update was just mindblowing n awesome
Loved every bit of n eager to read more
Do continue asap
Thanks a lot for the pm Aditi n Srashti
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Posted: 10 years ago
I became fan of ur writing
Amazing update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
Thank you so much for this Long part.😊
It was Super Part.😊
ASad(KSG) Changed so much because of Zoya,it was so Interesting.😊
The Shirt and Coffee part was so Nice.😊
The feelings of Asad(KSG) thinking about Zoya Cute.😊
The way Asad(KSG) convinced his family members to took Zoya with him to Farm House was so Nice.😊
Rain Part was so Cute.😊
The way Asad(KSG) consoled Zoya when she was stunk in Dark room was so Nice.😊
Asad(KSG) took Zoya for Date,it was so interesting.😊
The whole Date part was so Beautifully explained,I Loves it.😳
Who was behind ASYA(KABHI) wanted to take their happiness away,I'm so scarring.
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well written part and it was a fantastic one!!! 👏

Thank you so much for the pm!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
What a asyalicious part...loved it
d start scene pf d blue shirt ws cute esp d way zoya made asad wear it...n of course d extra sweet coffee fr now..
thn asad's realisation...I cn understand how embarrassing n awkard ws it fr him to prevent others accompanying thm ti d farm house...
d farm house scenes wr all very beautiful...n d song...just perfect...but d evil shadow in d end...hmmm

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