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Posted: 10 years ago
Haha.. Teaser padh k dirty mind full speed par daudne laga ..lol
Par koi assumption ni dena chahti... Haha
Teaser mast hai ..! Update ka intzar rahega :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am sure Arnav is dreaming naughty stuff regarding Khushi.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jduke


Bo*bs is synonym for dumb person as well 😉. If not Arjun, it can be some other guy too 😆


actually if you say Boob, then it is for a dumb person, if you say boobs, then it is meant for your tata's
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Posted: 10 years ago
It started with a hug and it ended too with a hug...one from arnav to abhey...and other from khushi to arnav...the gesture of sheer warm emotions...:)..the feel which is right there throughout the chap.,warmth.

Although have seen both sides of coin today once again...in means of society,a vast difference...but i would say either parents at this end or parents at that end...they wanted nothing but to shower care and concerns towards their children...abhey and gayatri picture perfect couple...role model for their son..the love they sharing thats wt arnav wanted between him and his lady...the easiness of arjun while replacing arnav and putting this own arms around gayatri shoulder it gives immense cool effect ...how anjali declared the news of slap...and gayatri feeling on cloud 9 for the happiness of her son...and joking about her own future safety...at the same time abhey though relieved but still having his own reservation regarding his son happiness...its all knitted beautifully in this one meet :)..
i loved the way u have always shown gayatri so understanding ..just from body language of men in her life ...she always takes desicion of butting in or not...how sensible of her ,in a way keeping quiet at times she gives beautiful picture of an understanding family here...abhey decision of not opening RGH by stepping the ladder made-up of khushi's tears..its simply fantastic...he wanted her smiles to be the reason...its mind blowing ...salute to abhey ...

shashi and garima ,they both had a tough time in tackling the so called concerned neighbours,uff...knowing how fake the care and concerns r still they had to cater the questions...its so painful..if he is there to answered the world as they think its society right to peek in at this moment of utterly private time...wt a dilemma..other end i loved the way garima makes khushi escaped from the scene...with food and water...and then the understanding between khushi and garima..the question hidden in garima's silence and the way khushi got it and answered back...that was a moment between mother and daughter...and then again the time which has made garima stubborn...accepting it the way it is...she kissing her forehead...so much pain hidden ...its like she conveying to world that...itna tersay keh pyas bhee na rahi,in true sense ...

if we say that shashi garima unable to give proper education to khushi payal and they did many wrongs here obviously due to the circumstances...but today when i see payal and khushi convo...i can say one thing ...they did one big right,they gave both girls good nurturing ..a family...in time of pain ,shoulders to each other...i felt tears when payal was saying i don't know how it feels to have baby and to lose baby ...having companion and then lose him...for payal i would say...how sad it is to see society depriving a person to even dream with open eyes...

arnav arjun and anjali...there coming up together is always a pleasure to read...as thats the ties of fun and laughters.,understanding..and the way u wrote it it was hilarious...cutting d***...and then comes the beautiful b*** ...LOL...and wow wow...i m sorry miss...i am engaged...it took my breath away :)...one more wow for this :)

how sweet khushi and arnav were today...i loved it when she asked about signatures and he soo wanted to be next to her and holding her face wanted to reassured her ...and u have to trust urself khushi...that was beautiful moment :)
its amazing to see agitated arnav here...he wanted to cherish together the success...and wow and wow...the first hug from khushi side although it was a friendly gesture to cheer...but that hormonal abnormal grin...hehe...deeps bauhat fit likha hay yaaar...loved it ...so much happened in one chapter...thats amazing and awesome to read :)

i am more than happy here to see u have shown khushi positive...her divorce is nothing in my eyes in front of justice to her babies...getting rid of that fake life is not to cry for ...its moment to cherish the justice ...and u bang on here,in showing that :)
Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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for the party time of the story🥳and for the new beginning😃.
TL only you have the ability to bring tears in the eyes even at the most happy moment.👏
Continuing with the trend yet again. This update defines family. How different families behave to the same news based on culture their upbringing and outlook of life. How family keeps its members pain above ones happiness. How the family protects the child from the unnecessary questions from society. How a sister tries to give strength to he sibling and moreso how a family forgives others in family👏

On one side Arnav and his clan were partying whereas on otherside Khushi was all alone on her special day. On one side the father was ready to embrass the loss of his dream for the loss of his sons Khushi on other hand a father was not even ready to embrace his own khushi. On one side the siblings did not require any censor in talking on otherside mother did not want to ask straight question. Seriously TL what a striking different families you have pictured.👍🏼

Today Abhay took the cup and i could not controlmy tears reading that part. Can imagine what would be Arnavs haal.

A job well done❤️
Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

This update is all about times of celebration with rejuvenated energies for brighter future. Entire conversation between Raizada clan is very hilarious and heartwarming. Both Abhay and Gayathri Raizada are people of values and golden heart. Their collective decision to not to open their dream hospital until Kushi is happy and her life is back on track is very poignant.

Conversation between Payal and Kushi is heartwarming as well. Payal may not have voiced her opinions a lot but she always wished for the wellbeing of her family and her confession to Kushi is very much real. Payal may not know what is companionship with a man and aftermath of losing him and joys of impending motherhood and losing babies prematurely but she can provide comforting shoulder to her little sister. I sincerely hope Payal finds her happiness with a nice man and loving family soon.


""Hate or love, you gotta deal this for life, after all you have promised me."

Dollface has no idea about what a deal she has signed up for 😉😆


Congratulations to Kushi, Dr. Rji and Deepthi for this victory 😉


Eagerly waiting for the next phase of SBH journey to unfold.





Edited by jduke - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cheers to New Beginnings

I was so ready already for "Seal the deal" with this chapter😉. But I know, falling in love with a dollface is the easy part. But, breathing life into it and dancing with it, now that's a whole lot of chapters worth. I will keep chai, pakoda and drinks on hold until then🥳.

I really loved the opening scenes and I think the hormones deserve a break after the day they had. I was interested to see how they would come and explain the court scene to Abhay and Gayatri but the superlatives of edge with horns, orchestra in the mouth, and drooling, pretty much summed it up for me😉. Abhay's thoughts triggered an involuntary salute from my end and I couldn't appreciate it enough thinking that a hospital can wait for the hearty laugh of an innocent.

Shashi and Garima's plight was an interesting one. The world that they always worried and wondered about, for once, took its time to wonder about them. It is amazing how the so called neighbors, friends and well-wishers always pick the right time to wonder about you but never care to wonder with you. But, I am finally impressed with them for showing the concern that their daughters deserve and handling the world with a shield of stubbornness. Added to that, reading Payal's words, looks like Khushi's win was not just against Karan alone. Finally, it is time that they all deserve to be happy.

Anajli and Arjun - I am interested to see where that story is headed. With Arjun's rolling with the situation and Anjali's check on every situation, they do make and interesting pair😃. I am hoping that we get to see some progress on their story too.

I have to say I was a bit disappointed at the end though. Maybe it was a direct consequence of my high expectations on the chat and talk especially on the day they nailed the case or maybe I was expecting some level of craziness from them or maybe I was expecting them to do a bit more than cherish it on the phone. Well, as I said at the beginning, I know that some waits are worth many chapters and knowing the energy and effort that you put in, the worth is never a doubt with any of your chapters.
Edited by bhavali4RR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Deepthi, another nice update.
An update filled with celebrations and with new beginnings.

Gayathri and Abhay are indeed good people and loved how Abhay said that the hospital will only reopen once Khushi finds her happiness again.
Looks like Abhay wants the ribbon cutting to be done by his Daughter-in-law. 😉

Anyways it was a very noble gesture by Abhay to take this decision.


Coming to the Gupta household, seriously whats up with these nosy neighbours!!!!!

Actually this gave me one wicked thought. 😆

I hope the Mehta's have nosy neighbours too. Imagine how their faces would be when the neighbors would have asked them were Karan was and when they would realise that he was found guilty and jailed, they could have understood what kind of people these Mehtas are and could have spoken ill about them.


Payal and Khushi's talk was emotional. So true Payal never gave her everything to some one and got betrayed in the worst possible way to understand Khushi's feelings completely. She can only sympathise with her sister which she did.

Now what next???

How will Dr R ji even meet his dollface now??? Only if he meets her regularly can he woo her, but how will that happen???


Khushi had lost everything because of our hospital. It is very cruel of us to rejoice while she mourn all her life. So then my Son, that day when YOU believe that her life is back on track with smiles and absolutely no tears, You come and tell me.

The above sentences reminded me of Suvvi suvvi song from Swati Muthyam, especially the below lines:

pattina grahanam vidichi
ne batukuna punnami pande ghadiya
vastundamma okanadu
chuustunnadu paivadu

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RsuOontkJH4[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago

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