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@.LadyHitler.

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#851

Wow! Your fic transports me to some other world! ArShi ki duniya.. Awesome update! Beautifully written!

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#852

Healing...

It was not only a dream

But a soul's silent scream

A Father's distress in extreme

A heart becoming unseam

It is a promise... a pakka promise

A promise that is concise

A Mother's love getting revitalize

In her bleeding heart hope raise

It is a little scheming

But a harmless dealing

A Sister's love leading

A heart to being its healing

It is a mighty assurance

"I will be right with you", sureness

A Nephew's simple guidance

And an innocent baby's acceptance

And they listen to each other

Always be there for one another

A Father and Mother together

Face one day at a time forever

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#853

it was amazing ... one could feel their pain ... the way you brought out their emotions was really touching ... but finally they brought it out ...
loved it..

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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#854

Oh it was so painful that i felt it when i was reading this chapter like a movie in front ofmy eyes so so nice n emotional.

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#855

Wow That was a lovely update Di

Absolutely mesmerizing with the ocean part

You had written it so descriptively which feels so real

Really liked the surfing part and their short and sweet time together

And Khushi's feelings in the FB was so touching

Anju, Sid both are really supportive

Sid is such a cute, wonderful kiddo

And Liked how ArHi is having a talk

Hopefully they resolve their issues soon and get their cute,loving kid

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just4this

@just4this

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Thank u for the update it was as usual beautiful.

Moral of the update communication is key for healthy relationship

Loved every word of it especially where both ocean become one arnav and Pacific.

Thanks dear

Ps thanks for the translation.

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#857

This was a beautiful chapter, I will confess I cried, your words so beautify portrayed their emotions.. tears are evoked for joy or pain.. whom amongst has not experienced any of this ever.

strength amidst weakness - Arnav riding the surf.. they both are each others weakness but derive strength from each other too.

healing amidst despair - when Arnav wanted to understand how Khushi coped with Bella.

happiness amidst sadness - when he addressed her as Mrs Raizada- it brings on butterflies!

hope amidst pain- the understanding that it's not his or her pain- it's ours..

I loved the line where Khushi is only looking for her ocean, her Arnav.. very apt..

The ocean waves are a testament to life, one day they are crashing against each other, yes they recede but come back to lash out again..The next day may bring clam soothing waves.. akin to our lives with our partners.. we argue and fight with those we love and also create the best memories with them too...

Their journey has more healing, pain and tears but they will weather it together- hamesha

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shubhanjli

@shubhanjli

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#858

Awesome update. Touched my heart. One of the most difficult times in Arnav and Khushi's life. Its really tough for them to forget their daughter when bella is there. And must be very hard for khushi to control during Anjali's delivery. But they both are fighters and definitely will fight this pain. May be this pain ll bring them together again.

Loved Arnav surfing😉😉 sexy sexy..

Amazing update..

Loved it.

Thanks for pm.

Edited by shubhanjli - 11 years ago

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#859

that was simply fabulous
marvellous update
u wrote it very emotionally and beautifully
arshi both are most effected mwith the loss of their pari
and the pain and loss was kept hidden in their hearts
which bring distance between them
and now i love their way of handling it
lovely and awesome