TH#1 ~Inciting Desires 2 ~ Prologue-CH-3 [Completed]

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: barsha_dash
nice prologue

Originally posted by: _Amrita_
Awesome prologue!
congratulations for awesome update😊

Originally posted by: kinjalcp87
Lovely start

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting..

Originally posted by: pran28671
awesome prologue

Originally posted by: nano123
Nice update

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003
fabb start👏
loved ttt😳

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#222

"She caressed his name as she was caressing every feature of his face by gulping her tears"

This last line of yours just had me...

This song comes in my mind after reading this .

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LVet1u-HeZQ[/YOUTUBE]

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#223

Interesting prologue.

Arshi knows each other and Khushi has been running away from Arnav and yet caressed his name with all the love.

P.S. Though you mentioned I your note still wanna clarify, that ID1 and ID2 are not related?

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Suniti 😊

Thnx and I hope you like the change as some are angry.
I just wanted the change but I guess I will bring Raizada ...ur fav back on Earth ...the ruler of hearts 😆

Hope I won't disappoint you dear

Hey dear don't change it...it is still ASR. And I can bet he will be as sexy and hot like Raizada😉.

I trust you dear.😛

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xZoyax

@xZoyax

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#225

Faiqa Why did you change Ranvir to Raizada ????, I actually kind a liked this change and knowing you , I am sure there must be a reason behind it .

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Mayvs2013

@Mayvs2013

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#226

got your PM Thanks!

very nice concept lets see how the story unfolds :)

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#227

Superb update. ..

Khushi is running from Arnav? ??

Like a Adi n khushi's friendship. .

Looking forward

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anju

@anjusr06

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#228

Awesome prologue... waiting for it to start.

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Thnx Indi😊 for taking time and making it here.

wow it must be really good that I really got a long feedback from you.

I always sees picture of IPK in a different way so be it and man like Rahim chacha can be with any good souls...because they carry this energy with them which always blend everyone in it with love, care, and innocence yet holding all the purity of hearts.

Lets see what this ASr does this time?

i admire your energy and the detailing you do. i am pretty bad with long comments... you are the expert commentator he he... but i do enjoy reading. no need to thank, i know how much energy and time writing fiction consumes, the least one can do is leave a note to say had a good time reading, meant something.